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A Small Poem;
Read thousands of poetry books. Taking those silly advance writting classes worked, I suppose. Well, my poem basically define's what love is. It makes sense to me; a whole lot. (Sorry for the long, or short, non-understandable words. My friend, Dey, worked on this poem with me.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- What Is Love? By Dezu and Dey <3 A longing after more than outward pleasure, A digging to discover hidden treasure. An Aesop's net, where mouselike you may see A nibbling coney set a lion free. The pleasant'st game that ever was invented. The sweetest sin, so hard to be repented, That makes the lawyer plead without a fee And the divine commit idolatry; That makes the daring soldier to prefer A single combat far before the war; Turns age to youth, that once again they might In August taste of pleasant May's delight. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I hoped you enjoyed it. :) |
It's beautiful, but it seems more like a lust/love sort of things, not fully love. But...that's just my opinion^^ I like it, very creative.
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That's beautiful. How long ago did you write it?
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