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Old 02-23-2010, 04:00 AM

Well i have a storyline but ineed a title and more characters and pics..
my story is about a young girl named Serenity(me) and a vamp(need some one) they meet as Serenity was walking her dog and she noticed a fight. they were in the air she was scared the guy the vamp was fighting knock Serenity on the ground vamp kill the guy. Vamp goes up to her asks if shes ok. she says yes then they walk around. Im stuck there if i can get some ideas and characters that will help alot! anyone is welcomed..
Im actually writting this so i would greatly appreciate this! i have a gaia accout to if you want to send abything there its anime luvs forever

Rules
1. be as detailed as possilbe
2. language is ok but block it out on here and gai please.
3. spell everything out dont go (hey how r u doin..plz.da etc.) actually put you are etc please.
4. get good pics you can draw them if you want.
5. Nothing From any movie manga anme please!!!
6. BE CREATIVE!!!!!

ok well the beginning is really weird.. ok?
Have you ever had a really weird moment. I have. but first have you ever seen a vampire? probably not! I saw one last week! All i was doing was walking my dog! when i saw a fight i thought it was a stupid fight between my neighborhood kids... NOT! one of the boys hit the other in the face and he just flew in the sky!! then the guy that hit him jumped and pulled out a sword* actually a katana =)* the one with the katana swung at the guy and the just flew back and hit me on the ground. then the katana guy ran and swung at the guy again and ...cut his head off... blood squirted every where including me! the katana guy came up to me and asked:
"Hey are you ok"
"...uhh i think"
"well i'm really sorry for what happened"
"..."
"My name is______(need name ok?)
"uhhhh my name is Serenity?"
"you souund unsure"
"I'm not"
"ok"
He helps me up and and says:
"Hey uhhhh well what you saw i have to explain."
"ok go"
"Im a VAMPIRE"
"...*gulp*"
"Don't be scared I'm good!"
"But...."
"he was an evil demon guy dont worry......"
"What."
"your aura its..its purple.."
"OOO really. cool"
"no only royalty has that"
"HAHAHA I'm not royal blood sucker"
"....thanks B***h"
"...F**k you youre the vamp!!"
"whatever i wont protect you."
"I NECER WANTED YOU HELP"
"whatever Bye"

Last edited by serenity love; 02-24-2010 at 01:37 AM.. Reason: The Story

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Old 03-19-2010, 02:08 AM

The vamps name should be Vayne. Pronounced like vain and vein.

 



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