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Help help help!
...her feet... should they be there? If so are they in the right place, are they too small?
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b1...sketchcopy.png and her forearms ... are they distractingly long? don't mind the hair I'm still figuring it out I usually colour over my hair lines anyway. lol |
Well the hands are a bit small for my taste and yes the feet seem a bit too small as well. I mean unless she is like five yards long I doubt they would be proportioned in that way so try enlarging them a bit... Other than those two things I like this piece of art and you should keep up the good work! ^_^
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The feet look like they are on top of her head :shock:
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@musicpup: thank you ^-^ I'll try that.
I think her hands look so small because her arms seem weird...her hands are the right size compared to her face [well they're the same size as my hands compared to my face lol] I'm going to try messing with her arms then move on to her legs in a little bit. If anyone would like to red line this that would be amazingly fabulous of you. @kitsy: thank you...what do you suggest I do about that? |
Its a really nifty pose I think, the forearms seem just fine to me! But the feet are off, and unfortunately I cannot pinpoint how to fix this. Hmmmm... maybe you can try hunting online for a pose ref? There should be one or so out there I'd imagine!
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The feet do look a bit strange, I don't know if you should keep them there but if you are, I think you should make them bigger. Also, yes, the forearms are a bit long, because your forearm if roughly the size of your feet [in length], also the hands seem too small since your hand can cover your face.
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Not that much of the legs would be showing, you'd probably only see potions of her feet considering the angle and all. Come to think of it, her head is so big I think they'd be more likely to show off to her right by the side of her head.
The hands are small. Because her face is disproportionate, being anime, I'd go off chin to hairline, not the actual features. I'd redline, but I didn't sleep last night. >< I actually like your hair. :] |
Her hands are a bit small. (especially for those elbows.) If you shade the feet he right way, it could actually look fine. However, they seem a bit too high. It may be better to just take them off.
Overall, the picture is beautiful! :D. You did a very beautiful and complex pose. Good job. ^_^. |
thanks everyone I've tried editing it more and this is what I've got http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b1...hcopyagain.png
^-^ I'm thinking about actually lowering her wig because it does make her head look enormous lol. her one eye needs to be smaller too :\ |
Oh, yay!
I think that you've got the feet right now. They look much better. ^^ I wouldn't change the head personally. It looks good to me. |
It's looking better already! ^_^ I still say the hand needs to be a tad bit larger but yet again that is just my opinion. I think it will look really good once you finish coloring everything...
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