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Dreeaming
Dreamig
Floating here in space I dream I dream of you yes you dreaming just us together Help I can't finish. Help me finish please and tell me what you think. |
There's a contridiction here that you could explore. The fact that the narrator figure is "floating in space" which implies emptiness, but it's "just us here together".
There's a possible direction with that. One could experiment with some one who is very much alone but pretending, through a poem that there's somewhere in this empty space. That's where I'd go anyway. |
Sounds good.
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Groovy! I like being helpful.
Post when your done? |
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