Menewsha Avatar Community - Need help with Character development

Hi I'm looking for someone to RP with to help me develop a character. it could be a small group or 1x1. He is somewhat fresh and I need help figuring out his character. I would like someone who is experienced and semi-lit. Specifically one who does not just respond to my actions but leads into another action. (I have been spoiled by my mentor) But here is a little more about my Saito ^_^

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Saito is the elder brother to Angil. In his childhood he had two servants, the ‘forgotten twins’ Malak and Talin. When Angil was born, he began training by his father to be one of the commanders of the Elvin Army. Saito was training in the forest when his home was sieged. By the time he reached the battle, it was over. He found Angil and his mother still alive and fled to the deepest part of the forest. After coming of age, Saito came out of hiding and rejoined the Elvin Army, where he quickly climbed the ranks to Commander. He is pretty honest and straight to the point. To him he is a commander first, an individual second, so he tends to come off as strict and a stick in the mud. However, anyone who has known him long enough will say that he is actually kind hearted and always has the welfare of others on his mind. And with enough ale, he can be really fun. He is a skilled military man. However, for an Elvin, his magic is pretty bad. He could never get a full grasp on the skill, so instead he mastered the art of weapon enchanting. His enchantments are some of the best in the world.

And this is the world he lives in

History of the legendary creatures. When the world was created god sent guardians to watch over it and the beings he created there. Lir to rule over the seas, Bel to rule over flame, Anu to rule over earth, Shu to rule the winds, and the twins Tiamat and Abzu to watch over them all. At the beginning the beings god created worshiped the guardians. Lir took the refuge in the seas to the north. The beasts who dwell in the deserts depend on him to stay alive. Bel occupied the volcanoes on the demon's Island. Due to the danger of his volcanoes the demons bowed to him. Anu played in the forests to the East. The Elve lived together with her. Shu flew through the mountains to the south. He gave flight to the Fairies wings. Abzu and Tiamat occupied a cave deep beneath the plains. They flew over all the land and watched over it. However as time went on the guardians were slowly forgotten Eventually only one village honored each of the guardians. This caused the guardians to loose power, too. Eventually they could no longer retain their physical form, so leader of their respective tribe chose to host the guardians. Then, as time went by almost all memory of the guardians disappeared. However their legacy went on. With the death of the legend of the guardians, the Warriors of Legend came to life. The ones who the guardians resided in gained great power and inherited the guardian's responsibilities. The only guardian who didnt make an inital pact was Tiamat. He did not see Sa'phir's beings as worthy of his power, so he sealed himself in his cave, going into an eternal sleep.

For Thousands of years, Sa'phir was a unified land. Each of the kingdoms worked peacefully together and trusted one another.

One day the King of the human realm, Jerek....changed. Servants say that while travling, he ran across an injoured man. The King, being as kind as he was, took the man back to his castle and had him nursed back to health. During that time the stranger and the king became close. All who met the stranger said that he was a kind and polite. However, most would admit that he had an unsettling aura.

When the stranger was well, and about to leave, the King asked the stranger to stay and be his chancelor. The other realms' representatives did not approve of this decision. As time went on, the King became secluded and no longer trusting of the other lands. Eventually, the king aimed to take control of all the lands and a war broke out. Outnumbering the King's army greatly, the other rulers did not fear defeat. That is until they finally met on the battlefield. The king's army was one of ruthless killers. All were fearless, unforgiving, did not stop until until his or his enemy's heart beat its last beat. The army decimated everything they came across. Seeing the destruction, all the countries agreed that the King must be stopped.

The rulers secretly held a meeting to discuss the options. After hours of debate, the oldest of the group reminded them of an old myth. Every generation there were those who are born with an old spirit. This spirit has unimaginable power and if the person is able to harness that power, they would become a legendary warrior. Seeing that there were no other options, the council decided to search for these individuals. After years of searching, they were able to find a handful of these warriors and with their power, they were able to finally defeat the army and kill the king.

However, no one was able to find the stranger who triggered all of this. It seemed that everyone who knew or served the man was either dead or had the memory of him wiped. The rulers only priority was to restore peace to the lands and they dismissed the idea of searching for the stranger.

Peace was returned and a new king was crowned. 1000 years passed and the memory of the war was all but forgotten. Fairy tales of the Warriors of Legend were told as bedtime stories to children but were thought of only as fairy tales. All seemed well and everyone was happy. The lands lived in unity and not even a ripple of unrest emerged.

---------- Post added 10-24-2012 at 11:02 PM ----------

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