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Violent_Beauty 07-18-2012 10:29 PM

Violent is on the prowl...once more.
 
Hello everyone, I haven't been on in awhile and tons of my rps died, im looking for a few partners to do one on ones. I wont do many because i can only get online so often these days, I hope you understand. My writing might also be a bit rusty.
I am very friendly and easy going >.< so don't be shy.

I am used to playing male, but wouldn't mind one or two female roles, i am fine with either gender, I have my own OCS on male, one or two on female...

My rules...

Please be somewhat literate. give me a few paragraphs, one is the least I will except, short responses happen, lets not make it a habit or it will just die.

please no god modding, being rude ect.
I am OK with Violence, love, ect.

I like to plot out things, i hope you do as well.

Today i will be online for a few hours, next week i might be on sometime...but please be patient with me.

if your interested comment below. :D


Here is a sample of my writing style and what I am good at.

It was the fourth of July, 1998. the sun was finally setting, fire works were starting. Parents sat in lawn chairs watching their children play with sparklers and smoke bombs, while some fathers lit off bigger ones. Dogs howled and whined inside homes, some hiding, some running away. It was always this time of year that was a fire hazard, it was humid, dry, and people around the world set off fire works carelessly. One family in particular would pay a deadly price.

"Daddy daddy! look look! I can write my name with the smoke!" said 7 year old natty, younger sister jessie, a 15 year old rebel. Jessie rolled her eyes at her younger sister as their father James laughed with natty. their mother, Monica, was in bed, sick like always, the doctors couldn't seem to find out what was wrong with her.

natty giggled and ran around bare foot with her sparklers, writting her name and other words she liked. like "dog, cat, jelly" her three favortie things. Jessie sat with her arms folded. " this holiday is stupid..." she mumbled, her father then gave her the warning look, which was "stop being a brat or go inside" jessie hated that look, and she hated being inside with her sick mother.

after a few hours of natty and her sparklers, james, their father gave jessie his lighter. "Here, i need to go check on your mother, theres a few more sparklers for natty, ONLY light those you hear? when i come back out ill start the big ones ok?" Jessie smiled and nodded.

as their father headed inside natty yelled after him "wait daddy! wait for me! i gotta potty!" james laughed and waited for his youngest, and went inside together. Jessie rolled her eyes....then looked over at some missle ones. she looked around to make sure no one saw, and lit it and ran to a chair to watch, nothing happened. she frowned. "well...what a waste..." she picked up the dud and threw it towads the bucket with water in it, but what she didnt care to notice was in went under there van.

moment later her father and sister came back outside just when jessies best friend came walking by. jessie smiled and ran over to her friend. "Hey trish! whats up?" Her friend smiled and told her about how lame her night has been. "Mine too ugh...." jessie said then trish spoke. "wanna come to my place for a bit?" Jessie nodded "let me ask! be right back."

jessie ran up to her father, who was holding natty. "look jessie natty isnt feeling so well so lets call it a night ok?" jessie nodded and spoke "well then can i go to trishes tonight?" james frowned, "not tonight hunny...you should be with your family." jessie then got so mad she yelled. "im ALWAYS with my family! i hate it! i wanna leave!" she cried.

her father then said. "well we wont all live forever and someday you will regret saying that" he then turned his back and walked away, going into the house. jessie pouted. trish heard everything "its ok jessie some other time? i gotta go...so bye." jessie just nodded as trish walked away. jessie was so frustered, she couldnt bare it, she started kicking rocks at the house, van, anywhere, when one bounced off hitting her in the temple of her head.


A few days went by before she woke up in a strange place, she felt cold and dizzy, her head hurt....."wher...."where am i?" she tried to say, a woman with red hair came by her side. "your awake? how do you feel?" jessie groaned. "my head hurts...where am i? where is my dad?"

the res headed woman ignored her question. "good, time for a shower. guys?" she gestured what looked like male nurses coming her way, the grabbed her and jessie screamed. "what? what are you doing?" he started to fight them when she soon felt a prick, she got dizzy..then tired.

when she came too she was dressed in a pair of blue jeans and a white T-shirt. it didn't look like a hospital room, it looked like a regular room, with two beds, a window, dressers....where was she? Jessie stood up and slowly walked to the door of her room, opening it and peeking her head out, there were other people here too, and doctors and nurses...but why???

the red headed woman walked her way, jessie still feeling tired just stood there, confused. the woman finally spoke. "jessie, do you know where you are?" jessie just shook her head no. the red headed woman nodded. "Ah, well Im Susan. I am the head doctor here at the children's psychiatric hospital. do you know your here?"

Jessies eyes went wide. "N-N-No" susan sighed, she hated this part of her job."well jessie your here because you murdered your family..." jessies eyes widened filling with hot tears and rage. "NO!!! NO I DIDN'T!!! YOUR A LIAR!!" she screamed. Susan felt for her.

"Look Jessie...on the night then died we have witnesses saying you told your father and sister you hated them and never wanted to see them again, shortly after a huge fire started....there were fireworks lit under the van, which was also leaking oil...we have witnesses also saying they say you light it and toss iy under the van...after the van exploded, it caught the house on fire...your family inside, asleep..."

The end.


if you LIKE this I do have a writing page on my FB I am on that page everyday VS this so if you wanna chat, plot, write there sometimes you can. (not trying to steal users lol)

heres the link

http://www.facebook.com/pages/Ravens...15141711937211


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