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Jaded Geisha 01-28-2008 08:48 PM

Song
 
Hmmm I wrote this song after a break up... But I never put it to music since... well I'm not talented musically...

Parasite

You’re inside me now.
Taking what you want
and leaving nothing, that’s how,
you kill me…you kill me so slow.

Devour me from the inside
Eat away my life
you know I’ll never fight…
it’s just so easy isn’t it
My favorite parasite

You left me all alone
After having had your fill
Your kiss, those words
They’re bullshit, they’re lies
You just want my body for your own


Devour me from the inside
Eat away my life
you know I’ll never fight…
it’s just so fucking easy isn’t it
My favorite parasite

Hmmm... Is it good?

FluffyDuckies 01-28-2008 11:46 PM

WOW!! That is REALLY good! I'm sorry about that person, but what you wrote is just so amazingly good! Do you write songs a lot?

Jaded Geisha 01-29-2008 01:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by FluffyDuckies
WOW!! That is REALLY good! I'm sorry about that person, but what you wrote is just so amazingly good! Do you write songs a lot?

Not really... I mean just when I'm really feeling something emotionally... Ya know? Ispiration doesn't really come easy to me now that all my relationships are realitively healthy...

Librus 01-30-2008 04:49 AM

I like it! ^_^

I can definitely relate to how your obviously feeling in that too. Some people just live to slowly kill you.

But seriously. I LOVE the line "My favorite parasite". There are so many levels in just that one phrase.
<3


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