Right, let's see if I can get a response posted today!!
I'm just looking at this stuff as it, not zooming in on any of it.
The neckline seems a bit rigid/tall/too round on this. Looks like it needs squashing down a little bit to soften it up. The folds/shading seem a bit obvious, seems to be a big jump between the light and dark areas. The light circle beneath the girl's boobs especially confuses me a bit because I don't know why it's there.
I very much like the overall shape of this though
This is very cute and I like it a lot. Can't really comment on the shading as this kind of palette can hide a multitude of sins. ><
Quite nice, I think the belt/dark band, could maybe benefit from being a pixel more curved. There's a lot of it that's a straight line. The black part is very dark/flat. The folds don't look quite right, but I couldn't say why.
Hmm, is this the black/white dress with a longer skirt tacked on, it's what it looks like.
. The drape/folds don't marry up at all.
The bottom one looks a lot older, the shading looks far less knowledgable. The dots look rather hectic too, there's too many really.
Hmm, not sure how helpful any of that's going to be!