
01-26-2012, 05:35 PM
How unfortunate that you had to go through such a thing. I enjoyed the writing you put your feelings into though. The only miss in it is see is you said month instead of months when you were speaking in a plural manner. Overall thought he poem evoked emotion because I believe that most all of us have been in a relationship that went bad and took us by complete suprise I hope you keep up the good writing and move forward in life and maybe find a muse to bring out happier writings.
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