that's why I said righteously ooc. like, they have a reason to be, but it's not how you usually write them. sounds like you need to figure out just what about that tournament makes her really bossy. does she win? or maybe he takes to bossing people for they're own good, you know, to keep them alive. If she's got friends in it that is.

uooo, *shivers* creepy creepy creepy. My own writing is giving me the chills. After writing the final scene, I don't think I want to edit this anymore! T.T omg, story. That ending, omg, that evil character. I'm...a...going to go eat dinner now I think. I wanna take a shower to wash the creepiness away, but I'll just indulge in ice cream instead.
bye.