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fuyumi_saito 10-04-2009 04:53 PM

War Torn(Open/Accepting)
 
In the land of Nol, there are many types of people. There are the guards, the seers,
royalty, thieves, and commoners. War is all the land knows after the king died. There has
yet to be an heir named, and the country is being ruled by the rich counsel of lords.
Because of the war this has brought on, many of the countries youth are now orphans, forced
to live on their own, or in groups. If one has any sort of magical talent, they must keep
it hidden, or they will be forced to go to war themselves. This is a story about a group
of orphans, trying to find their way in the world. They have all different backgrounds.
Some used to be rich, some have always been poor, some lost their parents too young to even
know what they used to be. They are all trying to live life in the country of Nol, but
when the government starts to kidnap other orphans, the group must stick together at all
costs in order not to be captured.

There is another side of this story though. There are the people who are trying to form the
government and trying to make it better. There are the guards, the counsel's mages, and
the counsel themselves. Who will be the next ruler of this country? Well, that is
ultimately up to whoever gains control. Even those who want power are too afraid to take
it quickly due to the state of their country. What is going to happen to Nol? I guess we'll
have to wait and see.

Rules:
1. Follow menewsha's rules
2. Keep it pg-13!!
3.if you're going to talk out of character, then please use (...) [..] or <...>
4. Please try posting more than one sentence when you post.
5. No all powerful characters..what's so fun about a character that's perfect?
6.Please send me your character in a pm. I posted this below, but just in case you miss it ^^

fuyumi_saito 10-04-2009 04:54 PM

Characters:


Here's the form you need to fill out. Please send it to me your characters in a PM.

username
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Sexuality:
Likes:
Dislikes:
Strengths:
Weaknesses:
Bio:
Looks:


Username: Fuyumi_Saito
Name: Reon Becul
Age: late teens
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Straight
Likes: when others are happy, making kids smile, getting everything he needs
Dislikes: Messing up, the war, the guards, the government, not having enough food, crying
Strengths: Clever, quick, strong.
Weaknesses: Reallly weak against children and women crying, stubborn, can be mean, is
actually really unknowledgeable when it comes to women.
Bio: Reon grew up in a poor soldier's family. His father ended up dying in the war. Reon
became the leader of a small group of orphans. He steals from those who have more than
enough, to help support the others. He likes doing things on his own. He acts like an
older brother, or father figure most of the time.
Looks: Reon has dark spikey green hair, and violet eyes. He looks more like he's in his
mid twenties, instead of late teens. He has a bunch of scars on his arms, legs, and a few
on the right side of his face. He's tall and has lean muscle.


Username: Fuyumi_Saito
Name:Arisai Vanlidenburg (Called Ari)
Age: around 17
Gender: Female
Sexuality: unknown
Likes: cooking, magic, gardening, cute things, reading
Dislikes: loud things, being told what to do,
Strengths: Smart, kind, cute
Weaknesses: really cute things, she has a temper, she's not as happy as she seems.
Bio: Ari grew up in a wealthy family. She's now a part of the government's mage order.
She doesn't understand what the government is doing. Her dream is to marry a dashing
prince...(Like that's going to happen XD). Her mother died in the war, and her father
is hardly ever home.
Looks: Ari has long blonde hair, that curls at the end. She has big brown eyes, and pale
skin. She's average height and weight.

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username sdgfam08
Name: nil
age: 10
Gender:female
Likes:candy and everything nice
Dislikes: mean people
Strengths:her kindness
Weaknesses: her temper
Bio: one day nil and her family where walking in nol when out of nowhere a man in a black trench cote kills her mother and her father. alone, and with no idea where she is she wonders the streets waitting for some one to pick her up and tell her everthing will be ok.
looks: she looks to be 6 maybe 7 but shes ten. she has a little pink dress on and long redish blond hair.

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username: ♥Martyr♥
Name: Marcus Harrel
Age: 17/18
Gender: Boy
Sexuality: Straight
Likes: Likes it when something good happens in his life; action; adventure; laughing
Dislikes: This whole war; Nol after the king died; emotional and sensitive moments;
Strengths: Running really fast; ability to shoot right on target with any weapon;
Weaknesses: Animals; crying;
Bio: Marcus lived with his only older brother who was about 21 and he cared for him. Marcus only looked towards the next day because of him. But one day his brother went out for groceries; or so as he remembered; and got shot by the war. His brother left the whole house to his little brother and now he lives alone; no one knows whatever happened to his parents; some say the wars before the war of Nol; way before the king had ever lived.
Looks: Image =]
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username: crymsonraven

Name: Asia

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Sexuality: straight

Likes: making people smile, protecting those who can't protect theselves and making the lives of the 'evil' miserable

Dislikes: people who make others cry, war, fighting in general (but does so because some can't fight for themselves)

Strengths: magic--lunar

Weaknesses: anyone in pain-- she has to help

Bio:She has the ability to access and use lunar magic (but she will only do so in extreme situations) and she is talented with words and can weasel her way out of any situation. She has never been an extremely heathly child and takes ill quite easily. She has never known the touch of a parent, other than the government who has raised her. They used her for a 'weapon,' but now she is fighting back, as a runaway from them.

Looks: Asia is about five-six, has snow white hair, golden eyes and is more muscle than anything. Her typical outfit is a black shirt that has quite a few tears from the beatings she recieved when she refused to fight for the government. She wears black combat boots and her clothes are mostly too baggy for her.
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Originally Posted by darkninja0200
Username: darkninja0200
Name: Alexandria Night
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Bi curious
Likes: butterflies, helping people, animals
Dislikes: animal abuse and people getting hurt
Strengths: Animal communication, Energy control
Weaknesses: Sun(sun burns easily and can die if she stays in it too long)
Bio: Alexandria doesn't really remember much about her past... the only clue to her past are the powers she inherited from her parents.
Looks: Image

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Originally Posted by Phayth Less
username: Phayth Less
Name: Syn Fuhle
Age: 19
Gender: Female.
Sexuality: Straight
Likes: Reading, daydreaming, and her dagger collection
Dislikes: The war.
Strengths: Using her daggers and distancing herself.
Weaknesses: Watching people get hurt.
Bio: Syn watched her father battle for his life in a raid when she was about seven years old and after that she was left on her own. Her mother had died when she was two and her two siblings disappearred shortly after. Needless to say, Syn is a very hardened soul and likes to keep to herself, only speaking when her input is most needed or she knows something others don't.
Looks: image

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Originally Posted by Talitha001
username talitha001

Name:Alana Vartos

Age:16

Gender:female

Sexuality:bisexual

Likes:archery, thieving, fighting, winning

Dislikes: the war, goodytwoshoes

Strengths:Archery, bribery, Sneaking

Weaknesses:falls in love easy, meelee combat

Bio:Alanas parents died when she was 5 and she raised herself. Living alone on the streets she became a thief and a very good one. She has been to jail plenty of times. She fell in love with a soldier once who broke her heart and since then she is very unsensitive to soldiers and to guys really. She spends her days either hunting animals in the woods in order to sell the skins and meat for money or stealing from soldiers for fun. She rents a cozy cottage but is never home except to sleep.

Looks:
Image

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Originally Posted by Strawberry Kitkat
username: Strawberry Kitkat
Name: Natasha Valentine, nicknamed Val
Age: 16
Gender: female
Sexuality: heterosexual
Likes: sweet things, quiet places, books
Dislikes: wide, open spaces, fighting
Strengths: Natasha is small and fast, having clocked in a mile at six and a half minutes once. She can also pick locks like a pro.
Weaknesses: Natasha isn't strong, and she's a tad clumsy. She also has to wear glasses sometimes. She gets confused a bit easily, and she's certainly no Einstein (but not a complete idiot.) She also suffers from trauma from something in her past that she refuses to speak about.
Bio: Natasha was one of those kids who was practically born an orphan. She grew up with a group of kids who had become her family, until one day she came back from a morning run and they were all gone. Something happened that day that got her running, but she won't speak about it. She's been wandering by herself for a few years, always on the run and dreaming of a day where she didn't have to listen to the sound of guns.
Looks: link :3


Fiona_Watergate 10-05-2009 04:20 PM

Nil sits on the side walk alone she pulls her knees up to her chest and begins to cry. "mama..." she said in a soft wimper.

fuyumi_saito 10-05-2009 07:42 PM

Reon walked through the town, his eyes scanning the crowds of people. Many were covered in dirt. It was a warm day. He ran a hand through his dark green hair. His eyes ciontinued to wander.

He found the ally he was looking for and took it to a more run down part of town. Closer to home so to speak. As Reon was walking he heard a strange noise. His violet eyes darted in the direction of the noise, and he saw a small girl sitting on the rode crying.

'Another one...' Was the only thing that went through his mind. Reon approached the girl slowly, and kneeled down beside her. "Hey, you alright little girl? You got a home? You should be out here in the middle of the street, ya know?"

♥Martyr♥ 10-05-2009 09:23 PM

Marcus ran through the forest panting as his sweaty shirt stuck to his shirt. He pushed the tress that came in his way; viciously. He halted to a stop and bent down to his knees. He spat to the floor and panted deeply. He looked up and closed his eyes. Marcus had nothing better too do; after the king had died and his brother left him hanging...this was all he had. He opened his eyes and ran back from the trail he had made.
Now that the sun had slowly started to set, Marcus lay against a tree with his head leaning back on it. After sitting there for a while he got up and wiped his face with his bare sweaty hands. 'Oh god...' he thought to himself. He grabbed his bow and arrow and trailed up the hill; leading him to his town. Where he had lived throughout half his life; after his brother died. The town was small and Marcus liked it there only because how the memories lived there. He walked down the street, playing with his bracelet and skidded to stop when he saw a man and a young girl talking right on the street. Marcus thought he should go and ask what was wrong but that didn't seem very likely in Marcus's sense. They could be government people. That's all Marcus feared these days; the government and their rules. And don't forget the wars. Marcus could never live with that. Marcus took a small step forward to his house and hoped that the two people wouldn't notice him. His breath was still panting from the daily run he had ran today. His brushed through his hair a little and took another step towards his house and crunched on a leaf right beneath his feet. "damn!" he whispered. He looked up to see if they and noticed...

Fiona_Watergate 10-06-2009 02:16 AM

"I don't have a mommy or a daddy..." she begins to cry some more. "i'm never will see them again..." she pointed n the ally. "there over there." she pulled her legs back up to her chest. " I want my mommy!!!"

CrymsonRaven 10-06-2009 02:24 AM

Asia just looks around her shadowy corner trying to stay hidden and quiet

fuyumi_saito 10-06-2009 02:35 AM

Reon gently scooped the little girl up, he turned and looked where she was pointing.

"Hey, come on kid... It's okay now. I'll take you to a place where you will have lots of brothers and sisters. I know you miss your mommy..but you'll see her again one day. For now you just have to be happy, and strong. You're mommy would want that, right? Don't worry, this country will be right back to the way it's suppose to be. Now please stop crying...please?" Reon rubbed her back and looked straight at Marcus and in the direction of the corner "You two too, huh?"

Reon looked the boy up and down, but said nothing. The guy looked like he was about to run away or something.He muttered, "This war just keeps getting worse everyday."

He already had 8 kids to take care of. What was 3 more? Plus the boy and the girl looked to be a bit older, they could help him gather things for the little ones.

Fiona_Watergate 10-06-2009 02:56 AM

Nil looks up at Reon Wait I need to get my dollie..." she climbs out of his arms and walks over to her dead mothers body. she grabs a small little rag doll that had a corkie smile and a small bow in its hair. she kissed her mother and father goodbye and wispered something to them. Nil walks over to reon. "we can go now" she said trying to sound brave

darkninja0200 10-06-2009 03:44 AM

Alexandria came out around the corner seeing a young girl and older boy near a womans dead body. She was sure the woman was dead because she couldn't feel her life force nor could she see it. She came out into cleaf view easily seen because hf her white clothes, skin, and hair. Alexandria looked almost ghostly among this wartorn area.

fuyumi_saito 10-06-2009 03:55 AM

"And that makes four" Reon commented when he saw the pale girl. "Okay, what are your names..?"

He picked Nil up and looked from each of them. There was always meetings like this. So to be honest he was used to seeing large groups of children and teens together. Offer one help, and you end up helping ten sometimes. Reon didn't mind. There was only one little one. Now that she stopped crying, the tightness in his chest had stopped. He always felt so guilty when he cried.

Kids weren't afraid of Reon though. While adults looked at him like the scum of the earth, children viewed him more like a kind mutt on the loose.

darkninja0200 10-06-2009 04:04 AM

Alexandria came closer to the group and answered Reon in a calm and even tone "Alexandria" A couple of butterflies flitted about around Alexandria. As Alexandria looked at Reon she judged him to be in his twenties. Again she spoke to Reon "What's your name?"

Fiona_Watergate 10-06-2009 04:12 AM

Nil pulled Reons face to look at her. "Me Nil, where are we going?" she asked him. she looked at the other girl and smiled " Nil like Alix"

CrymsonRaven 10-06-2009 04:23 AM

Asia watches all of this from the safety of her shadow but shifts and her shoes scrape the floor. "darnit!"

darkninja0200 10-06-2009 04:36 AM

Alexandria hears the sound of scraping and quickly turned around lighting up the area with a ball of white light on her hand allowing the group to see who it was that made the noise.

CrymsonRaven 10-06-2009 04:43 AM

Asia tries to move out of the light, but fails. "hi." she says quietly.

CrymsonRaven 10-06-2009 04:48 AM

((sorry guys but i have class tomorrow so i gotta hit the hay))

fuyumi_saito 10-06-2009 04:50 AM

"Hello.. I'm Reon. My family helps take care of orphans..and.. people like this little girl...and you guys obviously.." Reon waved his hand. He chuckled at how quiet Asia was. "Don't be afraid. My sword is for protection and cutting purse strings, I promise."

His smile faltered, he wasn't really the type that could smile easily. "Would you all like to go to the hide out with me? We could use more helping hands around there....Not that you can do much Nil. You'll have to stick with gathering supplies with the other little ones. We have to move quickly though. It'll be dark in a few hours, and once that happens, the guards will be up and about."

((@Crymson: It's alright, we'll continue tomorrow. We'll probably post-pone it after the next two posts, until ♥Martyr♥ gets back as well))

darkninja0200 10-06-2009 04:59 AM

Alexandria walks over to the girl feeling her spiritual energy. It didn't feel threatening with as little energy as she was putting off but with this war you couldn't be too careful. Unfortunately she trusted easil which has gotten her in trouble a million times over. She pointed to Reon witg her non glowinb hand saying "He's helping" She waits for the girls answer. As she stood still the ball or light was letting off a soft heat warming up the area around them.

Fiona_Watergate 10-06-2009 05:08 AM

"Reon i want you to meet Nils dollie..." Nil said as she pulled his face closer to hers. "Nils dollie is Dorthy... its Nils Dorthy doll." She smiled and held the doll up. "do you like her?" she asked.

darkninja0200 10-06-2009 05:16 AM

((Night guys))

♥Martyr♥ 10-06-2009 07:38 PM

Marcus opened his mouth to say something but he shut it. He looked around him and walked to his house not looking at the people. He wished that the man wouldn't ask any thing...He walked right past them with a smooth movement...

fuyumi_saito 10-06-2009 07:48 PM

Reon watched Marcus leave, then looked at the girls, and then at little Nil again.

"Yeah, I like Dorothy. She's cute." He said, smiling softly. On the inside, he wondered why the boy had completely ignored him. 'Heh..I'll just have to come back here again..'

"Hey, you guys might not want to use too much magic, okay? If the governments mages detect us..then we'll have a lot of trouble." He picked up Nil once more, and sighed slightly. A small gust of wind blew through.

~
Arisai walked through the market place. She saw many shops. What she really wanted right now was fruit tough, and she knew the perfect place to get some. She saw the booth, with the elderly old man the the delicious colorful looking fruit.

She smiled, touching her blonde hair for a mere second as she looked for some apples. "Hello Hirashio. You have a lot of nice looking fruit, as usual."

The girl smiled, and picked up one, examining it closely.

♥Martyr♥ 10-06-2009 08:00 PM

Marcus shut the door just as he got into his house and threw his arrows on the sofa. He checked his messages on his phone. 'Ha. riiight...' he thought to himself, 'never would you get messages in the land of Nol. ppft.' he thought again. Grabbing his water bottle, he plumped onto his sofa and relaxed. After a few minutes he got up and peeked through his blinds to see if the girl and man were still there. He saw the man holding her. He backed away quickly so that he wouldn't get noticed. He leaned on the wall there and thought; thought about absolutely everything and guaranteed nothing. Marcus sighed and slowly leaned down until he was sitting on the floor leaning against it. "Oh god..." he muttered at his life.

darkninja0200 10-06-2009 08:08 PM

Alexandria turned back to Reon and nodded lowering her light output but still still lighting the area around them. "If it wasn't for this war I wouldn't have to worry about that" She said that with a sad tone. This war was what took her family at a very young age.


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