02-06-2013, 06:51 PM
Many apologies for taking so long to get back on here, everyone, things got a bit hectic during the last few days of my visit, and the train ride has, for the most part, been through a large winter storm system, so internet connections have been spotty at best. However, things are going much smoother now and since we are nearing Moscow, my computer is working fully again.
Now, Kilia, your profile looks better, though I would like a bit more explanation on the heirloom. You have to remember it is a key object for the entire RP. Other than protection, why did the Ancestor go through so much trouble (getting the stones, herbs and the like, then weaving it, blessing it, ect.) to make the bracelet? Did she perhaps have a vision that the child would need it? Did she fear the white man would be a danger to her daughter's life? Was the daughter destined to commune with spirits? There are many things you could add to give it a unique significance, which is what we are going for in this. Other than that bit, though, I would say the profile is fine.
Pap-chan, I like this much better for the heirloom, thank you for working on it and tolerating my scrutiny on this.
Kina, I'll put this up for now, but keep in mind what we talked about last time, ne? If you think of how to change things, let me know and I can move things around on the profile.
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