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EirianHikari
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Old 05-20-2012, 07:24 AM

I wasn't really trying to make her look like a ghost though, I just kind thought the way she jumped out at lance was kind of ghost like. But she's not suppose to be a ghost. I can rewrite the description if need be, it sounded clear in my head when I wrote it, but sometimes how it sounds in my head, and how it sounds when written don't line up.

---------- Post added 05-20-2012 at 03:36 AM ----------

I just decided to resubmit just in case the wording would still be an issue.

[/COLOR]MApril Fools Contest
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Eiri was so bored, she could hardly stand it, but she got an idea! Knowing it was Mapril Fools........and remembering that Lance didn't like Santa Clause, Eiri when to work. She pulled all the Christmas stuff she could and dressed herself up. When Eiri saw Lance leave, she jumped out suddenly from behind a bush, In a very........Christmasy leap. Lance jumped back startled, then Eiri reveled herself, light heartedly apologizing for her little prank.

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