06-26-2010, 06:25 PM
Holy Shit! *excuse my french*
Thank you soo much Nolori! That was soo helpful. And all those grammar and spelling mistakes, I've read this thing three times, and I never noticed it. Especially where I repeated back twice, I didn't even notice that O_O
But thank you so much! I'll be changing that on monday (I'm going to dinner soon, and tomorrow is a no computer rule by my parents) but again thank you so much.
My favourite characters are Sloane and Reagan as well, they are meant to be awesome haha xD I'm not sure how I'll make the main character likeable (to me really) but I'll find something.
I'm glad you like it, and about the second chapter, there isn't much to critique, so I'd prefer it if you critique once I have it all written down. I'll pm you if you like once I'm done with it. Though I'm curious as to what you'd say about the thing me and Ryn Gray were talking about. ^^
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