Uummmmm, I have to say I was expecting something a little longer but I've read short ones like this, so not to worry this is pretty good. Will you continue this story? I would really like to find out who the guy is and wonder what hanna was up to. I really don't have any critique except that when you write the story could it be possibly longer? I'm not trying to offend you but could you please make it longer the next time you write? Thanks!!!!