((:cry: No, that was good. *sniffle* That was cool. I like it. Very enjoyable story you have going. :D
And the Jabberwocky will need a bit of tweaking, but I think it's a good place to start. :)))


Heartless watched silently for a few moments, hovering by the door. The cold darkness that wisped off of his tall form sifted about him as he moved closer to C.C..
"He was brave," the wraith said, kneeling down in front of the woman. "I will never forget the proud look on his face when the Queen found that you were still missing. He loved you." Heartless paused then, unsure of what else to say. With a slight sigh, he stood tall once more, and went back to the door. "She will speak to you when she is ready." His sudden shift of moods was startling, though expected. He couldn't pity his victims. Not when the Queen demanded otherwise.