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Originally Posted by A-new-s_tory
They weren't made to be incomplete thoughts, just lots of descriptions. Think i got carried away with it.
It is a lot of fragments but if they weren't meant to be sentences so do I have to make them into sentences? Some parts you saying flowed together, shouldn't be capitalized, were there own separate thought, not a continuation of the line before.
I know they're fragments, not sentences, but shouldn't they still be capitalized if they stand alone? Just trying to understand, grammar was never my strong point.
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No, fragments are against grammar... They must all be complete... or incomplete, but that's a special case and style that I don't think you're quite able to catch on to just yet.
I read those parts as being the same because of how they run together. If I'm wrong, I'm wrong, and you need to correct it to make it understood that they're seperate in the poem. Don't be afraid to add more to this. It's not always over done just because it's 30-40 lines long.