With the applications available on the iPod Touch you can help the environment or yourself. One thing that is available is the ability to make the GPS obsolete in your vehicle due to an application, saving you money and time. In today’s paperless world, objects such as an address book, calendar, notepad, and photo albums can be eliminated with a simple application. Also, when one has the iPod Touch and a wi-fi access point, there really is not a need to carry around a laptop. Personally, I believe that the iPod Touch is an excellent way to save important dates, write notes, and calculate prices and things of that matter when it comes to the real world. Living in a society that is ever changing, it is useful to have a device like that iPod Touch at your side to help you make sense of it all.


What do you think of it now? D:
You think that's a good closing sentence and all?
And do you think society fits right in the last sentence?

I don't much like the first sentence. And "due to" just sounds too odd. The end sentence isn't bad at all.

I have a question about your essay. Is this informal to a point where you can use first person? Because use "I" a couple of places.

I want to go back to high school. :(

I don't. >.< There wasn't one thing I liked about it.

I didn't like it either. But I never got to complete it either. I guess it's just that, I know I'd do a lot better in high school now. And I'd probably work harder, too. Maybe I just want some social interaction as well.

lol Hindsight is everything. x3 I wish I could go back and start from elementary. xD

Yeah. D:
I can't think of a good first sentence.. Help?! XD

And Chai, I was doing that because I had to say how I felt about it in some point in the article. ;3

I enjoyed elementary. It wasn't so bad then. I lived in a neighbor hood with a ton of kids my age. We lived by the school, supermarket, both parks and the water ditch was just down the road. We would all get together and go swimming. I'd go to school and be with my best friend Jennifer, Rose, Alana and Phillip. I remember one year I got this crayon box set. Had huge crayons, small crayons, neon, and sparkly crayons! All my friends would color with them at recess. Then we'd go over to Rose's house and jump on her trampoline. Then we'd go to my house and play on the swings and play in the yard when dad had the irrigation going.

I MISS BEING YOUNGER. ;O;

lol I love how your best friends were named Jennifer and Rose. ^_-

I liked coloring with crayons until fifth grade, then I was introduced to Prisma pencils. : 3

I don't know, Evan. I'm not great with this stuff. I suppose you don't have to alter it. Just change or to and I guess?

Chai. Haha, I know, right? I actually got back in touch with Jennifer a few weeks ago. Although, when my parents got divorced and I move, I never saw Rose again. Besides, her parents never liked me. They were a bit racist towards white people.

Okay, here is my first sentence. xD ::

Applications play a key role in the functionality of the iPod Touch.

I played with it a little bit, but not sure if it helped or not. ^^;

Hey, I'm heading off to bed. I'm really rather tired and I'm not doing so well right now. I'll talk to you all later.

Thanks Chai~
And I'm sorry Jennifer. <3

Hi Foam :)

Jen is back!