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Forum: Poetry 09-01-2009, 03:55 AM
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Posted By IAmNellie
Nothing bad to say about this one at all! Very...

Nothing bad to say about this one at all! Very powerful, and it flows great!
Forum: Poetry 09-01-2009, 03:53 AM
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Posted By IAmNellie
The only suggestion I can think of is that in the...

The only suggestion I can think of is that in the beginning it sounds like you're trying to force it to rhyme...which makes it sound choppy. The rest of it is amazing though and flows pretty good.
Forum: Welcome Lounge 09-01-2009, 03:49 AM
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So.
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Posted By IAmNellie
Bonfires. Because sitting around with friends and...

Bonfires. Because sitting around with friends and roasting marshmallows and drinking beer can not be beat!
Forum: Poetry 09-01-2009, 03:45 AM
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Views: 116
Posted By IAmNellie
Criticism first: There were a few spelling...

Criticism first: There were a few spelling mistakes. At times the poems didn't flow: that has nothing to do with rhyming. it just means that it doesn't seem to flow when read. The only other thing I...
Forum: Welcome Lounge 09-01-2009, 02:52 AM
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Hi
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Posted By IAmNellie
Hi

Hi, Im Nellie. I'm eighteen, and am looking to meet new friends on here.
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