Hello there Gwena! I like the idea of the outfit you have right now.

I see you've been working on the spider and spider webbing on the pants. I would personally first work on the shading of the pants. Take off the webs and spider for now and shade the thing first. Then add back the spider and the webs after that is done. The idea of the pants is very cute! People would definitely be interesting in spider web pants. But notice how the menewsha palettes all use 5-6 shades. So I would first concentrate on the pants first and look at menewsha pants that have already been made for reference on shading. Then add the spider and webs back on :) Keep up the good work!