I'm going to make this short, considering it is Mene. Friendly critique time!

1. Less ellipses in Vendetta. Much less, it feels disjointed in a way, and every stanza sort of seems to wonder off into... nothing.
2. Parts such as the first stanza in Waiting have sort of haphazard punctuation going on, and it feels like there should be something there.
3. Forget needs to have the five straight sentances either reduced to being recited once, or put together. I feel it would be more powerful like this:

"His lust, his need.
Her lust,her need."

Just thought that I would put out some helpful pointers.