I usually like to get to a certain part of the story to hear audience reactions. Plus if I edited the post to continue the story I wouldn't earn any extra gold...

They knock on the door and out steps the 26 year old Thomas Warrel. He'd been taking a break from his work to make some fresh tea. They ask to stay the night. He allows them to. He always has spare bedrooms, then again his house is nice and big. He has a big workroom, 5 bedrooms, 3 living rooms, large kitchen, 4 bathrooms, a built-in two car garage, many long and winding hallways with many closets, and a decent sized basement.

They settle in for the night. Dunn sees a dark shadow in the room approach him as he lays on the bed. As he tries to get off the bed he becomes tangled in the sheets and falls down. The shadow reaches down for him as he screams...

Kaitlen hears her brother's scream and runs to his room. It takes her ahile to navigate through those hallways to get there. She arrives and turns on the lights to see no one there. The bed sheets are a tangled mess and a pillow is on the floor. She looks all around the room. She looks in the closets and under the bed but to no avail can find her brother.

Dunn wakes up, his head acheing and feeling light. His groggy eyes wander around the room. It is brightly lit. He feels different. He looks down and would scream in terror if only his mouth wasn't sewn shut...

She searches the dark house for Thomas but can't find him. She searches for over an hour through the big house, calling out for him only for silence to be the response. She has just about given up when she hears a sound coming from the kitchen. She'd been throught there before but this time the light was on and something was moving about inside there. She enters the kitchen and her eyes widen at the strange site...