so im writing a poem for a girl i dont think its the best but its the effort that counts right :) anyway this is what i have so far....(enjoy and try to help me out please)

The first time i saw you i thought you looked pretty, you where fun and playful like a new born kitty but then the next second you where quite bossy.

after awhile you seemed to get better so i wrote this letter. I am thinking of you as the day goes by, you smile at everything and as spring approaches i hope something new will begin.

now its been some time, I reckon you'll get freaked out by this trying to seek who sent this to you i know I probably wont see you after this year has ended but this poem was not intended, as I don't think it would make any difference, i will hopefully see you around.

love from
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i know its bad.... i don't really read books or anything so please help me out
thank you