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Name: Alzeid Von goldwing
Age: ??? lost count over the years but if you want earth years he is five hundres but looks to be about 21
Race: angel
Appearence:
Bio: He was one of gods most trusted Angels and was like gods right hand. He helped everyone on earth and helped them fight off evil. But when he accidently helped a murderer who had a said that he had done it for good. But god started to wonder if he had lost his touch. After a while Alzeid started to help other people who went astray and god continued to wonder soon he couldn't take it anymore. He made Alzied a perminent angel on earth and he is to stay there till he can stop helping the evil people of earth. That happend more then five hundred years ago and he is still here today, helping whoever he wants and not giveing a crap about what god thinks.
Extra: He can make his wings invisible so that he can blend into the crowd better and can do a few other things(find out later)

ok Name: Sally
Age: 19
Race: Vampire
Looks: Redish long brwon hair with green eyes/slim
Bio: She was created agents her will an has been locked up for 3 months barly feeding she wishes not to harm people she hates what she is and the man who made her and has been keeping her here locked in a small dark room.

Alzied knocked on a door to a dark and menacing house. He was being paid to clean this guys house top to bottom and it was a easy job. He needed the money so he had said yes right away but now that he was here he was having second thoughts. The place looked evil and like count dracula lived inside. But he wasn't here just for looking. He was here to get this place and then payed. When no one answered the door right away he called, "hey, you asked me to clean your house so open the hell up." he called and then looked down, he saw a window to the basement. But it was to dark to see inside and he had a good feeling that the basement would be the hardest place to clean in this house of horror.

it was late and someone was knocking on the door? huh mus tbe masters friend or somthing...I didnt care..it was odd though for master to not open the door.. I hope he was dead...but then again I would surlye die in here...hmmm..I heard the knocking again..weird! finally my master opend up and I heard him say "come in..and get strted right away.."
get started on what? I heard someone up stares walking around...weird.

Alzied nodded and came in. He house was a complete mess but he usually started with the bottom and worked his way to the top. "sure, I will get straight to work." he said and made his way to the basement. It wasn' t any better, it was worse and it seemed like things where growing on the wall. "man, does this guy know how dirty it is down here." he said as he fliped on the light switch and started to get to work.

He was in the other room, right next to mine..Nah my room was locked..it took even the master a few minutes to open the door, he is not human..I can tell by his scent..but he does smell good..better than this room anyways...

I hope whoever he was coulnt smell how bad I smelt...ugh.

Alzeid soon finished that room and then saw a locked door. He always loved being able to clean things since it gave him an excuse to go threw peopls houses and see what they did. Locked rooms usually ment something bad and he loved seeing what they where. He went over to the door and unlocked it in a matter of seconds. He then opend it slowly and almost ran out, it smelled horrible in here. But that was why he was in here for, to clean everything. But just when he was about to start cleaning he saw her. A girl in the corner of the room, shrouded in darkness. Worry, care and many other emotions came over his face when he saw her and only made him glow slightly with angelic power. Locked girls in a room was never good and it was a first for him.

crap, he saw me. how did he open the door so fast? even my master could never do it that fast. I was sacred..he glowed and that was werid of course me craving blood isent exactly normal either now is it..I curled up into the corner as far as my chain let me.

he just stood there, looking disgusted..I know..it smells bad I though, now embarrsed.

IN a matter of seconds Alzeid threw the cleaning supplys down and went to her. He didnt care for the smell and worry was all over his face. He kneeled down a few feet away from her and held out a hand to show her he ment no harm. He had no idea what that man had done to her since she had been down here but by the look of the chain he didn't like it. "come here, I will get you out of here." he said softly, his voice held a inhuman kind of warm and care in it but yet it held no cruelty or hostility in it.

he wanted to help me? ohh master wont like this.."he will know" is what I say revealing my baby vampire teeth, I tremebled at the thought that my master knows everything it wasent natural to me...this guy really seemed to care about me for a strange reason..wait he was working for my master? so why is he helping me if he is friends with the master?

Alzeid laughed slightly, "sorry but I dont care if he knows. It is wrong to keep people down here and locked up. I dont like to see people like this." he said and moved slightly closer and brought his hand closer. "now come on, I dought he will be able to stop me form takeing you." he said and smiled slightly.

" I wouldnt doubt him" I say and look direclty into his eyes, I will wait until I am outta here to tell him what I am ..what HE made me into..a monster a freak...I let him take me into his arms I trust him I mean I have no choice in this matter its either him or the master.

"your pretty" I say with a slight smile, if I had blood I would have blushed when I said that to him, yet I dont, and I havent feed in months..I think..

Alzeid chuckled and smiled, "your not the first to say that but it means a lot. Now come on, I need to get you out of here before he finds out." he said as he gently took her hand and pulled her too her feet. "but first this has to go." he said and grabed the chain. It was old and he wondered why she hadn't broken it before. He snaped it like a twig and smiled at her, makeing his face glow. "now we can go." he said and took her hand, leanding her to the door.

I followed him out the door...Ohhh...he his is going to find out and be so mad "if he finds us..he will kill us and torture me.." I say while trying to keep up with him..I was weak from not feeding my whole life--vampire life that is...

I can here master coming our way.."he knows " I whisper.. and continue to follow this glowing
man who has saved..or ruined my life.

Alzeid smiled, "yeah and that is half the fun." he said and gently picked her up. She was moveing to slowly and he would be able to protect her easyer if he was close to her. "now just hang tight, you will be out of here in a few seconds." he said as he walked. When he saw the man he just looked at him. "I am takeing her and if you try to take her you will find yourself dead." he saidn, his voice was cold and cruel, nothing like before. THen he continued towards the front door like nothing had happend.

The master hissed at him and slashed him with his claws " You will not taker her away from me! I made her!" and he flew towards the glowing man.

Oh no...I scream when the man got hit by him " are you alright!?' I yell I cannot beleive this is happing I mean I am not that important.
" Its all right you dont need to fight for me Im nothing ok?" I say if I could cry I would be crying right now..no sobbing is more like it.

Alzeid just laughed and got up. The man had gotten him on the cheek and blood rand down. "nice hit, but your not the first one to try to kill me." he said and the would already started to heal. Angels always healed fast and he smiled, "now let me try." he said and punched the man in the stomach, sending him crashing threw a wall. "you better stay down if you know what is good for you."

" leave the girl" he hissed
" she is MINE I MADE HER!" but he stayed down he knew what HE was and what he could do.
and he let him take her, he would find another girl before the night was over.

I was surprised when his wounds healed instantly "wow" I say, I wonder what he is...he isent human nor is he a vampire..Huh..he left the old castle and went into the outside world. I freaked I havent been outside before..well since I have been vampire that is..

Alzeid laughed, "you may have made her but that doesn't mean you own her." he said and wlaked outside with her. He chuckled slightly when she started to freak and wrapped a arm around her shoulder. "calm down, little one, nothing is going to happen, not while I am here with you." he said with a smile and the glowing started to go down.

"sorry its been..well all my life since I have been outside.." I say and snuggle into his chest.
I know its going to be ok I am surprised my master..ex master let me go like that..
this man MUST be powerful, to over rule HIM.." I need to feed" I say.. I knew with that remark he would know that he cannot keep me with him Ill bring danger to him..

Alzeid chuckled and ruffled her hair gently. "yeah I guessed that from how you look." he said, his voice still held the care in it from before. "and since it seems that we have no one near by you can feed from me." he said and pointed to his neck. It would be risky but she needed the blood badly. She looked as if she might die any second. "just dont take to much of my blood, it can be very strong." he said as he looked at her.

he..wants me to feed on him? "well..um..ok..." I stood on my tippy toes and put my teeth agents his neck nad I bit down and fed.."mmmmmm" I moan he was wonderful, I dont think I can stop myself...."mmmm mmm mmmmmmm mm" I keep moaning and drinking off his hod tasty blood, this was amazing...

Alzeid laughed when he heard her moan and after about five minutes he gently pushed her away. "I think you have had enough, Angel blood can become adicting." he said as he looked at her. The bit mark on his neck was bleeding golden blood and it slowly started to heal. He didn't want his new little vampire friend to crave his blood forever.

"sorry.." I say "it was..amazing.." I say and looked away embarrssed..
"why did you help me..I mean you know what I am ..." I say and look at the ground..I started walking forward..it was nice having some strength.

Alzeid walked besides her and and smiled a light and careing smile. "It was the right thing to do and I can't stand to see people like that." he said as he walked next to her and smiled. She was nice but she needed new clothing, a shower and more blood. "and it is a angles duity to help people, I might not go by that rule all the time but I couldn't stand to see you down there." he said softly.