Umm... can't read your poetry if it's hidden, so really it's kinda pointless in posting it up, don't cha think? On top of that, it's poetry. It's your feelings constructed in an artistic way. Why hide it? I think that's stupid. if you think your stuff needs to be hidden due to portrayal of death, go to my Collective and read Atonement or My Necrophiliac Addiction. What you wrote can't be any worse than that.

Also, a poet should NEVER, EVER have to explain or put any "notes" before the poem as it should explain itself. If it doesn't then it's not very good.