Crimsons eyes start to turn into a crimson red. He all of sudden stops and laughs evilly. "Nino... You are a foolish little nino... Allow me to show you true power..." he said in a deep voice. Suddenly, he grabs the side of his head and says "NO!!!!!!! Get out of my head... I will not allow you to take over my soul like this" he says as he drops to his knees fighting with the demons inside of his head. "Run while you still can... I beg of you... Run... RUN!!!!" he says as he starts to reach towards Galaleo. He suddenly draws his sword he had earlier...

Mako is horrified at this sight."I have to help him!"Mako cried through her tears."No,I won't let you!"Raven said,"You're my responsibility now,I have always wanted a little sister,"she said again.Mako suddenly broke free and started to pour water on Crimson."Get out of my friend you evil monsters!"she yelled out when she suddenly shrieked a blood curdling scream.

(Oh, no....) galaleo yells stops levitating and say's (Evil Spirit I banish thee... *wind blows* leave this body at once... *galaleos eyes turn white and sticks hand out to touch Crimson to banish the spirit or whatever it is...

Mako hugs Raven."What were you thinkig Mako?!"Raven said through her tears."I don't know,"Mako said hugging Raven tighter.

Name : Sabrina
Age : 18
Power : Can sense unseen presences
Description : Tanned skin, emerald green eyes, silky smooth golden hair. Very optimistic
Height : 5'7
Weight: 130
Fit : Athletic
Relationships : None

Sabrina wakes in a very small room covered in blood. "What happened here?" she thinks out loud and hears a noise in one of the darkened corners.

Mako falls asleep on Raven.As she is dreaming she sees other people,a very classy dressed woman and a girl about raven's age."Galaleo,Crimson,we need to go back,there's other people,I saw them in my vision!

Name : Mercedes
Age : Died at 12
Power : Can walk through walls, read emotions, can control most ghosts who have died after her, demons fear her because of

Broken Creek Asylum - Records
Case 000024: The Dawn Girls.
Date: ~ January 3, 1736
Symptoms: Demonic Schizophrenia.
Physical description upon entering Asylum: Nina Dawn, older of the two girls: Had cuts that refuse to stop bleeding on both upper arms; lost left eye to abusive mother. Mercedes Dawn, younger twin: Had cuts that refuse to stop bleeding on both wrists, lost right eye to abusive mother.
Case Description: Nina Dawn and twin sister Mercedes Dawn, ex-patients in the asylum. Girls entered the asylum with reports of seeing the devil and other demons. Symptoms drove their mother mad as well, causing her to beat the girls. Just a week after selling the girls to the asylum, she committed suicide. No cause is shown in the records. Once omitted into the asylum, reports from the girls of the demons became more frequent and more devastating. Girls even resorted to harming themselves to make the devils go away, cutting their wrists with the old hangers left occasionally in their room (weather this was done on purpose as a test or not is unknown) and deepening the already bleeding cuts on their arms. Girls reported rapings and torturing from these demons and devils.
Treatment: Compacted with demons in contact with the girls. Demons own the girls souls from a contract with their father. After months of negotiations with the demons, they agreed to work with the asylum. The rapings began a year after the girls entered the asylum, under orders from the scientists.
Conclusion: Both girls died a month into the rapings. Nina Dawn died first. The other Dawn girl spent the rest of her time mumbling about her sister's sacrifice, and "how could she leave me? What are they doing to her? Please take me." Mercedes died of starvation, from refusal to eat, drink or sleep, 3 days later, body giving out from exhaustion.
All information in this document is a summery of many different documents, and diary entries from the two girls. No enclosed information should be taken as fact, merely observation.
Only one picture of the girls has been kept.

Taken April 14, 1778. 3 hours after death of Mercedes Dawn (bottom).
Height : 4 feet 3 inches
Weight: 75 pounds
Fit : Small, lanky.
Relationships : Finds it hard to trust people, after the loss of her sister. But is still searching for the perfect sister/brother/family/love in any kind.

Mercedes drifts slowly along the top floor of the now abandoned asylum, lost in the past. She follows a vision of her sister to an empty stair case, Nina smiles and gestures down. "Down?" Mercedes asks in a small squeak of a voice, "but down is no good. You know that Nina." She shakes her head and turns around, drifting through a wall into a random room. Inside the room there is a girl with long black hair, no jaw, and bleeding eyes, ripping into a scientist with her bare hands.
"Please don't do that..." the girl with black hair turns and starts to growl at Mercedes...but stops, turns and kicks the scientist once more and runs away, through the far wall.
"Thank you, thank you," the scientist sobs, "she's been torturing me sinc--" He was cut off in mid sentence as Mercedes started to speak.
"I didn't stop her for you. She was only torturing herself, about what she could not do in life. Now you will suffer far worse punishment in the pits of hell for what you have done to little girls like her and so many others." Then the man started to fade, and once he realized it, started to scream, "NO PLEASE!! DON'T MAKE ME GO!! I'LL DO ANYTHING!! PLEASE SPARE ME!!!"
But Mercedes had already turned away from the man, back to the stair case where the vision of her happy sister waited patiently.
Mercedes pouted, "Nina, there are still sad girls up here. Why can't I help them?" The vision shook her head and pointed down again. "No, Nina. I won't." Mercedes crossed her arms and shook her head, the perfect mirror of her twin vision. The vision of a ghost girl stomped her foot and glared, fumingly at Mercedes.
Mercedes laughed and copied the vision once more. Then the vision just pointed down with a glare on her face.
"I won't take this from you," Mercedes said quietly, "you left me. You have no right to tell me what to do... And now you're boring me..."
For an instant the vision of Nina Dawn had a look of pure sadness and grief for her would be sister, before she vanished into thin air. Leaving not even smoke behind.
Mercedes sighed, and wiped a hand under her eye, as if there would be a tear there to wipe away. "Is that really what you want?" She asked no one, and no where. "If it truly is, then I will surely listen." With that, she descended the first step, falling through to the next floor, and then repeated the process until she was on the second floor, her favorite. The one with the least violent ghosts. Where she sent the one's who wouldn't pose any threat to anyone...hopefully...
"I guess I'll start here...I wonder what sis was trying to tell me...."
And she started walking.

Sabrina turns away from the shadowy corners, and stares up at the single light in the room. She watches as it shakes and sways about, and realizes that there must be someone or something up above the room she's in.
She gets up and looks about for a door but is to afraid to venture very far from the safety of the light, and heads back to the middle of the room.
"HELP...SOMEONE PLEASE ARE YOU THERE?" she shrieks at the top of her lungs. The light stops swaying and she quickly loses hope of being found.
"it must have been my imagination" she thinks before staring back into the shadows.

Mercedes pauses...
and listens...
Nothing.
She moves back the bookshelf that she had been playing with and moves to the desk with the pretty pressed flowers...
Keeping both ears alert for anymore noise... Maybe Nina had been right to lead her here after all?

While staring at the shadows Sabrina hums a tune she doesn't quiet know, then out of desperation for something even slightly human, begins to mutter to herself.
"I should have listened to Lily...but no, I wanted to explore the forest. How could i have let this happen?" Sabrina looks into her lap in shame for leaving her friend.
"Oh gosh is Lily here? I never even thought about her, what if she followed me? I need to get outta here!"
Sabrina stands motivated to find a way out, she approaches the darkness nearest to her. She travels for a what seems like hours into the darkness, and her fingers hit a slick cold wall. She looks back at the light several yards away from her and contemplates going back, but forces herself to stay focused.
"Okay if i just find a corner, I can start from there and find a way out." She says slightly louder to motivate herself even more.
Sabrina starts to move slowly along the slick wall, afraid to see what is making the wall so slippery, and to far from the light to just give up now she moves slowly on, every now and then stopping to glance at the light, and whisper encouraging words to herself.

Mercedes closes the desk drawer, sure she heard something this time. She looks around and walks into the room next to her's. There's a boy in his late teens with startling purple eyes that she recognizes, sitting on a bed far to the right of the room. "hello dear," she says quietly, "do you remember me?"
Slowly the boy nods his head in conformation. "Good boy," Mercedes says still just as quiet, "can you tell me something, hun?" The boy tilts his head to the side and shrugs, 'How may I be of service?' the whispery voice of a young ghost rattles through the empty room.
Mercedes smiles, "have you heard anything lately? I could have sworn I heard a voice while I was in the room next to this. But I wasn't paying attention. Where did it come from?"
'Down.' The whisper said, still the boy did not move.
"Down? Why is it always down?" Mercedes sighs, "where down hun? Show me?"
The boy straightens his head and stands up from the bed and drifts closer to her, his legless torso gliding smoothly, dripping only a few drops of blood. "You've gotten much better with the blood, hun." Mercedes comments and smiles at him.
The boy ducks his head embarrassed and slips his hand into hers while smiling shyly down at her. Mercedes smiles back and lets the boy lead to the room where she just was, and then down, to the first floor.
'It came from here. There's a girl against the wall.' the boy looks at Mercedes and points right at Sabrina.
"Thank you dear, but I can see her." Mercedes takes a few steps over to the light, so that the girl would be able to see her better. Sometimes it took days for new ghosts to get the hang of all the changes. "Hello, my names Mercedes. Are you new here? If your not to startled, would you mind telling me how you died, and how you came to find this place?" She smiled sweetly at the girl who looked just slightly to solid to be a new ghost...

((By the way everyone, when are you all normally on during the day? So far the replies look pretty sparse, and not very well coordinated (no offense to anyone whatsoever o.o;; ) I'm normally on and off from anywhere after 3.40pm and before 11pm))

Sabrina reached a corner when she heard footsteps and froze, turning towards the light she stayed quiet as a mouse waiting for someone to appear. When finally she stepped into the light, Sabrina let out a slight gasp, and listened closely to what the girl was saying.
"Mercedes? Died?" Sabrina's head swam with thoughts to rapid to pull any apart.
"M-my name is S-sabrina, umm what do you mean how i died? Did I die?" worry spreads like poison through Sabrina's body and he legs start to wobble.
"I cant be dead, I was wandering through the forest then got hit from behind and woke up here, where ever here is..." Sabrina says in no more than a whisper.

Originally Posted by Dear Dreamer

((By the way everyone, when are you all normally on during the day? So far the replies look pretty sparse, and not very well coordinated (no offense to anyone whatsoever o.o;; ) I'm normally on and off from anywhere after 3.40pm and before 11pm))

For me it varies, but mostly at night from 9 until 2am (PST)

Mercedes smiled, slightly confused. She knew that all new ghosts were confused, and some delusional... but she'd never met one who had hallucinated an almost-but-not-quite-death yet...
She wanted to stay in her thoughts for a while longer, but she could see that the girl was about to have a panic attack. "Calm down dear, please don't freak out. If you feel you need to sit, then sit. Though it's probably only a memory of when you would need to sit." Mercedes let herself slip into her thoughts for another second before she decided that she needed to figure things out out loud, before she could dicect them in her head. "So you say that you were in a forest? Why were you in the forest? Can you remember? Do you remember going into the forest?"
Mercedes waited for a few seconds then got impatient with Sabrina looking around the dark like there was something there to see, "Here hun, you'll feel better in the light." Mercedes went over to Sabrina and held out her hand, expecting the solid touch of a fellow ghost... "Once you get into the light, we'll get everything sorted out..."

Sabrina hesitated a moment before reaching out her hand, not quite knowing whether to trust Mercedes or to still be cautious.
"You...you asked about the forest right? I was with my friend Lily, we were just walking along, and we reached the outer edge of the forest. She was to scared to go in, she's always been a chicken when it comes to dark quiet places, so I told her to go on home and I would explore the forest on my own. I wandered around for awhile and was really enjoying myself then..." she paused and brings her hand to the back of her head, she could feel a large lump where she had been struck and a small gash.
"Oh no...no, no, NO! Did I die because of this cut? Shoot what will my family think when I'm not there for dinner? You've gotta help me get outta here, I cant dead i just cant be!" Sabrina stumbles around her words getting to jumbled do decipher.

Mercedes tries to keep calm, though she's almost as confused as Sabrina is. No ghost can remember the day they died, ever. She reaches out for Sabrina's hand, and her eyes widen when it passes right through. Her eyes flash up to Sabrina's face, and is relieved when it's obvious that Sabrina was to freaked out to notice something like their hands not touching.
Mercedes quickly pulled back her hand, and instead gestured to the middle of the room. "I still think you'll feel better over in the light. And I can check out that cut. No I don't think that you could have died from it...but I'm currently rethinking my initial conclusion.... You just might not be dead...." She didn't want to say that last part, in fear that it would create false hope for the girl, but it was truly what she thought... and Mercedes wasn't one to hold her tongue...
Once again she pointed to the middle of the room, feeling all to much like the vision of a sister she'd played with not to long ago...

I am free to go where ever.... galaleo said

Crimson suddenly stood and had an evil glow to his eye. "Maybe I should let this evil side out for a while. I kind of like it" he said and then laughed suddenly. He noticed Galaleo, Makeo, and Raven where all gone by this time. "I want that fool that dowsed me with water" he said to himself. He decided to go look for them when he heard a sudden shriek and came across another captive in another room. "Hello" he said as he approached a single young female. He noticed she was with another spirit. "Stop right there" he shouted and chased after them

Sabrina takes a few quick deep breaths then starts to head towards the light, relaxing more and more as the light comes closer and closer.
"How long have you been here? It couldn't be to horribly long, you're still so young." Sabrina fell quiet not knowing what to say, but finally decides to add, "Sorry for the near panic attack, I guess its because its not everyday you hear you might be dead? I don't know my mind just flipped out for a moment."
Sabrina smiles as the light comes within arms reach of Mercedes and herself.
"I'm really glad you found me, I really hate being alone, and this room scares me more than it should have."

Mercedes felt her smile become more and more forced with each word Sabrina said. "Thats fine, it's understandable after what you've been through... I've... I've been her for quite a while... The body never changes once life has left it... It depends on what year it is now. I died on April 14, 1778." She looks down at the girl who must be at least 200 years younger then her, but looked so much older with a burning thread of envy coursing through her. She looks away from Sabrina towards the door, surprised she, senses more life in the corridor beyond. She carefully sets her back to the door and studies Sabrina's neck carefully. "This is no death blow," she says quietly, "It was done quite messily, but it was indeed on purpose." She brushed a ghostly hand over the wound, over skin she knew must be warm with the blood surrounding it, but feeling nothing. She sighed, "You may put your hair down now, there is nothing to be afraid of from this cut."
Slowly, Mercedes turned towards the only door in the room. Slowly not because she was scared or nervous, but because she was once again lost. Lost in the thoughts of life and death, lost in rules and promises....
Suddenly she stiffened. There were more then just humans outside, she felt a possession. “Get to the back wall,” She said stiffly, trying not to raise her voice, “to the corner…Go now!” Then she braced herself, hoping that the demon or ghost that was coming toward the door was young, and inexperienced. She might be a rarity for ghosts, who have to fight to stay in this world everyday. But demons could come and go as they pleased… she was screaming inside, scared for the girl who must have just escaped death only to be faced with something much much worse…

Sensing the urgency in her voice Sabrina heads quickly for the darkest corner, unsure what to expect. She has to fight an urge to ask what it is, but sensing a presence coming, she quickly casts the thought of talking away from her head.
Wondering what to expect she turns her attention to the door and strains to hear anything that could give away a presence nearby, but hears nothing. She slowly tenses, feeling ever second pass like years.

((hey, MrJetta, no matter how many times I re-read your post it confuses me....I think you're talking about Sabrina and Mercedes but....we're still in the room <<;; havn't left yet, and are pretty far from running away.... just saying...))