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LotusFlowers 06-09-2008 09:41 PM

Poems By Lotus
 
Okay so before I write the first poem in this thread I will tell you a little about myself. My name is Britni and I am almost 17. I love to write poetry and stories. Most of my poems are about events in my life and thiungs I can never get over. Sometimes they come out really lame but I don't care what you think about them, I like them. You are aloud to comment on them, but please don't be like an american Idol judge and tell me they are utterly ridiculous.

Daddy Doesn't Know That I'm Alive

Daddy never told me that he loved me,
Daddy never told me that he cared.
Daddy never taught me not to cry,
When I thought the monsters were there.

Daddy was never home to tuck me in at night,
Daddy doesn't know what things give me a fright.
Daddy doesn't even know,
I look just like him.

Daddy 's been gone for so long,
He's moved on and has a new life, with a new wife.
He forgot his baby girl,
And how she needed him so.

Sometimes I close my eyes and wish,
Daddy would just hold me tight.
And would tell me that everthing will be all right,
When I know it's only going to get worse.

He wasn't there when I learned to ride my bike,
Or fell off the jungle-jim when I was 5.
He wasn't there when I went to prom,
To tell my guy he better treat me right.

Because Daddy doesn't know that I'm alive.

Well here is the first one for my thread, I wrote this one last year for my school poetry magizine. What do you all think?


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