Here are just a few poems that I have written. I am looking for comments, I want good and bad. This is the first time I have shown any of my poems but please tell me which one you like and which ones need work. I would really like to know since this is something that I love to do. So please read and leave comments.

I wait and wait…

I wait and wait for the right guy to love me
I wait and wait for the right guy to hold me
I wait and wait for the right guy to notice me
I wait and wait for the right guy to call for me
I wait and wait for the right guy every day
But this guy never stays
I wait and wait for the right guy to finally see
I wait and wait for the right guy to find me
I wait and wait for the right guy I can finally love



I search


I love him and so I wait
But when he doesn’t show for our date
I go and search for him
I search for him where we first met
And where you caught me in your beautiful net
The place that held so many memories
So many memories that I don’t want to forget
I search for him where we first kissed
We had held hands in the park
Walked along the river
Then kissed as the moon rose high
The place that was sweet and held love
Held so much love that it brought tears to my eyes
I searched his house
The place that held to many memories
Both sweet and sour
Good and bad
But yet he wasn’t their still.
I call off the search
I head to my house and cry on the steps
He left me, ditched me on our 7th date
I cry into my hands till a shadow comes over me
It is him
Before I can yell he does something
He kneels down and pulls out a ring
He didn’t even have to ask
For he knew that the answer was yes
The worst day of my life became the best