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Will You. This Person.
These two poems are my most recent poems.
I hope you enjoy them. Read and Comment on them. ---------------------------------- Will You: Can you live in a reality full of dreams? I have found that my dreams have been real But they are dreams, Can this happen? How come it's happening? I'm lost within my self A dream of reality If my dreams have been coming true will my nightmares come true as well? I'm lost and I will never be real, I'm lost and never found One time can I have a dream that's fake Can I? Can I? I need to be alone in this, But being alone is what I fear the most? Will you take my hand and guide me? Will you help me get through this real nightmare? Will you save my being and not despite what has come true overall this whole situation? Will you save me from this real dream? Will you? |
THIS PERSON
This person makes me smile in every way possible This person was there for me This person made her and me This person was in my dreams This person was in everything This person was hiding from the reality of the truth This person didn’t change This person doesn’t care what immature people think This person is my only, right now This person makes me smile in the darkest of time This person is my Best friend But I cannot see it This person gets sad and mad Like you and me This person is happy at one time and sad another I love this person so much This person loves me so much We would make the perfect being But we can’t Because she’s you and I’m me I love her so She loves me We will live together For ever you see Me and this person Me and you Brock and Alyssa We have some laughing to do! |
I really enjoyed the first one. I havent read the second on yet but will get to it soon enough. You show promise and i hope you continue writing.
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Thank you very much for the comments.
I just write what i think should be writen about. Most of my poetry is something i feel or something about me. I just made this poem ----- Time The time of the whole person isn't real Time isn't something you can come to steal The heart of someone so pure and define A heart of someone who is you and not mine the power and desire of ones wants it's like a ghost a ghost to comes and haunts a past life being of someones broken heart someone who is lost and is falling apart a ghost of truth, vain, and lies why don't they wonder to the place above the skys? the feeling of this truthful scam is someone like a pearl hiding in a clam the faith of you in side of us is so deep, devine and like a loving trust |
I think Time is my favorite of the three so far. It goes very deep and im sure everybody can connect with it easily.
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Thank you very much.
I really happen to enjoy time as well. |
Woah. Those are really in depth. I agree with Manseutus, you do show a lot of promise. Keep up the wonderful work.
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Than kyou so much for the comments. It helps me to do more Poems.. Thank you.
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Read them?
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