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General Lee Outrageous 07-08-2008 09:27 PM

Yeah. Have a heart, Cherry!

Cherry Who? 07-08-2008 09:47 PM

I've got a tentacle growing out of it.

General Lee Outrageous 07-08-2008 09:50 PM

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Originally Posted by General Lee Outrageous (Post 3531732)
I don't know whether I should be turned on by this or really turned on by this.

xD

Cherry Who? 07-08-2008 10:06 PM

XDDD
Well, I know who's getting tentacle pr0n for Christmas.

General Lee Outrageous 07-08-2008 10:12 PM

WHO?!?

*turns around continually, spinning self into confusion*

*falls down*

Cherry Who? 07-08-2008 10:13 PM

Fiarra.

General Lee Outrageous 07-08-2008 10:21 PM

Oh. Why wait for Christmas? Labor Day is right around the corner!

roocee 07-08-2008 11:07 PM

Hmmmm, I'm thinking it was a good thing I was so busy at work today. I've just read back what I missed and I would have laughed out loud at work and gotten in so much trouble. Lee you are too much.

General Lee Outrageous 07-08-2008 11:09 PM

Hooray! Any day I can make someone laugh* is good day!








*or seize uncontrollably

roocee 07-08-2008 11:11 PM

It certainly is. It was most needed after the day I had at work too. Sure doesn't pay for taking days off to come back and be so far behind.

Cherry Who? 07-08-2008 11:53 PM

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Originally Posted by General Lee Outrageous (Post 3535276)
Oh. Why wait for Christmas? Labor Day is right around the corner!


Because I already bought my presents for labor day, and it's a bitch to return things.

(psst. Guys. Click the link in my signature plox?)
(Oh. And you guys can do shameless plugs like this here, too. I don't mind at all.)

CK 07-09-2008 12:30 AM

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Originally Posted by Cherry Flavored Antacid (Post 3531162)
Not tentacles.
Tentacle. Singular. I have only one. It's not like I'm some freak or something. XD

I agree with Lee - that is freakin' hysterical. XD I was laughing my arse off. XD

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Originally Posted by General Lee Outrageous (Post 3531732)
You get... a fox tail and owl wings.

Squeee!!! ::run around, flapping wings:: :D :D :D

Cherry Who? 07-09-2008 12:47 AM

Glad to amuse, CK. :D

General Lee Outrageous 07-09-2008 12:49 AM

I really love how the people in the Howse respond to my jokes as if they were normal conversation and not the hideously inappropriate and horrifyingly disturbing remarks they really are.

Also, I will read the story now.

Ferra 07-09-2008 12:57 AM

Speaking of stories, I need to start on that entry for a contest I'm going to enter. >__>; *pops in from nowhere*

Cherry Who? 07-09-2008 01:00 AM

Not-lee - I guess we just know you well enough to know you're joking?

And thank you. :D I'm working on the second chapter now [ish]. It should be up soon.

Ferra - What kind of contest is it? I mean, what's the theme?

General Lee Outrageous 07-09-2008 01:00 AM

Yeah, I'm thinking of writing a story, too. Progress is slow though (read: nonexistent), because:
A) Lack of experience
B) Semi-lack of inspiration
C) Laziness

@ Chairy

I wish everyone did. Some people think I'm some sort of mass-murderer because of my sense of humor. That has led to some awkward moments at school, let me tell you.

Cherry Who? 07-09-2008 01:04 AM

Yeah, inspiration can be a huge pain. I wanted to write something for like, a month before I finally came up with and honed an idea well enough to get even something basic for my story.
And it's changed a lot since then, too. I'm still developing the idea. A lot of it depends on how my characters act, and I haven't developed them quite well enough yet to know exactly how it's going to play out. I have a general idea, though.

And don't let lack of experience stop you! Then you'll NEVER write. Just start writing. If something doesn't come out well, you can just edit it. Or totally trash it.
It REALLY helps if you've been reading. It helps you to narrate things more smoothly, y'know. You can take some inspiration from the style (but not the story of) the writer you're reading.
Like, the Twilight books have helped me A LOT for smoothing out some narration, and just general first-person-perspective stuff. Reading them so intently (and there being about 1,500 pages of it all tolled that I read TWICE in 2-3 weeks) taught me some about writing structure.

fiarra 07-09-2008 01:13 AM

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Originally Posted by Cherry Flavored Antacid (Post 3535218)
Fiarra.


*squeaks, flails and dives under the bed*

T___T

General Lee Outrageous 07-09-2008 01:15 AM

It's not stopping me, just hindering my progress. I have the basic premise for the story, I just need to flesh out the details, such as characters and setting. Those have always been my weak points when I roleplay. I guess its like when I write essays; starting is often insanely difficult, but once I've begun writing and know what I'm doing, I can write page after pager after page.

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Originally Posted by fiarra (Post 3536300)
*squeaks, flails and dives under the bed*

T___T

She didn't say you were getting some raep. She said you were getting pr0ns. No physical violence or sexual activity will be carried out upon your person as dictated by Cherry's statement.

fiarra 07-09-2008 01:20 AM

But.. but.. I don't even want the prawns!!

Cherry Who? 07-09-2008 01:26 AM

fiarra - It's okay. XD I was just pulling a random name out. XD

And speaking of pronz... gah, there's a pr0nz troll in the GD. DX My poor eyes.

Lee - Generally, I find it easiest to flesh out the characters as you write, rather than beforehand. That's what I do, at least. I get just a general idea (like "he'll be a pig," "he'll be charming," "she'll be a bitch," etc.) and then just go from there. Let the characters develop themselves.
One VERY handy thing for character development that I've been doing is take some time when you've got nothing distracting you (like while showering, taking a walk, etc) and just make up a scene with your characters (that may or may not ever occur in your story) and just let them go. Let them talk, and narrate it, and just see how they want to act.
It's helped me a lot.

fiarra 07-09-2008 01:29 AM

*wibbles* Well then I hope I can be spared the tentacles.

I briefly skimmed your story and it's a nice premise. I agree about character development. Whenever I'm thinking of ideas, I tend to come up with a skeleton of a personality then let my mind wander through scenes with the character to see how they react.

General Lee Outrageous 07-09-2008 01:30 AM

The other problem I have is that the story involves werewolves, and I'm not quite sure how to incorporate that into a modern story. Many hours of proposed ideas and contemplation lie ahead.

Also, I read the story and am definitely intrigued. The premise sounds very good and chapter one was very promising. I can't wait for the next installment.

I would also like to be informed as to what action the word wibble signifies.

Ferra 07-09-2008 01:31 AM

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Originally Posted by Cherry Flavored Antacid (Post 3536196)
Ferra - What kind of contest is it? I mean, what's the theme?

It's interesting. XD We have to pick two of our characters and out them through 9 different trials in hell. The first one is extreme grief.


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