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Old 01-06-2010, 05:49 AM

(( >.< You're so good. *gets brain thinking* I gotta take some time so this sounds right))

As Phoenix entered Hell a familiar man the one who injected her, smiled down at her and said, "You weren't foolish enough to believe that the heirs were our only goal did you?" He let out a barking peel of laughter as Phoenix did her best to glare at him. She knew it must look a bit pathetic especially with how she felt but she would show her displeasure one way or another.

Her body was racked with coughing and more blood came up. More fallens had a hold of her as the man said, "Hurry take her to Zenos. We can't have her dead." He ran his fingers through her hair and with foul breath said, "Your mind belongs to us now." He let go and the others carried her away.

At some point she had blacked out but now she was awake. She looked around and knew she was either in some sort of office or lab. A very old fallen was there and it was someone Phoenix had heard of. Some called him the Mad Doctor and some, brave or stupid souls, called him by his name Zenos. He was talented as much as he was crazy and Phoenix knew she had good reason to be fearful.

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#602
Old 01-06-2010, 06:17 AM

(Lol I can assure you that what I've been planning isn't all that great. If anything it's merely just some sort of entertainment that allows me to torture Talon just a bit. XD)

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Old 01-06-2010, 03:18 PM

I excused myself briefly, as I turned to face the second commander.
'Please bring me then, your higher-up doesnt seem to be the type to summon someone for chit-chat.' I stated seriously,
'Except when he is ordered to do so of course, but that does not seem to be the case.' A smile followed, for a brief moment though. I stood straight, though I still was a head smaller than the second commander, made we want to grab that white hair and pull it down a few foot. Oh well, I cant help it I'm young.

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Old 01-06-2010, 04:22 PM

Zeak payed not attenchion to Janen. He alredy knew he would have it rugh trying to gain ranks. But he knew if he was diturmined enough he could figuar something out and possibly be a high ranking something or another.

((i dont know what else to do, you guys sorta left me in the dust ;>.> <.<; i couldnt keep up heh heh ))

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Old 01-06-2010, 04:31 PM

((xD You had fangirls to take care of :P And practically the princess is powerless, and her bodyguard isnt allowed to leave her side... x.x ))

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Old 01-06-2010, 05:10 PM

((Hah hah yeah the fan girls well Zeak had to get Penelope awayfrom them before she decited it best toripp their hair out and punish them for being all flerty with her body guard:D))

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Old 01-06-2010, 05:23 PM

((xD Yeah sure, rip out the hair of fsngirls for being all mushy :P xP))

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Old 01-06-2010, 05:32 PM

((heh heh she would start ripping hair out then feathers, youd see this evil demonic aura comming form the small angelic princess HAH HAH i can just see it :P Zeak woud have a twich before he pulls her off of the fan girl pile and he would scold her then shed be all sweet and normal HAH HAH ))

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Old 01-06-2010, 05:46 PM

((are you saying she falls for zeak? =P))

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Old 01-06-2010, 06:29 PM

heh heh Well she is a girl after all and well at the moment any one who is of opposite sex and is kind and protective,aside from her brothersss, Then she would have some kind of attraction towards them:P))

Penelope Looked around the room. She did ceatch sight of zeaks fangirls, but decited to let them be, If they were to attempt another gah gah fest, she would have to step in and take some action. Right now though she was finding it hard to stay focused on anything. She wanted to go to bed. It had been a long time sence she was at an event like this and it was starting to get boring and unevent full. She stayed close to zeak and would ocatioally lean on him and close her eyes.

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Old 01-06-2010, 06:49 PM

Damien looked and saw the doors of Hell as well. "The shouldn't have that power!" He growls and opens the door wide for Talon, cause he can. "Im putting you in charge of helping that angel and Lord Lucifer. I will stay here and take care of what needs to be done here. Take Janen with you if you must!" He then turned to Sikura.

"This may get bloody and fast. This is something youmay have to get use to in Hell. However, you can keep your eyes closed ifyou wish, but I can not have you leave y side just in case. Do try to keep up though. I must move fast." With that he ran to the main ballroom and got onto the thrones, standing tall, immediatly changing to his full demon form which immediatly got the attention of all the demons in the room.

"We have an emergency! Those who do not follow my words to the letter will be immediatly executed no questions asked. This goes for all the angels as well. There is no time to explain bu there is a danger for everyone." Almost all the demons and fallen stood straight and stared at him, awaiting orders. "Gather every single fallen and bring them here! Those who are willing to come up here may do so now, all others must be tied and brought against their will." He looks over at Zeak. "Zeak! Bring the Princess up here immediatly and then join the fallen in front of the thrones."

He remained standing on his throne, looming over everyone as falen stepped foreward and kneeled down willingly while others started getting scared and the demons started fighting them, trying to capture them.

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Old 01-06-2010, 10:54 PM

Zeak and penelope turned their attenchion to the prince it seemed that things were going crazy. before penelope knew it Zeak had her in his arms and had lept in the air to get over the crowds of angels and deoms who were all in a panic to do as they were told.
"thank you zeak, please fallow the pinces orders ill be fine!" She said as Zeak set her down and gave a worried look. He obayed his princess and knelt beside the prince.
"Please everyone, i dont know whats going on but please us as the prince says, i know it will be for our own good!" penelope yelled over the slight roar of confution. all angels silenced themselves and began to gather in one grupe keeping clear of any fallen who was being cowardisce.

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Old 01-07-2010, 08:10 AM

Talon opened his mouth to once more reiterated that at the moment his hands were tied with another matter and thus be unable to do the rescue himself, only to find the Prince already heading out the door and back towards the ballroom. With a sigh the bat winged demon's eyes remained closed as he upturned his head towards the ceiling. Another tremor coursed through the area, though this time both his wounded and 'good' wing had been spread out in preparation, and thus not truly affecting him at the moment. "Why me? Is it because of that vendetta I have against you?..." he seemed to whisper quietly, obviously doing what many humans in their lives had done, questioned the one whom created them. Naturally for the fallen-turned-demon that of course meant that, that creator was Methos. He stood there for a few moments as he tried to quickly find a solution to the problem that he currently had at hand, when it hit him...Janen...

Janen didn't bother uttering a response towards the priestess angel, and merely just led the way to the indicated room. He knew full well that the angel was rather correct in some sense that his Commander summoning him and the angel in such a way was not usually used for idle chit chat. As he approached the doorway he needed he caught sight of their Prince who appeared to be in quite the hurry. This of course made him pause and await to find out what it was that appeared to be wrong, and could perhaps give him a reasoning behind the summons. Quietly he listened as Damien commanded that the fallen be brought before him immediately, and noticing a fair amount of struggling ones. 'There's one I have a feeling that is going to cause more trouble than any of these here in the ballroom, but the Prince's orders are orders...' he thought and immediately signaled to a few stronger looking higher level demons that were nearby. "You're going to be needed in restraining him..." the white haired demon sighed. He then turned a quick glance towards Dia. "Despite what I had just said you can wait here. My Commander will be brought here..." he said quickly and proceeded out of the hallway, with the other demons in tow.

Moments later a rather large amount of shouting, cursing and threatening could be heard from the hallway that Talon's second and the other higher demons had gone through, long before they appeared with their captive who was giving them quite the problems in restraining. "You will release me now or I swear I shall personally carve out your eyes and shove them in a place most inconvient while strangling you with your own organs!" a voice rang out whose tone and threat could only be identified as belong to the clearly enraged and stressed Talon. The faint distinction of the words "But Commander Talon the Prince said all fallen were to report here" could be heard over the rather loud cursings of the said bat demon. "You stupid block heads! I am not included in this little gathering! Release me now or suffer!" he shouted angrily as his captors were barely able to restrain him long enough to drag him near the other fallen. It was perhaps natural that Talon would be grouped with the fallen, since he had indeed been one himself at one point and, being who Janen was, felt that since Damien hadn't specified what type of fallen or past fallen that the bat demon was to be brought in as well no matter how unwise the choice clearly had been. Typically the usually calm demon would not have been quite as enraged about being mistaken into the group and would have willingly went along with them, if it had not been for the fact he had two rather large problems on his hands that had needed solutions to at once. It was also clear that something had happened in the area between the room and the hallway that also seemed to enrage the still resisting demon.

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Old 01-07-2010, 03:03 PM

Okay to be brought here I figured as much, and to be told to wait is quite unexpected since it seemed to be in a hurry, but honestly. Tell me to wait for a commander who now is getting summoned for an examination of kinds? Okay... Bending the water out of the air and then freezing it into a chair, I sat down, my arms crossed under my chest, not really knowing what to do at this point. Though my face didnt show that of course.

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Old 01-07-2010, 04:46 PM

Damien noticed Talon being dragged in and couldn't help but laugh out loud, hard. "HAHAHAHA Oh Talon, I believe your second took my words too literally! You may release Talon. He has already passed by my eyes." He looked at the rest of the FAllen and knew that this was not ll of them.

"Hunt down the rest, that are not Talon you silly demons." He jumped down, landing in front of Zeak and looking each and every one over. "If I find something that has come up, which I will not tell you just in case, You will immediatly be sent to hell in the most painful way to have you be put in your place, is that understood?"

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Old 01-07-2010, 05:02 PM

Penelope watched everything happen, She was rather confused. By the way the prince and Talon were acting it was almost as if they were under attack from some one. She watched the prince speak to the fallen still not quite understadning what was going on..


Zeak glanced up at the prince as he hopped down from where he was only to land infront of him. The prince thretend to send any who were amiss to hell in a most painfull fashon. Perhaps hes talking about trators! Zeak thought as he recalled the ones that had attacked both his princess and the prince. Theirs no doubt about it though, if we are expirencing an attack then the fallen would be first suspects! he thought silently before looking back at penelope who stood her ground and looked as poised as she could. This event seemed to have wipped any sign of her fatigue away and made her rather diturmind looking.

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Old 01-07-2010, 07:45 PM

((Dramatic post, dun dun dun XP ))

Phoenix found that she had been bound to a bed that was more like a table. Her wings had been bound as well making it very uncomfortable. She felt a bit better than before though and wondered if it had been Zenos doing. After a bit of thinking she decided to confront the old fallen. "Why have you taken me?" she asked in a rather normal tone. She did not want to anger him or show disrespect to such an enemy.

The old fallen was going over some last minute notes when the angel spoke. He knew she had been awake and had wondered when she would speak up. He walked forward to the lab table they had bound her to and looked down at her. She was not beautiful, which was surprising for an angel, but Zenos found her appealing all the same, perhaps it was the mechanical parts. He brushed a strand of hair from her face and smiled saying, "So much in such a small frame. I do not wish to kill you but taking the things from here," he dragged a nail to her head like he was pointing to her brain, "may be difficult and I can't promise you'll live." His voice was soft, almost alluring, as he spoke to her.

Phoenix knew that most magic/powers/procedures involving the brain usually did not fair well. The brain was a very delicate piece of work and any number of things could go wrong. She said to him, "Even if I die I will do everything in my power to keep my secrets mine." She was not a warrior but she knew how to fight in her own way and her resolve was amazing. She closed her eyes and immediately began to set up barriers in her mind using some of the techniques and knowledge he was trying to get.

Zenos saw what she was doing and his eyes went to slits saying, "Do not think you can evade me so easily little one." With that he closed his own eyes grabbing either side of her head with his hands and pushing his mind into hers. He was amazed and shocked at how well she had bound and sealed her thoughts but he was a master, an expert, and he would get what he wanted.
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After some times Zenos took a step back panting and almost completely drained of energy. She was very skilled and this made him find her even more beautiful. He got a slow wide grin on his face. She had been very skilled but he was much older and he had broken her. It had been worth it for the knowledge she contained would change the fallen . . it would change history.

He called for one of his workers and drained them of their power till they were dead. He was feeling better now but he would have to do that a few more times to regain what he had lost. He looked at the little angel who was still alive but would need much time to recover. He had decided that she would be his . . . forever.

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#618
Old 01-07-2010, 07:49 PM

Off... Again that annoyinging naggish feeling. Something was off and I want to know what. So if Janen would hurry this up, I can save or fight someone. And make this eating annoying pinching naggish feeling go away.

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Old 01-08-2010, 02:08 AM

"So it would seem" Talon quietly growled out, still clearly enraged at the fact his second and higher demons forcing him to be taken from the task that he had been preparing a solution for. The moment that he felt himself released he immediately sent a fist into the stomach of the nearest one that had restrained him. Immediately the demon fell, not quite expecting the blow. "Consider that a warning to the rest of you the next time you decide to not listen" he warned the small group that had dragged him from the room and his Second.

The bat winged demon then grabbed the shoulder of his Second and forced him further away from the group so he had a bit more privacy. "Your slowness to respond to my summons is very disappointing and has caused a problem that you are now going to resolve. There was an angel who needed a bit of healing, but now is in a bit more trouble as she has been dragged into Hell by the fallen. I want you to take that priestess angel with you, head to Hell and locate the angel and bring her back unscathed and unharmed. You are also to swiftly execute any found involved in Hell with the abduction understood?" he whispered clearly still angered and disappointed at the white haired demon. He then waved in a form of dismissal, and turned his head so that he could clearly see the group of fallen as well as a view of the outside area that seemed to make him rather uncomfortable.

Janen wasn't surprised at the anger that his Commander showed. He quietly listened to his new commands and could only nod in response. At the wave he merely bowed and swiftly returned to the priestess angel, as much as he didn't want to. "My Commander has now requested I go to Hell and take you with me. There appears to have been an abduction of an angel, and for some reason he is unable to take this matter into his own hands at the moment" he said with a sigh.

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Old 01-08-2010, 06:04 AM

Penelope stood behind the prince and watched the chaos continue. things seemed to hetic around and rather desperate. She watched as Talon called his second and sope quietly with him then watched as Janen rushed over to Dimond and began speeking with her.
All this running about and gathering made Penelope nervous. The prince was even in his full demon form and seemed ready to do battle if needed. Fed up with not knowing, Penelope approched the prince and snatched his arm to gain his attenchion.
"Whats going on!" She demanded in a wisper as she stood on her toes to reach the princes ear. "Somethings happeing and i dont like being left in the dark!" She stated her voice being as sturn as she could make it. If he didnt tell her was was happening she migh have to demand it from a demon who would probably, mostlikly, hopefully, know.

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Old 01-08-2010, 06:41 AM

'So it seems. Youre going in front, as you might know, I would get lost in Hell. Did he at least tell us which angel or do we have to guess around?' I stated and asked seriously, sitting on my little frozen chair, hands crossed under my chest. Though I did stand up, brushed away some crooks on my dress and summoned my staff for further use.

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Old 01-08-2010, 07:15 AM

Janen once more let out a sigh and closed his eyes. Again he wasn't thrilled to be going with the priestess angel, but orders were orders. "I already figured as such. After all I doubt really any actual angel knows their way around Hell as well as a demon would, so there's no need to state it. As to which angel, that I am unsure of. However it's Hell and therefore not many, if any, other actual angels would be down there and so locating them would not be a difficult task. I was informed however that the angel had appeared to be in pain and that, that had been the original reason to your summoning. I also know that currently the 'Door to Hell' is opened in the room that I had retrieved my Commander from and so that could very well be used as a way to get you there" he stated as calmly as he could. The white haired demon then turned and once more proceeded his way towards the hall that led to the room that held the needed door, assuming that the angel would follow.

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Old 01-08-2010, 01:55 PM

I melted the chair and made the water go into my staff, making sure to not leave it in the middle of a hall.
'Thanks for tellimg me the state of things. And I figured as much that it would concern healing cause if battling was asked for they wouldnt pick a priestess, or an angel when they have enough demon battlers on top of that. As for the way in hell, I am sure no angel except for a traitor making it a fallen knows it.' I said coolly, knowing that peace didnt mean asking angels for each and every job. Though I am just fine at battling
'Well then maybe the presence of the angel is 'hidden' since they seem to want to have the creature whatever cost considering they even managed to create a door to take the creature to hell with, and with that of course having the chance to get caught and made to cease existance after being tortured in a way only hell can. Though I do doubt that they could hide all of her presence.' I said, looking at the retreating form, sighing and then following Janen, Oh well, I had a good view on his uber cute fluttery wings, though this delight of course wasnt shown on my face.

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Old 01-08-2010, 02:24 PM

"Your in danger" Was all he said as he released his arm from her and walked along, releasing some fallen and then moving to Zeak. "Zeak, I should send you to hell right this instant for your stupdity of thinking the lord of Heaven would make you an angel again, AND for the fact that I have heard rumors going around that you think your going to become as great as Talon! Such things are pompous and you need to be put in your place, however I need your services so your punishment shal wait. Stay by the Princess as you have done so far and protect her."

He saw another fallen smirking and without hesitation chopped off his head and sent him directly to his Fathers hall.

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Old 01-08-2010, 09:03 PM

Phoenix hurt so badly and it was this pain that let her know she was still alive. She knew she had kept him off for a long while but he was so old and he had power. She couldn't help but let out a small whimper of pain as a tear slipped from her eye and slid down the side. She felt a taloned finger brush it away.

"So young and fragile. I took care not to damage you too much but it will take time for your mind to heal. I had to be rather aggressive with the walls and barriers you put up. So talented my little one. Do not fear I will keep you alive. You belong to me now," Zenos said possessively and softly in her ear. He stood up at full height and brushed back some of her loose hair and said, "I must go to get some things ready but I will return my little one. Some of my men will stay here and keep you from harm. I've shielded your energy so others don't come snooping for fresh meat. You read as a fallen now." He bent down and kissed her on the forehead. As he left he glared at his men letting them know that if anything happened to her they would be punished severely.

Phoenix felt his warm dry lips on her forehead and cringed inwardly. If he kept her in the sense that she was assuming it would mean that soon she would be a fallen. This old one would defile her. Being so weak, broken, and in pain it was harder to controll the fear that washed over her and one more small whimper escaped her angelic lips.

 



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