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dragonjake 03-30-2012 12:54 PM

I doubt Andy will join XD

momochan 03-30-2012 10:49 PM

maybe...sucks if he doesn't

Gothika_Knight 03-30-2012 11:12 PM

i need some ideas 4 pedophile pics >.> im trying 2 draw some but i cant think of anymore

and I added a new chapter 2 me srry, who wants 2 read it.

momochan 03-30-2012 11:16 PM

lolwut
pedofile pics? o__o
is this...some fetish of yours (jkjkjkjkjk) or is it an assignment?
please tell me it's a weird ass assignment.

I do, I do! 8D

Andraus 03-30-2012 11:17 PM

Wow, gothy, i didnt know you liked playing with little boys ;)

Cupcake Queen 03-30-2012 11:23 PM

just draw creppy guys who look all gloomy and scary gothy btw i want to read it!!!!

momochan 03-30-2012 11:30 PM

/snort
just draw old men who look like they'd be pedos.
Make sure you put black trench coats on them!

Gothika_Knight 03-30-2012 11:59 PM

oh no *creepy smile* better idea

Pedos:
Andy
Kraven
DragonJake
HappyDeath

Victims:
Momo
Buffy
Gothika

im soooooo bored XD and let the drawing begin

Quote:

Originally Posted by The Girl Born of Darkness
Chapter 2: Gothika’s Time
My name is Gothika Horrifica. I am not human; I am a creature that is almost a contradictory. A Fallen and a Succubus at the same time, or in translation The Fallen Succubus. I can’t even remember the times when I actually felt human, it’s impossible to do. I am never allowed to know what it is like to truly be one. I often wonder if my immortality is a curse or a blessing. Wait, a blessing is something that is bestowed upon you by a Holy creature such as God, but I have not been touched by him. So I guess that my life is a curse. I am not surprised by this for I am use to it. But that is enough about my life; I am currently walking to The Point. It’s where the Fountain is and where the three rivers meet. I like going to that place. It is very peaceful and quiet there so I won’t have to think about demons, people or angels I don’t like. Especially Jason and Jessie. Those two are getting on my last nerves but I have no choice but to listen to them, they are older and way stronger than me. But I can’t think of that now. I just want to enjoy this time I have being alone and away from them. Jason and Jessie are in Hell right now but they are able to come and scare me as if they were trained to do so. I know that I’m not alone with them, I have my best friend who knows what I am going through and that I can turn to him for help. Maybe even that boy Hunter who saved me from that Arch-Angel, I’ll be seeing him again but I hope I didn’t make it sound as if I am a creeper. I just met him but he seems like a decent soul that will protect me.

Gothika Horrifica continued to walk to the Point. She made it safely to the place she was going to, she sat at her favorite spot on a small hill and looked at the view around her. A smile appeared on her face as she heard the cars and the people playing with each other. However, her happiness changed when she saw something wavy behind her, she looked back but couldn’t turn around completely until she felt hands on her boobs. She shrieked and blushed red jumping from her spot then looked back. It was Fredrick, a shape shifter from Hell and he was in his human form. Fredrick is cocky, strange and a very awkward person.

I started to wiggle around and grabbed his hands and pulled them away, “What was that for you pervert?” I asked him in a startled tune and covered my chest standing up and moving away from Fredrick.
“I was dared to do it. But I have to say Gothika, you boobs are very soft.” He said in his sort of creepy voice. “Why? Please don’t tell me that it was Jessie.” I said holding my arms and started to walk away. Fredrick stood up and grabbed my arm and started pulling me to a more private area, I tried to pull my arm away from him but he was so strong and I had to say, a little scary, which wasn’t like him. He pinned me to a tree and just pressed his body against mine “Fredrick, get away from me.” I cried softly trying to push him away. “I can’t, this is the dare and it wasn’t from Jessie. It was from Jason, I don’t want to do this but, like all Succubi, you’re so irresistible.” He said placing his hand on the tree and placed his other hand on my leg. I blushed more and continued to try and push him away as he lift my leg up and wrapped it around him…

Gothika continued to pry Fredrick off her even though she was failing terribly. Meanwhile, Lexie, an angel of Heaven, was flying around minding her own business like she always did. As she was flying she closed her eyes for a minute so that she could get something out of her eyes, when she opened them she saw that she was about to fly into an airplane. She dived quickly enough to get out of the way of the plane. A smile appeared on her face as she saw the plane fly as if it never saw her unfortunately she didn’t remember to flap her wings. Lexie’s eyes widen as she started heading towards the tree Gothika and Fredrick were at. She smacked the tree and slammed Fredrick into the ground, causing him to let go of Gothika and fall to the ground passing out. Lexie groaned softly as she got up slowly and rubbed her head. Her droopy car ears wiggled slightly in pain as she folded her large white wings, her white hair was messed up but was a quick fix, Lexie then looked down and looked at Gothika.

What the heck? Where did she come from, I didn’t sense her coming here, well then again I can’t sense anyone or anything at all. I stared at the angel girl as she looked at me. I have to admit that she was interesting person but how did she get here like she did?

“Oh my god, I’m so sorry. I couldn’t stop flying, I hope I didn’t interrupt anything.” She said in a panicked voice looking back at me and Fredrick. I looked at her and shook my head quickly, “Y-You d-didn’t, come on and let’s go before he wakes up.” I said gently grabbing her hand and started walking away from Fredrick as he laid there. The Angel girl just looked at me as I led her away and towards a small clearing from the Point. The Angel girl seem to be looking at me crazy when I sat her on a stone wall by, from what I believe, was the Ohio River. I sat next to her and looked at the Angel Girl, “I’m sorry about that, I had to get us away from him. But what is an Angel like you doing on Earth?” I asked her tilting my head as the Angel Girl turned her head away from me. I was a little confused about this action that she did this; I thought angels were supposed to be confident Light Creatures like demons. She then spoke in a soft voice, it was a miracle that I could hear her, “M-M-M-My n-n-name i-i-is L-L-Lexie.” She said looking at the ground then the water. This is the first time I have to say that a person wasn’t looking at me, well my boobs anyways, so I have to see if I can try and be a little nicer to the girl. “Please to meet you Lexie, how are you? I hope you’re okay?” I asked her as placing my hand on her shoulder. Lexie jumped and looked at me with light brown honey eyes, “I-I’m fine but I-I-I’m ju-ju-just sh-shy wh-when it comes to meeting o-other angels. Wh-What kind of angel are you? I can sense you are one but I’m not able to tell which kind.” She said to me as she wiggled her ears curiously and waited for my answer. My eyes widen as I thought about what I could say ‘She might be a low level angel.’ I thought to myself as I opened my mouth to speak, “I-I-I’m an angel…but I am not a normal angel, I’m a Fallen Angel.” I said in a small voice as her eyes widen to the size of saucer plates. I looked at the ground not really surprised about this either; then again, no angels have ever asked me such a question. I was about to get up when Lexie grabbed my arm, “I-It’s ok, I-I doing mind that y-you’re a Fallen Angel, just a-as long as you don’t kill me.” She said with a soft smile on her face. I gasped lightly and smiled back as she stood up and started to turn into her human form. The strange thing was that her ears never went away. I giggled softly as Lexie blushed lightly, “The ears are cute.” I said softly as she walked away. I looked back to make sure that Fredrick was still down.

Gothika and Lexie continued walking away as Fredrick slowly got up and looked back as they left. Fredrick was a special type of demon, well his appearance was. His body was a medium build with dark brown clothing and his collar stretching to the middle of his stomach. Pale tan metallic gauntlets, shin plates and shoulder pads. Four curved horn-like breast pieces on his chest and a skull belt. Fredrick’s hair was prepped and blonde with a par of grey horns and his bangs covering his right eye, his eyes were red when he was in his half demon half human form as his long dark red scarf and pointed ears made him stand out. He cracked his neck and rubbed the back of his head, “Well that was interesting. But I will do the dare...when she least expects it.” He said to himself as he turned and walked away.


Cupcake Queen 03-31-2012 12:03 AM

i want more it is so intresting gothika!!!! you should get this published when you finish.

momochan 03-31-2012 12:09 AM

It's really good! There are a few typos, but other than that, it's really interesting!

Cupcake Queen 03-31-2012 12:10 AM

i am almost done with the second chapter of my story too but i am trying to make it super intresting.

momochan 03-31-2012 12:16 AM

Instead of trying to make it interesting, you should make sure it's going the way you want it to.
If people are going to like the story, they'll be interested the whole way through, not by a bunch of events.

Cupcake Queen 03-31-2012 12:33 AM

ok good advice momo

also guess what i gt two pet bunnies i will post pics later

Gothika_Knight 03-31-2012 12:33 AM

Buffy: u have to try to think of wat ur 'audience' will think after they read it.

Everyone: heres the next chapter i read *sweatdrop* im not really sure wat happened.

Quote:

Originally Posted by The Girl Born of Darkness
Chapter 3: Fredrick’s Chance

My name is Fredrick. I am a Shape-Shifter and a proud one. But that’s all I’m saying able myself. At the moment I have to think about how I’m going to get Gothika. She has escaped my grasp because something had the strength to knock me out letting her escape. I’m pissed of course but only because if I don’t do this Jason will rip my horns out of my head. Believe it or not, I’m stronger than Jason and can kick his ass whenever I want but there are things that he does I can’t understand. He dared me to do this because he’d rip out my horns if I failed. That is extremely painful and I don’t have time for pain. Gothika, the Fallen Succubus, a creature born from a Succubus and a Fallen. The creature whose strength is something that even the Heavens fear...even Hell. But also, the creature whose feminist body excites and maybe even turns me on. I wonder what I can do to her, Jason didn’t really say what I couldn’t do to her as long as she didn’t want it. I never really understood that part, she was a succubus and a lot of succubi weren’t meant to not like any sexual things...I wonder what made her so different. Was it because she was born on Earth and not Hell’s Third Level, Lust? Or was it because her mother did something to alter her DNA? Wait a min-... What the hell am I saying? Gothika isn’t a object, shes a subject, a slave and slaves are suppose to listen to their masters...that means me.

An eerie laugh escaped Fredrick’s lips as he jumped in the air and turned into a raven, flying looking around looking for Gothika and maybe the thing that hit him in the head. Landing on a broken branch of a tree, Fredrick looked about then looked down seeing someone at the bottom of the tree staring at him. The boy was wearing a long black jacket, a dull brown muscle shirt with a silver cross dangling from his neck and dark pants that hugged his legs. His hair was a light blonde to complement his black eyes. It was Aarron, the only decent demon that cared about Gothika and her feelings. Aarron glared at the morphed Fredrick as he smacked the tree hard making him stumble and fall to the ground.

Ow what the hell?! What the fuck was that for?” I hissed as I turned into my ‘human’ form and glared at Aarron. He hissed back as his teeth sharped and kicked me hard in my leg as i grunted in pain.
Bitch, watch who you’re talking to. I can kick your ass into the ground before you can even ask for mercy.” he growled then looked off into the distance, I clenched my teeth and slowly turned back into my normal form. I hissed as I sat next to Aarron and tried not to hurt him....or provoke him to hurt me. “Why does it matter to you? I can do whatever I want.” I said to him as he just sat there and glared at me. “Correction, you can do whatever you want that doesn’t involve Gothika.” he said in a sort of pissed off voice. I jumped a little but remained calm, remaining calm around a Soul Stealer Demon was the only way to keep Aarron from taking my ‘soul’ so to speak. “Why does it matter to you? You have to take her to Hell too.” I said looking at him but he didn’t return the look. “Does it look like I give a shit. Gothika is my friend and I plan to let her do as she wishes, if she wants to go to Hell then I will take her but until then, if I find out that you, Jason or Jessie laid a hand on her, I will kill you.” he said slowly standing up and stretched. I never really been intimidated in my life but Aarron was kind of freaky, he was the tallest of us all and he was a force to be reckoned with. He walked off and started walking in an odd direction, a place where there weren’t as much souls. “Where are you going, there are hardly any souls over there on that side of town.” I said a little confused yet relieved that he was leaving. “Shut the fuck up damn you’re annoying.” he hissed then ran off, I watched him leave and I stood up. ‘How rude, I didn’t do shit to him. Why the hell is he so, ugh!’ i thought to myself as I wanted to tear him apart so I wouldn’t have to deal with, what the fuck!

Fredrick hissed and growled when he heard something, he turned around and faced the opposite side of the tree and at his stroke of luck it was Gothika and some strange human girl. A grin appeared on his face as he thought about what he could do to get back at Aarron, ‘I should turn into him but then again, she can tell that I’m not him somehow and that Jason won’t believe me if I tell him that I did it. But why not do it myself, I’ve wanted to know why Jason has Gothika as his sex slave.’ he though to himself and slowly turned into a little sparrow and pretended to be eating and slowly started to jump in their direction. As he got closer, he noticed how the girl with the white thinks coming out of her head turned and left, it looked like she was done talking to Gothika and she waved good-bye. Fredrick chirped making Gothika turn around and look down as she slowly kneed and placed her finger under Fredrick’s belly and he jumped up to perch himself.

Wow, I never knew Gothika was into animals, That might explain why Gothika likes to be around animals than humans, angels or demons. “Hey little guy, you’re so cute. Are you all alone?” she asked a gentle voice and something that I never seen Gothika do, she smiled...a smile that even I’m shocked to see. But that smile won’t protect her. I will do what I have been waiting for. I turned into my true form and pinning her to the ground. I grinned from ear to ear as Gothika’s eyes widen in what I guess was fear. “No please, let me go!” she screamed at the top of her lungs, but I didn’t really care if she started to plead and beg so much. I wanted to do this...well, Jason wanted me to do this. “Nope, no one will help you now. I can do what I want with you.” I said as i leaned down and kissed her hard.

...

I fell to the ground and turned into my true form as I looked up at the teen boy, “Who the fuck are you?” I yelled as I stood up and the boy glared at me. “Watch your mouth you vile thing. How dare you hurt her, I should kill but I’ve feeling generous...leave before I chance my mind.” he hissed as his gold eyes seem to glow. I jumped back a little and started shaking, he was an Arch. A fucking Angel, I should kill him but that was going to be hard since I don’t know if he had help. He won, this round anyway, “Fine, I’ll leave. But be warned. Get in my way and I will kill you.” I hissed turning into a snake and whatever tentacles were in Gothika slipped out and fused with me as I slid away. I held my dignity...but how long will that last when Jason finds out that I didn’t make Gothika cum...


Cupcake Queen 03-31-2012 12:39 AM

wow that is really graphic O.O

Andraus 03-31-2012 12:43 AM

I want a First Edition, Signed Copy from Gothika when she is finished with this! :illgetu:

Gothika_Knight 03-31-2012 12:57 AM

*giggles nervous* srry

momochan 03-31-2012 02:12 AM

that was very graphic. o///__///o
my reaction was that face up there, except without the blush. xDDD
I um, don't want to seem rude or anything, but that's very graphic and I don't think it's pg-13.
So um, can I ask for you to take it down or edit the uh sex part out?
I don't want you getting in trouble for that if it's not pg-13.

I am liking the story so far, though!
...other than the rapist characters.
I don't like people like that! Dx

Cupcake Queen 03-31-2012 02:14 AM

true gothika it is good but you could get in trouble for having that up. and since it is in my thread, we could all get int rouble for not saying anything. Maybe you can just edit it to imply what happens but make it not so bad or something.

momochan 03-31-2012 02:18 AM

I think she can keep it in the story, just edit out the rape part out of the quote.
I have to say, at least she bleeped out a few words. xDDD
I found that funny.

Cupcake Queen 03-31-2012 02:47 AM

lol true but i can't afford to get in trouble for something like this again. I already got introuble from one of my roleplays cause some's chari did that to mine and i didn't say anything. So maybe if she gets rid of it before the mods see, everything will be fine. Of course in my rp that kind of became that persons thing that he kept bringing up so maybe it wont be to much trouble but i dont want to chance it too much.

Andraus 03-31-2012 02:54 AM

Spoken like True Politicians :mrgreen: I agree with buffy. I may want to lock you in my room, and never let you go gothy :ninja: but still, you could get in trouble for that.

momochan 03-31-2012 03:00 AM

haha, we're just doing this as a precaution, not to hate on it or anything.
I feel kinda bad for saying it, but I just don't want anyone getting in trouble.

Gothika_Knight 03-31-2012 03:10 AM

i understand XD the post as been edited and the next chapter shall begin XD and wait *looks at Andy* wat r u planning in that head of urs? *blushes red*

momochan 03-31-2012 03:12 AM

He's probably planning to play Yu-Gi-Oh and only Yu-Gi-Oh. -glares at andy-


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