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Old 11-23-2011, 10:55 PM

Name: Octavious
Age: looks to be 18
Race: wolf demon
Bio: he has been wondering the world for a while. He doesnt' really have a home and fights between doing the good thing and the bad thing.
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Appearence (human):

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Old 11-24-2011, 01:54 AM

Name: Brenda
Age: 16
Race: the spirit of an hybrid (cheetah/human)
Bio: She was born in the human life, but abandoned by all who met her and could've loved her. She died after being killed by a group of mad animals in the woods, one being a bear, and she never made her way to the white light.
Appearence (ghost): looks to be living and not dead, but only people she reveals herself to can see her. All animals can sense her and usually become calmer when she is near them.
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Old 11-24-2011, 07:56 PM

Octavious sighed as he sat down in a small dinner out int he country. It was peacefull and after being in the city for so long he was glad to be away from everything. Taking a sip of his black coffee he felt hte urge to destroy the place. He would like to hear the peple scream and see the place go up in flames. Smirking he sipped more of his coffee as he thought of destroying the place and relaxed into his seat.

((how is that for a begining?))

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Old 11-24-2011, 11:03 PM

All of a sudden, there was a small wind in the diner. It wasn't very strong, but it wasn't small either. It was as swift as the flick of a feline's tail and as smooth as butter. It seemed as though it was purring with satisfaction of making such a nice flow. The doors of the diner burst open and a tall hybrid girl walked in. Her mouth was ruby red and she walked with the confidence of a queen. She walked up to the counter, ordered a small cookie, and sat down at a table next to the window, and with one blink she was gone again.

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Old 11-25-2011, 03:57 AM

Octavious was surprised when he fekt the wind and looked at the door. Watching the girl carefully as she went and ordered. Though when she dissappeared he wasn't the least bit surprised. Being a demon he exeocted to see things like this. Picking uo his coffee he headed over ti the table and sat down in the seat across from where the girl had been. He could still see her out line and he leaned back in his chair, "see you." he said simply.

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Old 11-25-2011, 04:13 AM

"What?" Brenda asked. She had made sure she'd disappeared faster than anyone would even have the chance to know she was there! And how did this guy know she was there anyways? She had made herself not only invisible but also made her food invisible! She focused and made herself disappear more. She said her "focusing words". "I am one with the wins. I am one with the wind. I am one with the wind." She slowly felt like she was drifting in water and knew that her focusing had worked. She continued to eat her cookie, hoping the guy wouldn't try and draw attention to her.

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Old 11-25-2011, 03:42 PM

Octavious chuckled when he saw her dissappear so that he couldn't see her at all. BUt there was one thing that no one could ever take away. Sent. He sniffed deeply and smiled as he knew that she was still there. Relaxing more he looked at the seat, "smell you." he said as he looked at her. "and I doubt that you will be able to dissappear ocmpletely from me. I have a extreamly good nose. So good that I can smell you." he said as he sipped his coffee.

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Old 11-25-2011, 07:06 PM

Brenda let herself reappear almost completely, so her outline and facial features showed. "Oh, yeah?" She asked, feeling pathetic because she had no comeback. She disappeared all the way again, stuffed her cookie in her mouth, and pouted, not sure why she did care if one person out of about a billion and something on this earth could see her. She felt mad so she got up, got behind the service counter, and stole another cookie. She made sure it was a big one so all her madness would go away. She decided to question the boy. She sat down in the chair directly across from him. "What's your name?" She asked in a whisper that would put a chill up anyone's spine. She ate more of her cookie.

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Old 11-26-2011, 09:11 PM

Octavious smirked when he saw her dissappear completely and then go over to the counter. Chuckling, he watched as she grabbed another cookie and headed back over. Looking at her he relaxed back into the chair and smiled, "I am Ovtavious." he said simply and smiled. Taking another sip of his coffe he looked at her, "and if I may ask, what is your name?" he asked as he smield at her. She seemed nice to him and part of him wished he could take cookies like that. He hated to pay for things that were suppose to be cheep.

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Old 11-26-2011, 09:32 PM

"Brenda." Brenda answered the question with another cold whisper. She watched out the window and saw a dog's ears perk up. "My name is Brenda." She repeated, watching as the dog looked around to see what the sound was. She whistled and the dog howled loudly until she stopped. She decided to ask Octavious more questions. "So you're one of them. Y'know. A chosen one." She said. "Chosen ones are the only people I know of who can see ghosts." She said, glancing outside again.

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Old 11-27-2011, 09:52 PM

Octavious smiled when he heard her and but his ears hurt when she whisteled. Covering his ears slightly he then relaxed once she stopped and leaned back in his seat. "It is nice to met you Brenda." he said as he looked at her and then rubbed his ears, "and please dont do that again, it hurts." though he then chuckled and smiled at her, "I am not sure if you could count me as a chosen one since I am not like the humans around here. Infact I think I have more things in common with that dog then anyone else around." he said as he looked at her.

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Old 11-27-2011, 11:32 PM

"Oh, so your some type of hybrid?" Brenda guessed. She didn't know much about mythical creatures and animal mixed humans. She scratched her head and continued. "Are you a ghost too?" She asked in a louder whisper. A baby in a stroller began to cry and a few people were already staring in their direction, because since Brenda was invisible it looked like there was just a crazy boy sitting in a chair talking to himself. She decided to help him out. "Be right back." She said as she walked out of the shop. She made herself visible and walked back in, and sat back across from him. "Anyways, what are you?" She asked.

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Old 11-28-2011, 01:58 AM

Octavious chuckled when he heard her and thought about how he should bring it to her lightly. Most people, including ghosts weren't to happy to hear that he was a demon. THough when he saw her go he leaned back in his chair more. When she came back visible he smirked and then leaned closer. "I am a wolf demon, simple as that." he said as he looked at her and then leaned back. He let her take it in as he smiled, "but I promise you that I wont take a bite out of you or anything though I doubt I could." eh said as he looked at her.

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Old 11-28-2011, 02:39 AM

Brenda raised an eyebrow, surprised at Octavious's smirkness. She was one of the worst. She sometimes, when invisible, crept behind people and whispered creepy things in their ears, and she stole from just about every bakery and restauraunt she'd ever been in, both when she was dead and alive. "That's nice. She said, smiling. "Have you met the devil? 'Cause I've always wanted to. I imagine he's the most hottest guy ever, based on what it says in the Bible." Brenda said excitedly. She tossed aa few strands of hair behind her back. "And can you speak dog? 'Cause I can speak to most animals. It'd be like our own secret code!" She said, letting her bubbly side show on accident. "I mean, if we ever hung out." She blushed, then looked out the window. A bird was sitting on the tree directly next to it. She chirped for it in a low, deep way not to hurt Octavious again. The bird responded by flying over and sitting on the window sill. She chirped the same way, and the bird flew up, and right into the window, then fell off. Brenda laughed so hard that even her tail shook and her ears wobbled.

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Old 11-28-2011, 02:54 AM

Octavious chuckled when he heard her and relaxed into his seat. "dont believe the bible, it lies big time. The devil is a big fat dude that sits on a throne and commands people to do everything for him. It took me a little while to get out of there but I did, if you have a choice dont go there. Being a servent to a fat guy isn't fun." he said as he looked at her and then nodded, "I speak canine easily and a little cat, but I am rusty on that one." he said as he looked at her and liked the idea of being around her. "and why dont we, we are both misfits in this human world." he said as he watched the bird and found himself laughing with her, birds were so stupid sometimes.

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Old 11-28-2011, 10:12 PM

Brenda smiled a wide, toothy smile, one that could easily be mistaken for a baring of her sharp triangular teeth. She giggled, excited to have a new friend. "Well, maybe you say he's ugly, but a lil' chubs ain't hurtin' nobody." She laughed. She looked around, seeing people look at her when she talked. Even though she was in her human form, her voice was raspy, even if she didn't whisper. It was raspy like the sound of paper tearing or sand paper being rubbed. She decided to have more fun and noticed a little squirell out the window this time. she did a low little chirp to it and it looked at her, then went toward the door. When someone opened it to go out, it came in, causing a few little girls to swoon and parents to scream in fear. Brenda did another squirell sound, mostly doing all of this to impress Octavious. This time, the squirell jumped onto the counter top where the cash register sat, and hissed at a few employees. A skinny man cringed and a maucho girl swung at it. One of he little girls walked over to it when her mother wasn't looking and walked toward it. It saw her and hissed loudly. Right as the little girl went to pet it the girl behind the counter swung at it with a coffee jar and hit it, making it fall to the ground. Brenda snickered. "Wanna ditch this place?" She asked, finally done showing off.

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Old 11-30-2011, 12:45 PM

Octavious chuckled when he heard her and shook his head, "trust me, if being too chubby was illegal i am pretty sure that he would be in jail for eternity." he said as he looked at her and raised a eyebrow when he saw her bring he squirrle inside. Chuckling as he watched people run from it he leaned back in his chair and enjoyed the show. Once it was over he nodded as he stood up. "yeah, lets get out of here. I think the warm atmosphere here just crashed." he said as he looked at her and smiled.

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Old 11-30-2011, 09:26 PM

"Kay." Brenda said, pushing in her chair. She walked outside and waited for Octavious by the door. "If you're from hell, then where's your hell's scar? All the others I've seen have one from breaking the barrier between hell and civilization." Brenda noted, looking at his hands for the long raised gash that she'd seen on other creatures from hell. "And if your from hell, why isn't the devil's watch on your hand?" she noted, looking for the red and black watch she'd seen on the other's wrist that was to keep the countdown of how long they had to be on Earth.

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Old 12-01-2011, 02:18 AM

Octavious smirked when he heard her and showed his hands to her. "well lets just say when I first came here I wasn't the smartest demon. I didn't go threw the barrier hands first that others demons do. I sort of went belly first." he said and pulled up his shirt a little bit as he walked with her. There you saw the scar that ran over his stomach. "I was a very stupid demon back then." he said as he smirked at her andpulled his shirt down. He then dug into his pocket and pulled out a pocket watch, "this is my watch, I haven't upgraded to the new wrist watch yet and i rather am very fond of this watch." he said as he smiled at her.

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Old 12-01-2011, 03:12 AM

Brenda nodded. The image of the scar remained in her mind. She felt kind of sad knowing that her new friend was to be taken away when the watch was through counting, but she decided not to think about that and to just think about the now time. "What's your mission then?" She asked, out of pure curiosity. She knew that the devil only sent minions to Earth to acomplish a mission. She figured it'd be something hard like the other one's she'd heard of. Like the one demon who'd had to find the barrier between Earth and space and break it to kill all humans. That had been the devil's version of a joke, she later found out, but that poor she-devil hadn't known it and suffocated trying to complete the task. She hoped it wasn't something like that.

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Old 12-02-2011, 01:29 AM

Octavious smirked when he heard her and looked at his watch. It was still ticking away and then smiled at her. "my mission is something that takes a very long time. Infact I think i was given this mission around 1900's. It is something simple ad yet takes up all my time in the same way." he said as he looked at her. "my mission is to watch the humans and pick which ones will make good servents and to wath humans grow." he said and then chuckled as he remembered being given the mission. "in all truth I think he just gave me this mission so that i didn't bug him, I know how to push his buttons rather well and he hated it. So he gave me this and now I dont bug him, he doesn't bug me." he said as he looked at her and then sighed, "but the bad thing about this mission is that it can be over at any time, he decides when it is over and when he needs me back." he said as he looked at her.

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Old 12-02-2011, 01:49 AM

"That's a nice one." she said, as a little kid walked past. It had an ice cream cone and was eating it joyously. Another little boy ran up behind him and pushed his arm, causing him to drop the ice cream to the ground. Brenda narrowed her eyes and watched the boy cry. Half of her wanted to walk away and laugh and the other half wanted to beat the crap out of that kid. She decided to try both. She screeched, forgetting about Octavious for a moment. A flock of various species of birds swarmed down, making a shadow over the city. Both little boys looked up. The birds swarmed down and flew toward the diner, then a few flew toward the mean kid. He swatted them away and began to cry, the other laughing. "Let's leave now." She said, laughing as the boy screamed in pain from beaks hitting his spine. "I don't have a clear mission either. Usually when you don't go toward the light when you die, there's something you can do to get another chance, and an angel delivers the message of what it is, but I never got one so I guess I just have to figure it out." Brenda said, walking toward the forest. She let herself disappear again.

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Old 12-04-2011, 04:44 AM

Octavious chuckled when he saw the birds and the boys. She had to give it to her that she knew how to get animals to do what she wanted. When he heard her he frowled and followed her towards the forest before she dissappeared. "that sucks. If I was you I would kick the angels ass if he ever came." he said as he looked at her. She might not be visible but he could smell where she was. He then smiled a little, "well since it seems that we both have nothing to do or have no idea what to do we could see if we can help each other out." he said as he looked at her and liked the thought of being able to talk to someone about this.

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Old 12-05-2011, 09:11 PM

"I guess so. Maybe if I could just find the angel, I could find out my mission so I could go to heaven." Brenda said, mostly to herself. "But I have not even a little idea of how I can do that." she said sadly. She cried a few tears, and a dog a few blocks away howled. She really was regretting not going where she was supposed to be. Maybe God had decided to make her special. "Oh my gosh!" she exclaimed. "What if I'm some sort of guardian angel, y'know? Like, maybe that's why God doesn't send anyone to me. Maybe it's because I'm supposed to be the one guarding someone instead! Maybe I'm s'posed to find someone. But, I don't know not one person who needs that much help." she said, again to herself. She scratched her head and flicked her tail. She looked up, just now realizing Octavious was still there. "Oh... sorry if my ranting seemed kinda crazy, I tend to talk to myself more than I should." she said as she bashfully blushed, happy that he couldn't see her.

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Old 12-08-2011, 12:15 AM

Octavious nodded as he listened to her and frowned when he heard her cry. He wasn't sure what to do at first, he had never been close to anyone when they cried. But soon she stopped and yet he felt like if she cried again he would comfort her better. He then nodded more when he heard her. "maybe you are maybe you aren't. ONly time will tell." he said as he smiled at her, "and I will be here to help." he said as he smiled. "and it is okay. I like to listen and I dont do it often since I dont have many friends." he said as he looked at her.

 


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