Thanks for the fun challange! I wasn't sure if you'd accept the changs to the exact subject, but I'm glad you liked it! Yeh, hockey was a tough one, but the fishnets seemed to fit with me. Well, have anything more for me? Or maybe, you can check out my Story I'm writing. "To Be A Knight" just got it's 2nd chapter, yay! I'll also be putting up my "Save Grargoth!" Story here, maybe open it up as a game here as well as on City of IF. If you like writing, you should check it out! cityofif.com is a great place for writers looking tot challange themselves!