Aww, that's so sweet, thank you! It really means a lot to me.

Brevity is something I tend to struggle with - I either go on too long or not long enough - so it's nice to hear that the balance I struck works!
And there, I finally remembered to upload my latest poem! I have mixed feelings about it. Some of the words stand out to me as not being ideal choices, but I can't think of a good solution. Could just be that I've never liked the word "lover."

The word was just stuck in my head that night due the the poem epigraph in
The Great Gatsby, "Then Wear the Gold Hat"
Quote:
Then wear the gold hat, if that will move her;
If you can bounce high, bounce for her too,
Till she cry “Lover, gold-hatted, high-bouncing lover,
I must have you!”
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