That's me! A hyper goof.

lol, nice avi... wedding on the beach ^_^

maid love your avatar

Thank you ^_^

I have to say since being nominated I have improved my posts and that's all thanks to maidenroseheart: if it weren't for her I'd still post short unhelpful posts.

^_^ You still have work to do but the improvement is very noticeable ^_^ Awesome job!

Thanks. I know I have a long way to go, but I'm just happy you're sticking with me. So what needs work?

Well... your tense. One moment you are in past tense, the next in present tense. Also sometimes you are in first person using I, my, and me and for so long we had been writing in third person with him, her, they. It takes away the smooth flow.

Okay, I'm back from my "vacation". I'm catching up and ending the contest now. Sorry it's taken so long everyone!

---------- Post added 09-11-2012 at 12:19 PM ----------

So the polls are in! Congratulations PapillonCameo: and Kry: for their tie for our first place winner spot. We have another tie for our second place spot between maidenroseheart: and myself. Congratulations to us! And there will be no third place winners this round due to the high number of third place winners and lack of prizes.

I will not send out prizes until this evening (possibly morning - I am a busy girl), allowing anyone who may want to re-count and double check my scoring to do so and anyone who may protest the chance to also do so.

Once the prizes have been sent, there will be no re-counting or protesting. The contest will be over, and a new one will begin. A player who has been nominated in any previous contest, can not be re-nominated for the same paragraphs of writing.

Any questions, comments, or suggestions?

WAh! What a wonderful birthday present! haha Congrats to all the other winners!

How's it going Kya?

Good Papillon! My company has finally gone home. It's been a very hectic and stressful two weeks. How are you? Is it your birthday today???

Aw, well I hope things calm down on your end. What's been going on? I've just started college in Business Administration. So far it's been pretty interesting, though accounting and financial math ... >< They're gonna either give me a headache or make me fall asleep, I predict anyway.

And yes it is! I turn 21 today. ^^

The big two one! Lol Well happy birthday Papillon! I hope you're having an awesome day.

We just found out that my sister in law has inherited the crazy gene from her father. And she's gone completely off the deep end.

lol So far so good!

Oh my ....

Originally Posted by maidenroseheart

Well... your tense. One moment you are in past tense, the next in present tense. Also sometimes you are in first person using I, my, and me and for so long we had been writing in third person with him, her, they. It takes away the smooth flow.

Which tense do you prefer I type in? I'm open to either and will try to be more conscious of this.

Wow, I didn't think I would win anything lol. Thank you hon.

Congradulations,winners! =D

winner have been chosen?

*peeks in*

*reads up* oh oops... awesome! Congrats all

THE CONTEST HAS ENDED & THE PRIZES HAVE BEEN DISTRIBUTED!!!

A NEW CONTEST NOW BEGINS!

Please refresh yourself on the rules as some things may have changed after our first and more or less trial contest.

I will be adding the winners to our winners list and deleting all of the previous nominations. The player listings will remain, always.

Any questions or suggestions?

Good luck everybody.

good luck everyone!

Nomination Form:
Username of nominee: Tachigami:
Nominated by: maidenroseheart
Literacy level (choose one): Literate
How long have you been writing with this player?: For a few months.
Response time when it's their turn (choose one): Depends. Normally within a day but everyone has writer block. So right now it is a bit slow.
Pros to writing with this player: This player helps carry the story beautifully. He is descriptive in his character, the surroundings, and allows his character to react with the other characters in the same scene. His writing is smooth providing a depth of feeling that allows you to slip into his world for a few moments in time. Also, he writes more than one paragraph. Sometimes that is hard if his OC is having a conversation with mine, but he still works hard to give quantity as well as very good quality. I mentioned he helps carry the story. I would like to add that he also helps provide insights and twists that I alone would not have created then. He helps with the pacing, slowing me down if I rush or prodding me if I slow down, simply by being an inspiration in his posts.
Cons to writing with this player: He is so good that it is all I can do not to cancel my other roleplays and roleplay only with him. That is something I struggle with as I constantly come up with good ideas. Worse part, I know he will say yes. So I must control myself or I would have 20 roleplays with him and never live in real life. Other than that, just the writer's block.
Insert a quoted paragraph of this player's writing:

"It's not super strength." Atticus noted, pulling the chains from the wall and wedging his fingers under the shackles, pulling them either way and away from Mareena. "I've spread a gas through the facility, so anywhere they've stored weapons or anything metal, it'll be damaged, rusted, and basically useless." He got a knife from the bag on his other shoulder and undid the jacket with a few sharp cuts. His gaze fell on the blood matting the jacket. "You really put up a fight." He added. "I know you said you'd kill me next time you saw me, but I can't leave a peer behind."

Perhaps he was a fool. He'd worked with others like her. He'd never left them behind, and they never left him behind. Even after they'd been separated by death or by various fractions that sent them on different jobs. He pulled the straitjacket off carefully, to not bother the wounds she'd been given through her rather reckless-looking battle in Denver. "You really put up a fight." He repeated. "I don't have enough in my bag right now, but I can get you to the medical room up on the fourth floor." He stepped back to the bars and kicked the jagged edges away. The bars looked like something from a jailhouse that had been abandoned for fifty years. There wouldn't be anyone noticing such a thing yet, though; it would be safe enough to wander for the time being. He stepped out, waiting for Mareena.

Originally Posted by maidenroseheart

lol, nice avi... wedding on the beach ^_^

Yup. I like it.