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Zizia 05-15-2008 05:22 PM

With love (werewolf bish <3)
 
My newest char Miki! <3 I just had to draw him~ *pets his cute ears*

http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/8...roundjpqm8.jpg

Nemui 05-16-2008 01:41 AM

overall it looks good.
although it has a few things that stand out to me.

For one his arm and hand it looks so awkward.
i know its a common pose but right now the way his hand is positioned
it looks like he is missing the rest and just has fingers.
it should have a more of a flow when like that you should be able to
see a little of the top of the hand.
that way it shows the bend in the wrist.
his fingers that way look like they might be overly large and are hiding the wrist.

and his other arm looks flat. like the one arm has definition of muscle and the other doesnt.
there should be a little bulge on his other arm.

his legs look strange.
i cant really like figure out how to say it.
i mean they seem to thin and wobbly.like his balance is off [does that make sense XD]

and his tail looks too high were it is positioned on his body. and really thin, like he is losing
fur you should make it more bushy more full that would have made it look awesome. and have it lay more flat on his body not all in the air like that.
unless there is some unforeseen wind.

the coloring looks really good.and the overall outcome is really good.
just a few things that stuck out to me like instantly.
but you do have talent so keep it up.

Zizia 05-18-2008 11:51 AM

Thanks for the critic! ^^
I'll prctice a bit more...
Hands were always my weak spot xD

Nemui 05-19-2008 12:19 AM

ya no problem...hands a weak spot for everyone weather they want to
admit it or not.

hands feet and facial expressions are the hardest.

fuyumi_saito 05-22-2008 02:09 PM

He's very Smexy, Zizia ^^

Zizia 05-22-2008 02:17 PM

@Nemui: I agree.... but pratice is the magic word hehe ^^
@Fuyumi: Thank you <3 I love my little Miki xD

Wuteverdude 05-23-2008 12:54 AM

"All I can say is watch out for the tail hair. :3 It's the only thing that's looking a tad awkward."

strange_dreams_512 05-27-2008 12:35 PM

Simple, clean, and I have to say...kind of cute lolz. What Nemui said about his arm I agree with...it's awkward. Not by a lot, but it's kind of noticeable. I like the colors lol. Kind of reminds me of Link. xD I wish there were at least a little bit more detail though. I think that would help some...

Jack MacGaven 05-28-2008 01:41 PM

it's cute ^^

Zizia 05-28-2008 09:39 PM

@Wuteverdude: Yup it is ^^;
@strange_dreams_512: Thanks for the cute-part but Link? XDD never thought of that hehehe
@Jack: Thankies Jackyyyy <3 *gives hug*


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