
10-06-2009, 05:09 AM
eih, I'll correct it. Then bed *looks at clock*
okay lets see... How to make it more unique.... Oh okay I'll make it so she brings a jacket so she doesn't get wet ^^...as much
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Okay I corrected the parts that were similar. I'm not going to correct the beginning part though, because I wrote that before I ever saw Mihi's and I'm too lazy to correct her morning routine..don't most people wake up the same way anyways? T_T I'll rewrite it if you really want me too. But tomorrow. ^^ Good night, sweet dreams. I'm tired... Oo, should I perhaps change how she arrives? Maybe give her a bike, or ....hmm.. maybe have her take the bus? But would the bus be running in such weather..but she walked to school, so would it make sense to do such a thing? Okay, I need to stop thinking and go to bed.
Last edited by fuyumi_saito; 10-06-2009 at 05:18 AM..
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