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Forum: Poetry 02-18-2010, 10:49 AM
Replies: 41
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Posted By Lovers Never Tell
case closed and handcuffed I was a...

case closed and handcuffed


I was a closet romantic
until you walked in and ousted me
placing jurisdiction with your open door policy
that now swings both ways. In passing,
I defended...
Forum: Poetry 02-18-2010, 10:47 AM
Replies: 35
Views: 1,451
Posted By Lovers Never Tell
Is no one going to enter then? Oh well... I was...

Is no one going to enter then? Oh well... I was having fun with this.
Forum: Poetry 02-18-2010, 10:45 AM
Replies: 36
Views: 580
Posted By Lovers Never Tell
Bumpy!!! But just so it counts. Please,...

Bumpy!!!

But just so it counts. Please, people, make this active!!!!
Forum: Poetry 02-14-2010, 11:22 AM
Replies: 41
Views: 1,513
Posted By Lovers Never Tell
And I am so doing all that right now!!! ...

And I am so doing all that right now!!!

And**** you;
your **eternal
petals permanently
at***tached have nev**er
whis**pered good-bye** at a
frost-bitten night. They know
only of the...
Forum: Poetry 02-12-2010, 05:24 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 1,283
Posted By Lovers Never Tell
This is a very interesting idea, but, maybe I've...

This is a very interesting idea, but, maybe I've been on Gaia too long, isn't it against ToS to sell your work?
Forum: Poetry 02-12-2010, 05:22 PM
Replies: 61
Views: 2,293
Posted By Lovers Never Tell
I apologize if I came off as rude. I was just...

I apologize if I came off as rude. I was just making a point in saying that it is needed to some degree. Her poetry is good for starters. As simple therapy poetry goes, sure, it's great stuff. But...
Forum: Poetry 02-10-2010, 01:59 PM
Replies: 61
Views: 2,293
Posted By Lovers Never Tell
you're age is not an excuse, so don't try to play...

you're age is not an excuse, so don't try to play it off. I'm only 21 and have been writing for 10 years; just now got to the point of being able possibly get published.

No matter how you go about...
Forum: Poetry 02-10-2010, 01:56 PM
Replies: 41
Views: 1,513
Posted By Lovers Never Tell
Yea, I just got a challenge to write a shaped...

Yea, I just got a challenge to write a shaped poem. :headdesk: So that'll be up soon enough after I'm revived from the mental shock of it.

That style of writing is fairly easy. It's just knowing...
Forum: Poetry 02-10-2010, 01:34 AM
Replies: 61
Views: 2,293
Posted By Lovers Never Tell
Then at least take the advice given on the...

Then at least take the advice given on the grammar instead of being rude and comepletely ignoring it. Sooner or later it'll click when you start to write that "Oh, yea, a semi-colon would go here...
Forum: Poetry 02-10-2010, 01:29 AM
Replies: 41
Views: 1,513
Posted By Lovers Never Tell
It does. And to tell you how that style...

It does.

And to tell you how that style works is easier said than done. If you've done SLAM poetry before the concept is better understood. See what you do is you take the poem (( for the long,...
Forum: Poetry 02-10-2010, 01:25 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 369
Posted By Lovers Never Tell
No, fragments are against grammar... They must...

No, fragments are against grammar... They must all be complete... or incomplete, but that's a special case and style that I don't think you're quite able to catch on to just yet.

I read those...
Forum: Poetry 02-09-2010, 03:07 PM
Replies: 183
Views: 14,262
Posted By Lovers Never Tell
How you're so differnet, yet the same, obviously....

How you're so differnet, yet the same, obviously.



Peering into my foggy eyes
your brights flicker searching for reflection,
but I can't help but flutter lashes back.
I realize that the void...
Forum: Poetry 02-09-2010, 03:00 PM
Replies: 41
Views: 1,513
Posted By Lovers Never Tell
Question Wait does that mean I can do an overhaul on this...

Wait does that mean I can do an overhaul on this because I want my first post to be only an index and my second to be my rules and expectations from what the others comment on and all that then...
Forum: Poetry 02-09-2010, 02:57 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 369
Posted By Lovers Never Tell
Sizzla stole me gold by quoting your poem in my...

Sizzla stole me gold by quoting your poem in my last post. :gonk: Oh well, Let's work first on your grammar an then we'll go on from there, okay?



Lots of it is incomplete thoughts and little...
Forum: Poetry 02-09-2010, 02:44 PM
Replies: 41
Views: 1,513
Posted By Lovers Never Tell
Yea, I was actually extremely iffy on that...

Yea, I was actually extremely iffy on that spacing. Maybe if I do a break in the stanza between the two spacing parts it would help correct that, you think?
Forum: Poetry 02-09-2010, 06:36 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 369
Posted By Lovers Never Tell
I did. And thank you very much for the insight!...

I did. And thank you very much for the insight! I'll have to work that spacing out I suppose. Not sure how, but it'll happen.
Forum: Poetry 02-09-2010, 06:34 AM
Replies: 41
Views: 1,513
Posted By Lovers Never Tell
I have to say, I don't care if it's nice or not....

I have to say, I don't care if it's nice or not. I'm not going to go easy on anyone I critique because really it doesn't matter how you write it, if the doesn't agree; they don't agree. So say what...
Forum: Poetry 02-09-2010, 06:27 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 369
Posted By Lovers Never Tell
As a forward; if I ask a question it's because it...

As a forward; if I ask a question it's because it needs to be answered in your poem. You should NEVER, EVER have to explain your work as it should do that it's self.
Forum: Poetry 02-09-2010, 05:48 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 369
Posted By Lovers Never Tell
Yea, same here, though people don't often take...

Yea, same here, though people don't often take the help given. I beg for it and am better than most. I suppose I'm just never satisfied with my pieces. Whatever the reason, I like to know that I can...
Forum: Poetry 02-09-2010, 05:40 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 369
Posted By Lovers Never Tell
magnifcant! I'll certianly look you up then!...

magnifcant! I'll certianly look you up then! Again, thank you for the site. :D
Forum: Poetry 02-09-2010, 05:36 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 369
Posted By Lovers Never Tell
Hmm.. I'll check it out thanks.

Hmm.. I'll check it out thanks.
Forum: Poetry 02-09-2010, 05:33 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 369
Posted By Lovers Never Tell
My collective link...

My collective link (http://www.menewsha.com/forum/art/literature-spot/poetry/132996-my-collective.html) Thank you very much. It's much appreciated.
Forum: Poetry 02-09-2010, 05:26 AM
Replies: 41
Views: 1,513
Posted By Lovers Never Tell
I Shouldn't Be Dealing With This Anymore ...

I Shouldn't Be Dealing With This Anymore

Awaken, babe- create doubt
evaporating facades. Gallant hate
iridescently jaded knick-knocks lies
mandated. Nauseated obviously,
people question...
Forum: Poetry 02-09-2010, 05:20 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 369
Posted By Lovers Never Tell
Indeed it did. I'm on Gaia, too... I'm such nerd...

Indeed it did. I'm on Gaia, too... I'm such nerd when it comes to these sites, but it's only because I want feedback on my poetry and none of the other two are really giving me any... not that this...
Forum: Poetry 02-09-2010, 05:16 AM
Replies: 61
Views: 2,293
Posted By Lovers Never Tell
The reader will get whatever they want from it...

The reader will get whatever they want from it reguardless of what you want. So you write for yourself. You think anything I write about is honestly the same subject or point that my audience...
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