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Old 10-28-2010, 11:14 PM

Elements

A lonely elf decides to follow this prophecy about this young girl who's able to control the four elements of the world. Fire, earth, water, and air. What he doesn't expect is that his travels sends him to different worlds. While he looks like a normal human as he explores Earth, a place he'd just traveled too, he finds that his search sends him to very very strange places. Like a strip club! He walks in and finds that she's one of the workers. While she looks like a normal cute girl he recognizes her right away. Will this prince be able to convince her to go back to his world and save it? Or will he be shot down and called crazy? Lets find out on our way to find the Elements....




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Old 10-28-2010, 11:26 PM

(I'm not going to do a bio, I don't know what to put in it...XP))

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Name: Andre Mcnight.
Age: looks 19
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((Okay, can you do the first post? I'm thinking of something to wright but I need you to start.))

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Old 10-28-2010, 11:35 PM

Yeah i'll start. I'm finishing up mine and I didn't wanna do a bio either. Sorry for taking so long....had to deal with family. ~sigh~

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Old 10-28-2010, 11:37 PM

(Its okay)

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Old 10-28-2010, 11:51 PM

The name I was given: Akeno Davis

The number of candles on my cake: 19

My good looks:



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Akeno huffed softly as she lifted another large brown box up and to its proper spot in the large silver box that was refrigerated. She lifted her right hand and pushed some of her pink hair strands out of her face. She smiled at the work that she'd done that morning. She cleaned up the front room, well as much as you can a strip club, and then moved all the refrigerated things that they were going to be using that day into the fridge box. She turned around as she shut and made sure that it was closed. She looked around the place and wondered when the others would start arriving.

The bartender Steve was setting up a few of the mixes that was used to make the drinks. The man was tall and had dark brown hair. He had a off green color eyes but that was because of the contacts he wore. She couldn't say much because she hide bright green nail polish on. She looked down at her fingers nails making sure that they hadn't gotten damaged and then decided to go wash her face since she'd had a nice work out before she actually had to deal with some of the pigs that came here.

She walked down the hall and passed the public bathrooms to the nice and clean employees bathroom. She walked across the white tile floor and over to the white sinks that were attached to the wall. She was glad that they were put a little higher then most sinks because bending down didn't take that much of an effort for her. She turned the silver handles and water poured out of the foist. She leaned forward a bit and let water fill her hands. She lifted it up and over her face as she started to wash her face a bit. She washed her face and then reaplied deodorant and perfume as she looked at her clock. "Time to open up." she said as she walked out of the bathroom and back the way she came to the front room as the manager opened the door for business. She had a feeling that today was going to be a long day.


Occ. sorry for taking forever. I went into the bathroom and almost died...who knew some girls were that filthy...and cause I'm strange I couldn't leave it.

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Old 10-29-2010, 12:40 AM

Andre was walking around the streets, he couldn't believe that he had to go to another world just to find the girl he was looking for. The other planet was calm and a lot more quite than earth. He thought the smell of the city he was in was weird and made his nose itch. He brushed hid light brown hair out of his face and looked around. He was on some street, he couldn't make out the words on the sign.

He sighed and leaned on the wall of the building he was standing on, it was some clothing store, well all he could make out on the sign of the store was clothing.

((Ooc. I hope that was okay...I wasn't sure what to wright...I can redo it if you want me too?.:sweat:))

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Old 10-29-2010, 12:53 AM

Akeno blinked a few times as she watched the dancers start to come out and she got ready. She started walking around taking orders from the customers (if they could be called that) that decided to buy a dance or two depending on the group and how many there were in a booth. She waved to her friend Sammi as she walked up on the one stage and started to dance around with the music that started to play. She let her work as she got the cocktails and the beers that were ordered. After she finished with that she decided to go out on a break and grab something to eat since she had started working around eight in the morning and it was already five in the afternoon.

She walked over and grabbed her coat. She walked over to the bartender and smiled cutely. "I'm gonna head out to get something to eat. I haven't eaten all day and I'm starved." she told him as she tilted her head to the said with a bright smile. "You think you could handle this for a bit while I'm gone?" she asked as she used all the cute she could muster to get out for a bit. Her stomach growled and she blushed slightly.

"Yeah of course. You go to dinner. Bring me back a burger and we'll call it even." he told her with a hearty laugh as he heard her stomach growl at her. He loved how much Akeno cared about the place but he did feel she worked too much and didn't take enough breaks so this made him happy.

"Thanks." she said as she waved him good bye for now at least, and then ran out the door. She would get his burger before she returned. She went down the street and decided to window shop a bit as she walked to find some actual food.


Occ: yep its fine. And just let me know if mine get to long. Sometimes I get to into it.

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Old 10-29-2010, 01:17 AM

((I think I get to into it sometimes, its hard not to if its a RP you like. :lol:))

Andre sighed and started to walk around, he walked into the street without looking. A car almost hit him but he dodged it before it could hit him. He sighed with relief and got up. He wanted to have a word with the man who almost hit him but they drove away. He growled slightly then sighed, he needed to calm down. But it was hard when you almost got hit with a car, he could have died, but he didn't so he had to get over it.

Andre walked to the other side of the street and looked around, there was so many people around him. How could he tell if he girl he was looking for was around? What if she had passed by him without him knowing or there were to many people around and blocked his view of her?

He sighed angrily and kicked a can aside. He was getting tired of all of the people who would push him out of the way or yell at him for being in there way. "I swear if one more person pushes me out of there way then I'm going to flip them over!" he mumbled. Well another person did push him out of the way and he did like he said he would, he flipped them over, the bad part was that the guy he flipped over was a lady who had pepper spray...He found out that the lady didn't like being flipped over by some guy and she sprayed him with pepper spray, in his eyes.

He yelled and ran away. He managed to get to the park and find a water fountain. He cupped water into his hands and splashed his face with water over and over again until his eyes stopped hurting.

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Old 10-29-2010, 01:29 AM

Akeno shopped around and ended up buying a shirt that she thought looked cute. Oh not to mention it was on sale. seventy-five percent off. She was taking it. She flipped some of her hair out of her face as she found her way down to the food shops. She had a few choices but decided on getting something healthish. She decided on a ceaser salad with the dressing to match. She smiled happily as she started to drool. She loved this salad and the dressing was made it all complete.

She walked away from the food shops and decided a nice patch of grass would be a great place to eat. She walked down the road then took a left. She walked to the edge of the pavement and then looked both ways before running across. The park it was. She thought about what she was going to do when she got home. A nice bath and sleep. It sounded like heaven to her at the moment. She let her mind wonder as she continued to walk. The park wasn't that far so she knew she would have plenty of time to eat and get back before Steve and Sammi burned the place down.

When she got there she decided to go to her favorite spot right near the water fountain so she could dip her feet and eat but there was someone there already. And he looked a victim of pepper spray. She knew because she'd used it on a few guys who'd gotten to friendly with her at the strip club. She was a worker, not one of the strippers. She walked over to him and grabbed a cloth out of her bag. She dabbed the water on it and then looked at him. "I know how to help. Just sit down and put this on your eyes. It will soak out the pepper and you'll be better in no time." she said as she gently put her hand on his shoulder.

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Old 10-29-2010, 02:02 AM

((Occ: Sorry it took so long to reply, I had to do the dishes.))

Andre opened his eye slightly, he looked at the girl or boy...or maybe a girl..Well he couldn't tell, his vision was blurred from the pepper spray. He stood up straight and took the cloth and put it over his eyes. "Thank you...miss? Your a girl right? I can't tell, my vision is blurred, the pepper spray did it." he said.

Andre dabbed his eyes a few more times and then took the cloth off of his eyes. He looked at Akeno, but he still couldn't se very well so he couldn't recognize her. He smiled slightly and said "Again thank you for helping me make the pain stop. That lady didn't have to spray me with that stuff. She asked for what I did to her, she pushed me aside and I flipped her over, then she sprayed me in the eyes with pepper...She needs to learn some manners.".

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Old 10-29-2010, 02:20 AM

Akeno couldn't help a soft giggle that left her lips. The man was indeed funny. She tilted his head back by pushing on his forehead and placed it back on his eyes and pressed gently. "Keep it in. And most girls don't like to be handled roughly." she said as she sat next to him and let her feet slip slowly into the cool clear water. She watched the rippled role on the water away from her feet as they slipped in. It was a nice day to eat outside and she hoped it stayed like this. She let her hands softly run across the water and watched as it moved with and around her finger. She loved the way the water felt.

She looked back at the man that was sitting next to him and she realized that she'd forgotten to introduce herself. "Oh my, my manors. My name is Akeno Davis." she said as she lifted her fingers from the water and then dried them on her pants before taking his hand. "I'm glad to meet you. Oh, and something you should know about New York, where we are, people are known for pushing, shoving, and just plainly trying to get to where they are going. Not many people have much the care to worry about what other people think of the way they act, talk, or even touch you." she explained as she took the cloth and dabbed it in the water once more and drained it so it wouldn't drip all over his cloths and then place it once more back on his eyes.


Occ: its fine. I know there's a life out there besides this and some times it likes to hit. lolz

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Old 10-29-2010, 02:31 AM

Andre chuckled and said "I found that out the hard way. Girls will spray you with pepper spray if you flip them over...I don't want to see what they would do if I did something like kick them somewhere sensitive or punch them...They might stab me or just kill me.". Andre was glad that someone was being nice to him and not shoving him out of the way.

"Oh my name is Andre Mcnight, its nice to meet you Akeno...I've heard that name before but I don't remember where, I'll probably remember later." he said. Andre scratched his head and sighed. He couldn't wait for the pepper spray to get out of his eyes, it hurt like hell. "I think I prefer the place I was living in far more than New York, this place is louder and more crowded and the people are rude....Well not all of them, your one of the few who have been nice to me.".

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Old 10-29-2010, 02:57 AM

Akeno couldn't help to laugh at his comment. "I'm sorry Andre. But you seem to have many funny comments. She said as she turned her body slowly using his shoulder slightly to keep from falling in the water. She got on her knees and then turned him a little and then removed the cloth. The redness was almost gone from around his eyes and it was looking less swollen. She softly ran her finger over the tops of his eyelids just making sure that there was no rash or any bad reaction that he might have gotten from it. "Good. No reaction." she said as she went back into her bag.

"Let see you open your eyes." she said as she got out her eye drops. "I want to see if they are any better." she said as she let her hand rest softly on hiks cheek. She gently removed her fingers from his cheek and smiled. She was happy to be of some help. she was completely forgetting about her salad and the fact that she was hungry. Maybe I'll save it for later... she thought to herself as she waited for his eyes to open.

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Old 10-29-2010, 06:43 PM

"They are? Well your not the only person who said that..." Andre said. He turned around so Akeno could do whatever that was needed to be done on his eyes. He sighed and said "Okay, I'll open them...". Andre slowly opened her eyes, when they were open he closed them again, the sunlight made his eyes hurt a little. He tried to open his eyes again, and he kept them open. His vision was still a little blurry.

He smiled and said "My eyes don't hurt that much anymore...They feel a lot better.". Andre looked around for a moment, he wanted to see what his surroundings looked like, he couldn't see the clearly but he could tell what was around him.

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Old 11-01-2010, 09:35 PM

Akeno was glad to hear that he was doing better but she could tell with the way his eyes weren't focusing right that he couldn't see just right. She tilted his head. "Keep your eyes open." she said as she took the top off of the white bottle and squeezed it gently and let a few drops fall into his eyes. She let him blink after she put the a few drops in the other eye. She replaced the cap back on the bottle thens stuck it back in her bag.

"That should help your eyes if they are blurry or anything."
she said as she looked back down at her watch. "I'm sorry, seems my lunch is over. I have to go back to work." she said as she looked down at her lunch and then turned to him. "Here. You can enjoy this since it seems I have to get to work. I'll get something there. Please enjoy this salad." she said as she gave him the sandwich then put her bag on. She bowed to him slightly as she waved. "Well I'll see you around." she said as she turned and then ran off to her work. It was only a five minute walk but she was already late for it. She sighed slightly as she thought about what she was going to do now. She knew that she had to get to work. She couldn't miss a day because she needed the money for her new place she was saving to get.

She felt a cooling breeze run across her skin and soon she was calm and relaxing a bit more then before. "I wonder why you always relax me..." she said aloud as she walked back into the strip club and gave Steve his sandwich. "There." she said as she smiled at him and went back to get orders from the pigs.

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Old 11-01-2010, 10:27 PM

Andre nodded "Okay, I'll keep them open.". Andre blinked a few times when Akeno dropped the eye drops in his eyes, it was a weird feeling. He didn't like the feeling that much, but it passed. "Thank you for helping me Miss. Akeno." he smiled slightly. When Akeno sat the sandwich in his lap he picked it up and looked at it, he hadn't eaten all day. "Thank you and good bye." he waved good bye to Akeno "See you later.".

Andre's stomach growled at him, he was very hungry. He chuckled and started eating, he devoured the sandwich in a few seconds. He whipped his mouth with his sleeve and smiled, the sandwich was pretty good. 'Akeno is a nice person....I hope she has a nice life....' Andre got up and stretched, he could see now and he was full of food, well full of a sandwich anyway.

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Old 11-01-2010, 11:57 PM

Akeno finished with the last shift and by the end of it all she could think of doing was sleeping. She wasn't sure why but she no longer felt the need to eat. Her body felt on fire and for the last half hour she'd been standing in a corner just staring at it. Steve walked over and gently touched her shoulder. "Let me take you home Akeno. You look exhausted." he told her worriedly as he lead her to her coat and helped her get it on. "No, I have a lot of work to do." she finally said as she looked at the shop. It was all clean and everything was packed away.

"I did it for you. You've worked three days in a row so just relax and sleep." he told her as he took her hand and lead her out and into the street. She walked on unsteady feet and an empty stomach. She still hadn't eaten and her body was suffering now. Steve held her up with his arm as he lead her down the street to her house. He couldn't believe that she had gotten this bad. He helped her into the front door and then waved her good-bye.

Akeno whimpered softly as she felt her body start to heat up more. She touched the counter and a small flame appeared. She walked into the kitchen and through to the bathroom. She opened the door and when she let go a flame was left behind. The flames started up quick and took no time in devouring the house as she turned on the water. She didn't notice anything. She just fell into the tub, water spilling around her body as the tub filled and she passed out unable to stay conscience anymore. The flames continued to move through the house and towards the bathroom.

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Old 11-02-2010, 12:56 AM

Andre was walking around town, but this time he was going around people, he still didn't like the city. A few people ran into him and yelled at him He sighed and walked away. He decided to take a short cut through an ally. It was covered in trash and cats. He sighed and continued to walk, he needed to stay away from the humans.

After a while Andre found himself in someplace that had a...*"Snip cloud" he didn't know what that was o he stayed away from it. When he walked down the street he started to smell smoke. He didn't know if that was good so he followed the scent of smoke. When he finally found the place that the scent was coming from he gasped, there was smoke coming from the windows of the house, and it looked like some of it was on fire.

He didn't know if anyone was home but he didn't want any human dying in there it there was one in there. He ran to the door and kicked it down, he didn't even try to see if it was locked but he didn't care. When he walked into the house he saw some smoke coming from the living room, kitchen, and some other places. He went down on his knees and started crawling around the house. "Hello! Is anyone here?!" he yelled. WHen he made it to the bathroom, he didn't see any flames in it, but they were close.

He gasped a little when he saw a girl, who was ether asleep or she had fainted, inside of the bath tube, to his surprise it was Akeno. He growled and ran into the bathroom, he picked her up, bridle style, and walked out of the bathroom. The flames were really close to the bath room, he cursed under his breath and sighed. He put Akeno over his shoulders and went to his knees, he started to crawl towards the front door.

When he was half way to the front door part of the ceiling fell down and blocked the door way. "Damn it!!" he yelled. Andre turned around and crawled to the living room, he was going to see if there was a window in there. When he was in the living room he did see a window. He smiled and crawled really fast to the window. When he was at the window he put Akeno down and got up. He kicked the window, causing it to brake, and picked up Akeno. He put her on his shoulder and jumped out of the window.

He ran, as fast as he could, away from the house. When he was a good sixty feet away from the house he stopped running and put Akeno down. He started to shake her a little and said "Akeno, wake up! Wake up Akeno!".

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Old 11-02-2010, 02:17 AM

Akeno could feel the water leaving her body and she could feel it heating up again. Her body couldn't stop his body from calming down. Her eyes slowly opened as she looked up at him. Her eyes were all fogy. "P-Please...I'm hot..."she whimpered as she touched her shirt and it started to steam. It lifted up off her shirt and it started to light but it rolled right off her skin and onto the ground where it started to flame.

The water rolled off her skin and onto the water as the wind started to blow around the two of them gently caressing and swirling around slowly getting colder and colder. Her eyes would close slowly then return open to look up at him then return closed again. This happened for a few more times and it seemed like she was out of it as the elements that she controlled tried to help her like she seemed to help them grow stronger. She whimpered softly as she tears started to fall down her cheeks.

The earth around the two started to change as it stink around them. It created a small hole that filled up around with water. The water steamed as it touched her body and she slowly relaxed as her skin started to cool. It was the first time it got this bad. Normally she would stay at the strip club and sleep in the freezer and be better but she was unable tonight since Steve took her home.

 


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