drabble 1:
I know your dealing with drabbles- which by definition aren't long, but silence tends to be something that lasts while its there... like experiencing silence, while your experiencing it, it seems to be an expanse. To have silence be the theme here, I think the nature of silence should be shown a bit more. You started out good- I think it just needs to be expanded if you were to actually use it.
drabble 2: This one made me smile. Good capture of a moment.
drabble 3:
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Originally Posted by Seito
There was a crunch and the soldier feel to pieces. "Keep her safe of there will be hell to pay, Ambrose."
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her safe or there will
I like your imagry.
drabble 4: *grin*
I like the conversation- highly amusing. ^.^
drabble 5:
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Originally Posted by Seito
There Ambrose's worse nightmare came true: little kids and art projects.
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worst
*throws glitter at Seito*
drabble 6: I feel so bad for him
drabble 7:
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Originally Posted by Seito
He was beginning to understand her hate towards pens.
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hatred
I love pens. Silly girl. The mess is part of the fun ^.^
drabble 8: Hah! A nice analogy to life.
drable 9: This is actually the first one I read. I lol’ed so I decided to read the rest, and while I was at it; tell you my thoughts.
Over all, I like your style. You show a sense of humor, but you can also portray a serious moment well. Good luck!