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Forbidden, now Tank Tops, COMPLETE! (Warning: StudentxTeacher)
Summary: A girl with a crush on her English teacher. A teacher with a crush on his student. It doesn't matter who you fantasize about... as long as it stays a fantasy.
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2667503/1/Tank_Tops I decided to just post the link this time and take up less space and I changed the title - but it's fourteen chapters, and COMPLETE! |
I, like, officially love you. Age difference couples. . . more specifically student and teacher couples are probably my favorites by far. I know, call me a freak, right? Ever since I read Lolita a few years ago, I've been madly infatuated with an older man (preferably a school teacher) and a younger girl. When I found out one of the radio hosts around here who is at least thirty something was dating a girl in school who he dubbed "school girl," naturally, I went absolutely insane.
I assume you've heard The Police's hit song "Don't Stand So Close To Me." It's about the student teacher romance relationship, and it would TOTALLY fit in with this story you have going here. It is rushed, yes, a little, but it sort of parallels with how Shanah is probably feeling -- rushed and mixed emotions, yanno? Holy crap, I really hope you continue this. It made my day. (Everyone must think I'm a freak now. . . XD) Keep up the AWESOME work, I'll keep checking back on this! |
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Great, cause I'd love to read it. :3 Seriously, if you haven't heard the song, you should check it out and listen to it. It's absolutely wonderful. :3
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I like it, it's very good <3
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Homg. I'm seriously in love with this! *-* I've already grown to embrace all of the character's personality's...
Your story sucks you in while you’re reading! I got so into this that I lost track of time. <3 There's no doubt that I'm going to be watching this! : D I can't even begin to tell you how much I loved this! Wonderful job. :] |
Make more!! You CAN'T just leave it that way!!!
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Thanks for reading. |
Chapters five and six updated.
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Hmm, you've written the story very well. I didn't remotely lose interest in it.
I'm loving the conflict Shanah has and how you don't exactly give physical descriptions. You are more focused on the emotional aspects. Although there was an inconsistency of when you switched internal dialog. I know how you wrote this in 3rd person but you seemed focus mainly on Shanah's train of thought. When you splashed in Mr. Bryant's internal conflict it just seemed to shift the story a little bit. Not sure if that was intentional or not. I also gotta question Mrs. Bryant's...or Ally's Judgement. I'm guessing Shanah's 14 [freshman and she's 12 years younger to Mr Bryant's 26] and I'm sure Ally knows this....So why would she request Shanah to keep her husband company? Requesting a virginal 14 year old girl to keep your husband company...hmm... Can't wait to read the continuation. =] |
Updated & completed. :3
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