12-15-2008, 04:55 AM
I think it looks quite good so far. I would suggest the following things, however:
1. Make some of the lines identifying each rose petal a little bit more defined. For the most part, this isn't a problem, but at some points, the petals start to blend into each other. I also suggest you smooth out the texture. Right now the rose looks almost furry, while it needs to look smooth. Use the blur tool, or even paint over it again with a soft brush?
Some more contrast in the stem would help. Right now it doesn't look up to the same standard as the rose. Crisper edges would help it. and maybe instead of a solid blue background, a gradient starting at the top, from a slightly dark blue, to a lighter blue?
Overall, very nice. It's really coming along. I've always thought drawing roses was a real pain D8;
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