((Um did Ember give you permission?))

(( She did not make a statement where she said I must ask before I role play in her thread. If people don't like what I put in while role playing, then they can ignore it)).

((Well it's a given that you have to ask or in the least post a profile and await her approval))

(( Oh, I forget about that. Link to my profile: http://www.menewsha.com/forum/members/74540.html ))

{{Yeah ummm no you suck at Roleplay mostly because your clearly a god-modder. Now bug of our RolePlay please.}}

(( What do you mean by godmodding?))

{Controlling other peoples charaters without asking}

((I would say sorry, you don't even make remarks about that not being allowed and then tell others to ignore me when I godmod, when they don't even say it's not allowed)).

((Oh my god it's RP etiquette... you don't control other people's characters without permission you noob))

((I wasn't aware of that)).
((I can't help if I am not aware of etiquettes, though)).

{Then maybe you shouldn't RP with People who have more Experiance, if you like I could give you a few pointers, and help you to sharpen your skills}

((okay, may you please give me advice, on how to improve my skills in RPing?))

{{Okay for one, when someone creates a Rp you should PM them first asking them if it's okay to post. Its best to look at other rp's they've made or been in so you have an idea of there RP skill.}}

((Thanks, bunches for the advice.))

{{No Problem, sorry I acted like such a bitch}}

(Anyways)

Sighing Marie got up and walked over to the desk and sat down on it looking at him. "Please tell me there is something I can do to get out of detention." She pleaded with wide eyes.

((Detention was already over))

(Oh, Sorry I forgot when we were inturuppted. IDK what she should do now)

Marie sighed and headed home. She was about to turn down her street when she saw a teenage girl walking alone smoking. Growling she ran after her knocking her down, She sunk her fangs into her neck and drank. She hid the body and went home.

((Axel was giving Ember a ride home))

((See..sorry ignore that last post))

Marie sighed and looked over at Mr. Axel. "Thank you for driving me home." She said sweetly as she gave him directions to the Mansion she had bought and fixed up.

Axel headed in th directions given him by his student. "So tell me why are you so pale?"

"Huh? Oh, it's a family condition." She said as the car came to a halt in front of an old Mansion. On the front porch was a teenage boy wearing a suit and leaning against the railing. "Thank you, see you tomorrow at school Mr. Axel."

Axel replied "Wait... remember if you don't pass the Biology quiz there will be reprecussions." He looked serious

"I know, don't worry I will." Marie said then turned and ran up the the house. "Where have you been all day?" Her brother asked as she walked up the stairs. "I had detention." She explained walking inside. She went into the living room and slipped out of her dress. She was greatly developed for being in a 13 year old body, that she had to wear a 34 b bra. She walked up the stairs and to her room where she changed into a deep red party dress. "Will you please not walk through the house necked?" Her brother asked tossing her dress she had left on the living room floor on her bed. "No, I don't think I will." She said with a smile.

((You made her sound like she was just past a child))