why the heck would it cost so much, though?
it really doesn't make sense...
40 bucks would be reasonable.

idk momo idk

thank u 4 the compliments about the pictures....now who wants 2 see wat i have 4 the story, that is it u feel like reading?

send it my way, please!

*smiles nervously* o-o-ok, i-i hope n-no one minds if i post it in this thread, it will be the prologue and Andy is the first 2 speak. I tried 2 make it sound Angelic and something Andy would say but i dont think it turned out well -.- opinions?:

Originally Posted by The Girl Born of Darkness

Prologue:

My name is Andraus, well that it my human name. My real name is Remiel and I am an arch-angel of heaven. I am the third one of heaven. I am extremely old, I kind of lost track of my age a long time ago. But I know that I have been visiting the planet earth, one of god’s creations, since the beginning. But that is where I must stop talking about myself; for I am too busy watching someone that has caught my eye for a while now. The figure is currently walking down the streets of a somewhat tainted city of, what the humans called, Downtown Pittsburgh. She is human, her figure is outstanding. As an Angel, I cannot fall for such a creature whose soul is tainted from the filth that hovers in the air and yet her soul was clean. A soul that is both clean and dirty, it is not normal yet it is common…for supernatural beings. The girl isn’t really human; she is a creature that isn’t meant to exist. This girl is a Succubus and a fallen angel. Both creatures are claimed to be unholy and yet they are able to produce such a lovely creature as this girl. Her name you ask, her name is Gothika Horrifica of the Succubus Hel’Len and the Fallen Angel Marcus. But that is all I know at the moment, but I know her figure is…hypnotizing. She wears a sort a dark violet dress that sways in the breeze it almost touches the ground as she walks along the cement sidewalks. Small white ruffled trims go along the outline of this dark dress, to be more specific, they were along the edges of her sleeves that look like they weren’t attached to the dress physically and they seem to act like a very lose belt as it seems to stretch from her right thigh to, I believe, where her knees are. Her hips weren't too wide or too thin, it seemed to me that her figured was related to a standard hourglass. Her hair was a standard blonde color, not too light and not too dark; it also seems to be very long. Her skin is the color of brown sugar. From where I was standing, I believe that she was also wearing white thigh-length stockings, and her…GAHHH!!!

Andraus quickly crouched, knowing that Gothika couldn't see him. His whole face seemed to blush a deep red color as the words scrambled in his mouth, words that the other Arch-Angels would find disturbing. Andraus peeked over the ledge of an old apartment building that shared a store on the bottom floor. He found his bewitching ‘friend’ still walking as if nothing was wrong and that everything was ok. He jumped up onto the ledge and walked along it with ease, jumping to each building that was almost 12 to 14 feet apart. Looking down, he followed her movements like music and relaxed when she came to a halt.

Oh dear, does she know that she was being followed? My dear Gothy, I will not harm you. I shall protect you from evil villains that wish to torment you. But I must say that you, my beloved vixen, are a delicate flower that sways in a summer breeze, undisturbed and lovely. I am forced to watch you from a distance, a distance that I do not like once so ever. I wish to hold my dear, I wish to relieve the stress that has burden you for so many years; but this distance is the only thing that is stopping me from making me feel like a fool and embarrass you. Watching…waiting…and the plan to show you the light, a light that you should have seen so long ago. The Light of Heaven itself. I can show you this, I can prove my love for you and I can show you that I care for you. I will be your guardian angel from this moment on and I shall protect you. Gothika Horrifica, daughter of Succubus Hel’Len and Fallen Angel Marcus, my beloved; I shall not fail you. For I would whether die than see you in pain.

Andraus slouched on a different ledge of a different building. His semi-spiked white silver hair dangled in his face. His dark blue jacket hugged his sides and swayed in the fall winds. His body was a medium build, his shirt remained untucked and strapped on to his body with only two buttons. His pants were black and hugged most of his legs as he crossed them, still standing. Andraus watched with gold piercing eyes at his love, the girl that was taking his heart and held it in her clutches. ‘My love…One day, I shall sweep you off your feet and into a light of happiness and I promise that not even the Goddess of Love and Sex can’t get to me.’ He told to himself with a soft chuckle and continued observing her movements.

omg i love it. i love how andy isn't as perverted as he really is in that story lol

I love it, too! It's really good so far!
the only thing I'd change is this part here "His semi-spiked white silver hair dangled in his face.".
I'd say "His spiky silver hair dangled in his face", or "His silver hair clung to his face.".

Now, I also have to say, that if Andraus ever started talking like that, I will beat the living HELL out of him.
In the story, it's perfect! But if Andraus started acting like that in real life...-shivers-

>>.....-starts writing somthing down- >:3

-stabs andraus with a pencil-
don't. you. dare.

>>...do what? -innocently.-

You know. >(

momo for all you know he was writing stuff for gothi's story. no need to stab. also yay me i have classes picked for next year. i am taking algebra 2, world history, english 10, biology, CAI and II, intro surv of agricultural system (have to take that befor ei take animal science since i am gonna be a vet), and i am taking speech/drama. my alternative elective is spanish. Si senorita and seniors lol

It's not like that, buffy.
we all know andy's planning something.

hehehe i guess your right

Actually, I was Making Gothika's Charecter for My story. Assholes.

Hey i didn't think anything andy. also i was making a story of all of us too but then the incident with my charger and all.

also here are the characters finished for my story.

Suilia

Suilia used to be a powerful archangel. But that all changed the day she was sent on an assignment to kill the demon lord Ladros’s human accomplice Jake. She ended up falling in love with the human. It turns out they were meant to be soul mates. But it was forbidden for archangels to fall in love with mortals so the other angels stripped her of her powers and she became a fallen. She didn’t care seeing as now she could be with the one she loved. But Ladros had heard of the betrayal as well. He killed Jake himself one night when he was sleeping. When Suilia went to see him, she saw himm dead. Since then Suilia has been emotionless and cold and cruel. She plans to destroy the archangels for exiling her and killing Jake. Atleast she thinks they are the ones who killed him.



Ladros

As a powerful demon general he makes sure all of the missions he gives his operatives end up complete. If they don’t he kills them and finished them himself. That is the reason he killed Jake. He was a weak human who couldn’t off one little archangel. But when he heard of Jake not only failing to kill Suilia but falling in love with her, he killed him. The only reason he didn’t off Suilia himself was because he has something special in mind since the odds are now in his favor seeing as he controls the fallen angels. He plans to use Suilia to kill the archangels which is why he planted the want to kill them in Suilia’s mind. The only thing left for him to do is watch and wait. He might even get a beautiful bride when it is all finished with.



Stefan

Stefan is your every day bounty hunter. The only twist is he is a bounty hunter for demons. He kills archangels and fallen. He doesn’t get hired he just offs everyone he can find. He has heard of a fallen around and has been looking for her. He had a difficult childhood. A fallen angel killed his parents but he survived and has been after them since. He has no clue how much his goal will change when he meets Suilia.

hey buffy, you said you found a Trailer to a House of Night movie?

Buffy: i like the charries XD they're awesome.
Andy: i cant wait 2 see it.
Momo: thank u 4 the tip.

Momo & Buffy: here are ur charries, let me kno if u like them,

Momo:

Momo – a shape-shifter from Hell and a friend of Gothika. She is one of few demons that cares for her friends and is willing to help Gothika not enter Hell. Momo is a carefree demon and loves to read yaoi mangas on her spare time, any other she’s keeping Jason from seducing Gothika whenever she can. Has the ability to change her shape and also the powers of fire.

Buffy:

an Arch-Angel with Andraus, she is the second Arch-Angel whose real name is Rachel. She is kind, level headed and has an iron fist. She is second in command when the First Arch-Angel is away on business. The mission is to find the Fallen Succubus and kill her, but Buffy is finding it difficult to do so when she meets her herself and Andraus refusing to obey orders. Has the ability to control the wind and read minds from across dimensions. She can keep the winds from getting out of control and the potential to kill a human.

@Everyone: do u all wish to read chpater one....even though it a lil long >.<

sure! I might have to read ti tomorrow, though.

Daaaamn! My character has a nice...dress.
Yes, a nice dress.
I like it! Good job! hehe ^ u^b

i like it gothika. my angel is awesomeness yes i wanna read it it will give me something to read on my way to school lol. and yes i found a house of night trailer. i found one for all the books. well most of them. after tempted it is just pictures of characters and all. but if you go to www.houseofnightseries.com i think thats the sight. you can see videos and buy the books and see all the characters. again i say i love the dude they are using for kalona. also did you know there is another series after the last book. the first book of the next house of night series is called dragon's oath. then there is another called lenobia's vow. i think it is going to be about the teachers now idk.

Serenity 'lilith' Night-shade [Aka Gothika]

After the Fall of the Kingdom of Minuam, Demonic lords took control of Various Provinces. Serenity is the Daughter of Lady Arial no Nusubito, The Demonic queen of the Succubi. When war began between the Demon lords, Arial Feared for her Daughters Safty, and Whiped Her memory Clean, Also Surpressing her Powers. She Does not know who she is, only that she was raised by Two Wealthy Farm owner's. She has a Demon Servent watching her, to make sure she doenst learn the Truth of her Heiritage, and to protect her from Demon-Slayers.

whatchu think? btw, Arial is momo :3 il get her profile soon..

Oh god...I'm scared to see what kind of picture you're going to put up. e__e

So far, she's pretty cool.

i like it too. btw momo and gothi what do you guys want to be in my story?
a fallen, an archangel, or one of ladros's servants.

I'd say Fallen

ok i will come up with a unique name for you :)