then i will gladly send it to you and anyone else who wants to read it....as soon as i add the taken out stuff back in...but the very first one i wrote (the one for school) would have to rewritten completely as i lost its file but it was good...my friend Baby and I were home alone and in my bedroom. freaky things start happening like someone knocking on the door, a trail of blood appearing and a ghost woman. in the end things are not what they seem and we learn that we have to keep an eye on our other 2 friends. short and sweet and intriguing ne?? lol but yea i can send u the full story of either version. im sure you would love it.