Now this is a forum about a story that my friend and I created with each other. This forum is going to be about the origional version. You may choose to be one of the following characters. (Unless their taken, like Luari)

The basic point of this story is that four young girls and one little boy get killed in a school shooting and awaken in a place known as the blood red river. A boy then asks for Luari's emotions and Emezza's voice. They ended up giving them up to the boy so that they could be ressurected in another world called Monstrocicia as monsters! A world of only what we would call monsters. There is no such thing as human except for one half human, known as Nair who wants to ruin the peacefull world with the human minions he creates. It is then up to the four girls and one guy with the help of others to destroy Nair and his Diabolical plans!

Luari
age: 17
She saw in a dream what happens after you die and told her friends and then they all died in a school shooting right after. Thats when she gave up her emotions to be ressurected as a vampire. She then meets a priest named Vias who is a griffon (It's just a human like creature that can turn in a fully feathered being in this story). She then regains her emotions and falls in love on her way to saving her new homeworld.

((Luari is taken))

Emezza
age: 18
She died in the school shooting and gave up her voice for her and her friends to be ressurected. She became a witch after being ressurected. She then found a man named Nore with a sad story and helped him through the good and the bad. They then fell in love while fighting agaisnt Nair and his evil control.

((Emezza is taken))

Trandorea
age: 17
Died in school shooting and was ressurected as a werewolf girl in the other world and helped out with defeating Nair.

((Trandorea is taken))

Loshidi
age: 17
Died in school shooting and was ressurected as a fairy in the other world and helped out with defeating Nair.

((Loshidi is taken))

Mike:
age: 13
Died in school shooting and was ressurected as an elf in the other world and helped out with defeating Nair.

((Mike is taken))

Vias
age: 20
Was the reason behind his specie's (griffon: a human like creature that has feathers growing from his body by will) extinction and now he makes up for his sins by being a priest at a church that was once a prison owned by Nair. He is the one who took care of Nair when he was a little boy and even worked as Nairs top henchmen but regrets it all and wants nothing more but to stop Nairs evil plans. He falls in love with Luari and ends up being more open to people about what he did and tells her everything.

((Vias is taken))

Edsuchi
age: 19
She is a fox demon that has been friends with Vias ever since he stopped being evil. She usually will cast protection spells to help out the group.

((Edsuchi is taken))

Nair
age: 17
He is a half human creature that soley wants to kill all of the monsters that hated him. He was raised by Vias and had Vias be his top henchmen until the guilt got to Vias of his species death and Nair then locked Vias up for many years in a mirrored room. In the story, as strange as it seems, Nair becomes so evil that he becomes light...

Nore
age: (born in story)
Nore is a henchmen that Nair created from the good left in his body. Nore is at first quiet. He knows that one day he will be forced to kill the others in the group and he dreads hurting Emezza.

Inharii
age: 16
A strange girl that works for Nair. She is his current top henchman. Much about her is unkown. She has a small pearl like crystal embedded in her forehead wich gives her the ability of forming crystal to her own will.

((Inharii is taken))

Taken roles

Inharii
Edsuchi
Vias
Loshidi
Trandorea
Luari
Emezza
Mike
Nore

Free roles
Nair

pm me about which character you wish to be!

Also, you may create your own character and if you wish to you must pm me first...

May I please be Emezza!?

yep! Clair Voyant is Emezza!

Can i be Trandorea?

could i be Inharii

May I be Loshidi?

((Oh and is that character a boy or a girl? xP))

Originally Posted by Elektra_x3

May I be Loshidi?

((Oh and is that character a boy or a girl? xP))

Well, as Blacksheep wrote earlier a friend helped her write this story! I was that freind! XD Loshidi is a female!

Clair Voyant is right. She is the friend that helped me...

Elektra_x3.... yes!

pillow_maiden.... yes!

Krymsin7.... yes!

Cool! :3
So when do we start?

Originally Posted by Elektra_x3

Cool! :3
So when do we start?

Though I help write this, I am unsure of much information. Sheepy will decide this, but we hope to have a few guys join in!

Originally Posted by Clair Voyant

Though I help write this, I am unsure of much information. Sheepy will decide this, but we hope to have a few guys join in!

Elektra_3 .... As soon as more people join up. Not too long I hope! :wink:

Clair Voyant .... DON'T CALL ME SHEEPY! MY MENEWSHA NICKNAME IS POET!!!!

That is all....

(Maybe as we start more people will join)

Good Idea Miakoda! That could work... alright... we'll start. Who wants to go first?

Originally Posted by Miakoda

(Maybe as we start more people will join)

Wait! I don't want to be rude, but Miakoda, who are you playing as?!

May I take the roll as Vias?

^_^

Blacksheep Poet, you're Luari, correct? I just want to know so I fall in love with the right person. x3

Clair Voyant- Maikoda is Edsuchi! She pm'd me about it.

Slade White- Vias is yours... also, I am Luari.


For Vias and Nair....

Vias looks basically like this character I drew except instead of batwings Vias has black feathered wings(sometimes)... http://blacksheeppoet.deviantart.com...l-son-71524870
and Nair is this guy... http://blacksheeppoet.deviantart.com...d-guy-71651336

Yay! When are we gonna start?
Oh, and if you want pictures of all the characters, my friend, ashlemo, said she'll do 'em all for free if you send her descriptions of each. ^^

(cool so when do we start?)

Yes, Sheepy! When do we begin!?

Slade White--- No offense but well, this is based on a comic that I'm trying to publish right now! I don't want to sound rude but I really don't need anyone drawing pictures of my own characters for my own manga. I have other pictures of the characters but I can't choose the best one of the other characters but as soon as I do I will post them on deviant art....

Okay, since no one else wants to start this thing.... I WILL!!!

Luari looked over at Vias, who was reading some sort of novel, wondering about the new world she was in. "I don't understand any of this yet, but soon I will I guess" she mummbles to herself. She then stood up and walked over to Vias. "Hey Vias" She didn't know what to say. "What ya' doing?" She then thought to herself. What am I saying! It's obvious what he's doing!

((That's fine.
Well, I don't know what his personality is, nor do I know what color his eyes/hair are, so I'm gonna make it all up.))

Vias was mulling over a paragraph in the novel he was reading, twirling a finger or two around in the shaggy, raven mess he called his hair. His right leg was, very aristocratically, propped up by the knee of his left, bobbing unintentionally. Concluding his thought, he slowly turned the thin page, revealing the next string of words he was preparing himself to read.

Upon hearing footsteps, Vias slid his thumb into the now-closing book as a place holder. His chin turned upward, as did his concentration, and the young man stared up at the approaching Luari. His lips were still pursed, his eyes were still slightly glazed over, as if he were still entranced by the book.

It was rather obvious what he was doing, yes, but he realized the restless Luari was only trying to make conversation. His eyes, then, softened, and he uncrossed his legs. Leaning forward, the black-haired man placed his novel on the floor.
"I was reading," he said, knowingly. "What have you been up to, dear?"
By no means did he mean 'dear' in a romantic sense, he was just the gentlemanly type.

(I apologize if i am throwing your characters personality off but kitsune are generally mischevious and playful.)

"Vias!" Edsuchi cried suddenly appearing behind Vias as she wrapped her arms around his neck leaning over his shoulder. Her white tipped tail swishing back and forth. "Hello Luari" Edsuchi greeted before looking back at Vias. "I'm bored........." Edsuchi complained. "You've been rading he book all day lets go do something. Lauri can come toooo." Edsuchi teased.

Before Luari was able to even think of an answer, an energetic Edsuchi cried out Vias' name. Although he couldn't see the girl, he knew her voice. That and the fact she wasn't shy, nor was she conservative. He sighed a bit, smirking, as arms were thrown around his neck. Cutting his eyes at the fox, Vias greeted her with a simple "Good afternoon, Edsuchi."

The dark-haired Vias stood, Edsuchi still suction-cupped to his back. He took each of her hands in his, flipping her over his head. Making sure she landed on her feet, Vias smirked at the two girls in the dimly-lit room.
"Well, Luari," he began. "What do you say? Wanna go somewhere?"
His light-colored eyes, then, trailed solely to Edsuchi. "What did you have in mind?"

Edsuchi squealed in delight as she was suddenlt flipped over by Vias. She probably should have known better than to hang on him but she didn't care. she stepped back a bit as she landed on her feet to maintain her balance. She looked back to Luari smiling.

She turned back when Vias adressed her again blinking. Where to go, she hadn't thought of any place she had just been bored and was sick of being cooped up. Her fox ears pressed against her head in embaressment. "I don't know i haven't thought about it." she admitted.

Emezza wandered in, after hearing the loud cries of Edsuchi she had felt a little left out. She saw Luari standing next to Vias and Edsuchi, who had wrapped her arms around the young man's neck. Emezza, though very shy, had already decided that she would become great friends with Edsuchi. SHe loved Edsuchi's random outbursts and loved to be excited by her.

Emezza walked over and stood behind her good friend, Luari. Though older and taller than Luari, Emezza wasn't nearly as brave or strong.

"So what are you all doing?" she asked in a meak voice, hoping to start a conversation that she could join in on.