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Old 06-06-2008, 09:21 PM

So I like writing, recently I've been writing a story about a 17 year old who gets pregnant. Now this isn't something like she has to raise the kid on her own. She has her boyfriend (who is the father) and her boyfriends family. She got kicked out of her house because she wouldn't get an abortion, so she went and moved into her boyfriends house. At her boyfriends house she finds comfort and a family who wants to help her in her pregnancy. She's going to keep the baby. I've been stuck on this paragraph:

At home I went and took a nap. I hadn’t been sleeping well for the past few days. As I slept I dreamed of nothing other than falling off of cliffs. I had been having a lot of these dreams of me dying. I didn’t even tell anyone. I mean what was I suppose to say? ‘Ohm, hello unnamed doctor, I’ve been having a lot of these dreams in which I die. Is that normal?’ Yeah I’m just waiting for that to happen.

Its told first person from the view of the pregnant girl. What do you think I should do from here? I can't really figure it out.

Pregnant girl: Sally, Her boyfriend (and father of the baby): Joe, BF's mother: Angie, BF's father: Ray.

Please can you help me?