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Old 09-27-2011, 06:32 PM

"You really need to cheer up. You're a mother now"

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Old 09-27-2011, 09:27 PM

yeah that'll happen she said in her head. She loved that she was a mother but she didn't like the life her child would end up having. She would act happy for the baby. She put on a small fake smile and tickled the baby and smiled for real when it giggled.

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Old 09-27-2011, 10:46 PM

"Soon you shall rule over the cattle, my little prince" Novak whisperd to Michael.

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Old 09-27-2011, 10:52 PM

Vanessa kissed Michael on the head with a smile.

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Old 09-27-2011, 10:54 PM

"I haven't seen you feed in a while. You look frail"

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Old 09-27-2011, 10:59 PM

"i'm fine," she said.

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Old 09-27-2011, 11:07 PM

Novak showed Vanessa his wrist. "You need to feed"

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Old 09-27-2011, 11:22 PM

"i said i'm fine," she siad.

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Old 09-27-2011, 11:50 PM

"Drink or die"

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Old 09-28-2011, 12:01 AM

If it hadnt been for micheal she would have died but instead she took his wrist and began drinking.

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Old 09-28-2011, 12:06 AM

"Very good. Michael can't grow up without a mother, now can he?"

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#287
Old 09-28-2011, 12:10 AM

Vanessa ignored him. When she finished, she let go.

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Old 09-28-2011, 12:18 AM

"Come Michael, lets go for a walk until your mom calms down"

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Old 09-28-2011, 12:35 AM

Vanessa watched them leave then sat on the couch and let out a sigh.

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Old 09-28-2011, 07:10 PM

(How about you kill off my character?)

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#291
Old 09-28-2011, 09:16 PM

(really?)

Then Vanessa got an idea. She could get rid of him. She could raise her son the proper way. She ran out of the house following his scent.

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#292
Old 09-28-2011, 09:19 PM

(Yeah, I think it's the only way to move the story foreward)

Novak stood atop a snowy hill, showing Michael the full moon.

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#293
Old 09-28-2011, 09:25 PM

(ok and how about she tells her son that her father was murdered by another vamp)

Vanessa stood in the shadows. She had a bow and arrow. This would be easy. mke it seem like a hunter. She loaded and shot and watched it hit his heart. She hid in the dark shadows.

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Old 09-28-2011, 09:30 PM

(Perfect)

Novak dropped Michael in the snow, and fell to his knees. He looked down at his son, and for the first time in his existance, shed a tear. He then looked up at the moon, and turned to ash. Michael broke out crying.

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Old 09-28-2011, 09:39 PM

Vanessa made it look like she was coming from another direction and ran up to micheal. "micheal what happened baby," she asked picking him up.

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Old 09-28-2011, 09:40 PM

(Michael is still a baby, he can't talk)

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Old 09-29-2011, 09:17 PM

(i know it was kind of retorical)

She took him to the house to try and calm him down

(time skip?)

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Old 09-30-2011, 12:14 AM

(Time skip)

14 years had passed. Michael was in his room studying.

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Old 09-30-2011, 12:18 AM

Vanessa knocked on his door.

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Old 09-30-2011, 12:22 AM

"Come in" Michael said.

 


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