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Old 11-02-2009, 10:38 PM

When Kyle walked into the room and saw that Jenn was crying, then saw the other man in the room, he acted without thinking. He ran up to the other man, gripping his shirt's collar, and lifted him to the point where only his tip toe's were touching the ground. The man was unusually light and Kyle could have thrown him across the room with ease, but instead held him there,"What did you do?" As he spoke, his voice came out as an involuntary growl. He looked back at Jenn, who was on her knee's, hand's over her face, stomach sucking in and going back out rapidly as she sobbed. Kyle never even noticed the man's badge that was displayed on his belt, about four inches from his belt buckle on the right side.

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Old 11-03-2009, 05:32 PM

"Stop!" he shrieked obviously in somehwat dismay about what the boy was doing, when he wasnt set back to his feet he immediately brought a knee to kyle's crotch. In one swift moment, kyle released him and fell to the floor, he laughed at this display of idiocy.

He bowed in respect to the young woman, lightly gave her a hug, which, she winced from and walked away. Jenn was gasping out her words at this point attempting to make her ramblings a coherent sentence "P.I." was all that came through, she cringed and cried, gasped and huffed all from the simple restating of events, all the feelings of hopelessness flooded her "i.. thought i would never see you again" she cried loudly

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Old 11-03-2009, 06:22 PM

Holly walked into the hospital doors after classes got out. She pulled on her rubber gloves and put on a mask the lady at the front desk handed her. Holly had an assignment to go help two young adults. She walked down the hall following another nurse and opened the door into the unit where one girl was on the bed studdering out words and the other was on the floor next to her. Holly shut the door behind her and walked into the room. "I'm Holly Elizabeth Wood, you must be Jenn. How are you feeling?" Jenn's face was wet with tears and the other guy looked like he was in pain. Both of them looked a bit older then her but she didn't really care. "I'm here to help you. I don't mean to make you upset but can you tell me who did this to you?" She asked Jenn calmly.

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Old 11-03-2009, 07:47 PM

"N-...N.." Jenn couldnt comprehend what was happening, she knew that it was someone close to her and yet at that same moment she couldnt fathom who would want to harm her in such a brutal manner. Every time the man penetrated her, he'd caused a new incision on her body, he'd watch her bleed then repeat his actions. She shook her head clutching her temples crying further.

Mark was at the school by then, he'd left a class unattended and yet, somehow he knew no one would care. He stood lecturing about how the murderer was most likely a male of his late thirties preying on women since he wasnt sexually active or able to be. many of the students agreed with him, which, always made it easier.

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Old 11-03-2009, 08:06 PM

"Jenn please. I dont want this to happen to anyone else." Holly wispered quietly. She needed some way to calm this girl down. She looked at the boy on the floor then back at the girl. "Did you know him?" She asked. Something bad was going on but Holly didn't know what. She took off the plastic gloves and unbottoned her schools uniform jacket. Holly reached in her pocket and pulled out a pencial then grabbed the clipboard hanging on the wall. She flipped the white piece of paper over ready to write down what the girl said. If she said anything.

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Old 11-04-2009, 01:47 AM

"y..ye....s..." she did remember that much, lower lip quavering she whimpered into her hands again "i dont remember much.." she gasped through the tears, eyes squinting she shivered deeply before biting her lower lip she looked over at Kyle, tears blurring her eyes before she finally managed another few words "i dont remember anything though.. i physically can.not. remember who did that to me.." while she spoke she avoided any eye contact like she was damaged goods, a can dropped on the way to the shelf, that with a large dent on it's side.

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Old 11-04-2009, 02:00 AM

"Well I dont think you want to remeber what happened but it was a He. Thats good to know." Holly wrote down that Jenn knew him. "Do you know his name?" She asked again placing her hand on Jenns forhead. She had a fever but holly didn't say anything about it. She needed answers first. "Please try to remember." She said keeping a careful eye on the girl making sure she didn't do anything dangerous.

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Old 11-04-2009, 03:51 PM

"You....a-are wrong" she cried trying to keep her sanity in tact but, this wasnt going to work as well as she'd planned, her lowerl ip began to tremble. Jenn's head slowly shook from side to side by this time, "I...it was someone close to me" that's when the doctor came back into the room, he wasnt happy and that was painfully clear almost immediately "Get away from my patient. You are causing more mental trauma than needed, she's been drugged. The usual mentally incapacitating drug, one that date rapers give to their victims" while he spoke jenn laid on her side curling into herself.

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Old 11-04-2009, 08:33 PM

Holly glared at the docter. "Do you not know my job." Holly scowled. She looked back at the boy. "Can I speak with you outside?" She asked. Not waiting for a response holly walked into the hall way and leaned agains the wall. If it was someone close to Jenn the he had to know who it was. Holly highly doubted it was him because she guessed that there would have been a bit more screaming from Jenn. Holly closed her eyes and took a deep breath thinking about what she could ask the boy.

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Old 11-04-2009, 10:55 PM

Kyle slowly stood up, holding his crotch area in pain. He looked over at Jenn, but the doctor blocked his siting and point to the door,"Get out." Kyle nodded at the demand and limped to the door, to go and see what the detective wanted to talk to him about. As he got out into the hallway, he leaned against the wall and slid down until he touched the floor. He had his legs laying across the floor, straight out from his body, and he stared at the ceiling, waiting for the detective to ask questions.

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Old 11-04-2009, 11:40 PM

"What do you know?" Holly asked sitting down across from him. She watched him carfully. He looked like he had a long night. "Well lets start with... do you know who would have done this?" Holly asked. The boy looked as freaked out as Jenn had. She didn't want them to feel pressured by her but this was one of only a few cases she knew about were people lived after the man attacked. Holly smiled at him. She wondered if he was going to tell the truth. She wanted to tell him he could trust her but then again they did just meet. Holly waited quietly for an answer.

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Old 11-29-2009, 02:05 AM

Kyle looked down into his lap, shaking his head from side to side,"No, I don't know who could have done this. Other than that sick serial killing bastard." He mumbled the last sentence. He looked up, with anger in his eye's,'I will find him and I will make him pay. I'll put him through hell and back again.' Kyle had clenched his fists so hard during his though, that his hands started bleeding from his nails sinking into them.

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Old 11-29-2009, 02:55 AM

"get out get out GET OUT!" the good doctor shrieked pushing the woman out of Jenn's room, he looked an awful lot alike the man who had kidnapped jenn and yet somewhat, different. He sighed when he looked over at the young woman, then over at the boy with bleeding hands "self mutilation wont do anything to help the situation" he muttered prying Kyle's hands open and bandaging them "All it does is worry us more.. as well as maybe forcefully admit you into the psych ward" it was a friendly warning.

Mark's mother had dropped him off at the home which, he had gotten his car from. He sighed then slipped into the driver's seat, head against the steering wheel, he hated this blasted thing, and yet, he loved it. it was an absolute pain in the ass and yet, he never wanted to part with it "damnitdamnitDAMNIT!!!!!!" he growled banging his head continuously on the wheel trying to clear his head of Jenn, she was his best prey, the way she squirmed under his knife how she pleaded for her life, she was absolutely tantalizing.. a forbidden fruit.

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Old 11-29-2009, 10:28 PM

"Well excuse me." Holly muttered walking out of the hospital and down the streets. It was getting later and being alone wasn't the best Idea. Holly didn't take the bus and wouldn't go on a subway. She sighed and kept walking alone down the street. She pulled her jacket back on and buttoned it placing her hands in her pocked. "Really." She murmered almost laughing at a young man who was hitting his head agains a steering wheel. She looked at the young man for a moment or two and kept walking. For some reason she thought she had seen him before.

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Old 11-30-2009, 09:42 PM

Kyle tried to get back into Jenn's room once Holly had left. As much as he tried, the doctor's wouldn't let him into her room and they told him that it was best if he left for home, and got some sleep. He, regretfully, decided to follow the doctors advice and head home for the night. Since he was driven to the hospital by an ambulance and the bus's didn't run this late, he would have to walk the ten miles home, unless someone he knew drove by and picked him up.

He walked out of the hospital and in the direction of his house, hoping he would get home soon. As he walked down the street, away from the hospital, he kept looking over his shoulder, at the hospital. When he went around a corner and could no longer see the hospital, he took a deep breath and continued walking away.

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Old 12-01-2009, 09:03 PM

Jenn sat in the hospital, staring up at the ceiling when her door crept open, Mark had gone from his home back to the hospital to finish what he had started. When his face appeared in the room her eyes widened with an open mouth she let out a loud howling scream, he leaped from his position and over to her, tackled her back against her bed, clamped her mouth shut, luckily for him, no one had heard her. He tore off her hospital gown and did the unimaginable, he violated her over and over until she went numb.

In the morning doctors came in to check on jenn, who, was huddled in the corner, naked and crying. Rocking back and forth, cuts all up and down her arms, across her neck and forehead, she'd inflicted these wounds with something no one would have guessed, a piece of her mirror which, was shattered on the ground with mark sprawled out on the floor bleeding from his forehead still in the medical scrubs.

Kyle was excused from school that day, he'd need to spend more time with Jenn now that she remembered almost everything about what had recently transpired, she remembered who the killer really was and was itching to tell someone. So by the time she was left alone she flipped open her barely working cellphone and dialed Kyle's number.

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Old 12-01-2009, 09:29 PM

Holly got home that night and slept for hours. At about noon she woke up and sighed. She didn't bother to head to school since her class would be over by the time she got there. Instead holly headed for the bus and rode back to the hospital. Holly walked in to the front desk and talked to the lady. "Is Jenn better?" Holly asked the lady shook her head and explained what had happened the night before. As the lady finished speaking holly sprinted off to the room where Jenn was. "OH MY GOD!" Holly said seeing Jenn again. Today she was in worse condition and someone was laying next to her half dead. Holly walked over and checked the boys pulse then looked at the bleeding jenn. "Who is he? Are you ok? What happened?" She ask worried.

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Old 12-02-2009, 01:22 AM

Kyle woke up to the sound of his cell phone ringing and when he saw the caller ID, he calmed down a bit, until Jenn told him what happened,"Alright, I'm on my way over there right now." He walked out of his apartment and remembered that his car was still on the murderer's street, outside of his house. He ran to his bike, near the entrance to the complex and unlocked it from the bike rack, quickly peddling down the street, towards the hospital. It would take him about two hours to get there, unless he stopped to rest.

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Old 12-02-2009, 02:14 AM

Jenn looked up at Holly and skittered backward attempting to push herself from any sort of contact with people"I.. H-... H.. He's M-Mark M.. McHa..ven.." she spoke in a trembling voice she stood to her feet, walked over to the bed, tore a blanket off of the bed and slipped it over her small body, then, ran out of the room that's when she was met by several hospital staff "p.. please t-the murderer.. i-is in m room.. l-let me go" they nodded and walked toward her until each of their arms were around her, embracing her, then, the sudden prick of a needle then black.. she was in another room, on the opposite side of the building, away from the intensive care unit instead, she was in the psych ward, under the hot lamps of psychologists and specialists attempting to pick her brain for details.

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Old 12-02-2009, 08:16 PM

Holly looked at mark then back at Jenn who was running out of her room. She couldn't leave Mark unattendaded but Jenn could get hurt. Holly ran out into the hallway and shut the door behind her. She went into the next room and pulled the doctor into Jenn's. "Um...he need's help. Don't let him leave before I talk to him." Holly said watching the doctor go over and examin mark. She ran out the door and looked frantically for Jenn. "WHERE THE HECK IS JENN!" She yelled at the nearest nurse. The nurse pointed over to the psych ward. Holly sprinted away and burst into the room where Jenn was. "STOP! SHE'S NOT CRAZY! SHE'S SCARED!" Holly said to the psychologists.

 


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